Super God: Holy Spirit Puni, I Am the Truth!

There is basically a common problem in novels about people who travel through time and become other beings or who act as characters! The protagonist's character will change into that character over time, just like your novel and the novel where Versatile Mage plays the role of the Rock King. The protagonist is not Pony from the Seer, and he has not experienced everything that he has experienced. How could his character be the same? Take an ordinary person as an example. If a person travels to a novel world that he likes and acquires a system or other powerful abilities, even if he does not open a harem, he will at least pursue one or several characters of the opposite sex that he likes. It doesn't matter if you don't pursue the opposite sex, then live the life you like, but the protagonist of your novel is basically no different from Pony in character now. So in the end, is your protagonist Pony? Or is he a person from the anime world who has traveled from his own world? If you want to write Puni, then you might as well change the title and the content of the first episode from "The traveler becomes Puni" to "Puni traveled to the super-god universe"

It's okay, but it doesn't show that Pony's divinity is too emotional and cares too much about Kesha and the others.

I listened to the book one after another without thinking about the feeling of listening to the book later. Always add ellipses in the middle of words

There are too many scenes. The Three Kings Uprising doesn't need the protagonist to show off his presence at all. He says that he wants to live and die, but at the same time he interferes everywhere, and even blackmails Ruoning. He is a loyal supporter of Kesha, but he is not convinced by Angel Yan. The biggest poisonous point is that Kesha made a vow out of gratitude. A king like Kesha would not be so casual. Participating in everything will only push Puni down. Puni's mentality will not be too biased towards any party. It is more inclined to encourage the warriors fighting for justice and lead them in the direction of progress. This Pony is like a powerful upstart

Is water so powerful?

Personally, I feel that Liang Bing is the most disgusting. He said it was for the sake of angels, but at the same time he led demons to kill angels wantonly, just for the ideals of the Super Seminary. In the end, he directly betrayed his own race. You must know that Kesha locked her up, and it was impossible to lock her up permanently. As long as she admitted her mistake, she might be able to come out. In the end, she directly rebelled and let her subordinates kill angels. Earth also said that she liked the earth, but at the same time, the demons under her subordinates slaughtered China at will.

I can't understand it, the writing is a bit messy, 🙄The creativity is quite good

Although I already knew the ending, it was too soon. When he wrote about Kesha's oath, I knew the book was bad.

I don't feel very good after reading the article so far.

It's too watery. You're too watery.