The First Interstellar Mecha Warrior

I really like the style of this book. Although it is a female-channeled novel, it suits my taste. I have read hundreds of novels. The style of this book is quite graceful, and Momo's writing style is also very delicate. Details determine success or failure. This is your advantage. However, I feel that the fighting scenes should be more vivid. , More powerful, although I feel that Momo should be a quieter girl, but after all, it is a mecha style, so it should be a little harder. It also needs to add a bit more technological sense to the mecha, and the world view of the interstellar style. The weapons of the mecha can be more sci-fi, and use more energy weapons and auxiliary equipment. In addition, the portrayal of the protagonist should also be emphasized and highlighted, and try not to appear like a passer-by. The protagonist is the core of a book. No matter what kind of plot it is, the protagonist should shine a little to make it clear at a glance. Also, pay attention to describing the mechas of the protagonist group and the mechas that appear later. Now I feel that all the mechas that have appeared are a little blurry, but there are rough outlines. I know the color, weapons, etc. Of each mecha, but I feel that it has shortcomings and edges. You can describe the head structure of the mecha, such as whether the eye armor is round or Y-shaped, X-shaped, straight, etc. In the picture below, there are pictures of round and X-shaped eye armor. Overall, this book is good😑. Pay a little attention to the suggestions given below. If you gain something, I believe this book will be better written. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง The heavy fog has cleared, and the moon is finally shining. I have read about 500 novels, and this is the second long book review I have ever posted. I wonder if I am moved~💩

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What do you call the author? Should I call her Momo or Gu Gu? (Glancing at your pen name) Then let's call you Momo first. Momo must give yourself confidence. This interstellar novel is very suitable for me. You must believe in yourself! I read a comment at the beginning (Chapter 1 about the issue of spending the 200,000 yuan left by Qing'an's father for a lifetime), Momo, you are indeed not very good at mathematics [grimace]. Okay, let's get down to business and talk about this book. In general, this book is not as exciting as other books in this genre in terms of slaps in the face and vests, but it does suit my taste in this regard. It's not very refreshing (compared to the objective evaluation of other articles and does not represent a personal evaluation), but it is still quite complete in terms of plot logic. Generally speaking, this is how I feel. I don't know what others think of me, and I won't comment. There will always be some people who will refute you, so just do what you think is the best. I'm looking forward to the next journey of Qing'an and his friends. Hope the future is promising. Just say it in a low voice: I actually really want Momo's QQ list position)

I particularly like the large text. I finished reading it in one day. I have always liked this kind of interstellar literature. So please update soon.

Elaine is going to turn into a little black lotus. Is it because of the chef that Elaine is not mentally well these days?

I'm so angry that I can't vent my anger. Momo just make do with it.

The author has not updated for several days ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू )

The heroine is so silly and sweet, she talks about everything. I didn't think about the consequences.

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It feels a bit illogical for Ivan to suddenly recognize a female protagonist who is four years younger than him as his boss. Before that, he had called the female protagonist Xiao Douding, and the female protagonist's current strength is not high. Generally, no one would recognize someone whose age and strength are not as good as his own!