The Boss of Fast Travel Took the Script of Scumbag

In fact, I feel that Lin Mo loved the original owner very much. Otherwise, he would not have given the money he earned from his hard-working part-time job to the original owner. Moreover, when he learned that he was holding back, he took medicine and committed suicide. It seems that the original owner is really cruel.

By the way, is Xihe's mission in coming to this world to stop the development of the original plot? If it feels like this, it is actually quite easy to stop it. After all, she herself is the protagonist in the story. It must be very simple to change the plot.

To be honest, the first interface of this article is really amazing and beautiful. From now on... It becomes more and more incomprehensible. The male protagonist suddenly falls in love with the female protagonist. I don't know whether the heroine's mission has been completed or not, and I don't know what's going on. She looks inconsistent and inexplicable. Have you been censored?

Does the male protagonist like the original female protagonist? The female protagonist likes one person every time she goes to the world without knowing that the male protagonist is the same person?

It feels uncomfortable to look at me He scolded the heroine, called her ugly, and knocked over the things she gave her, but the heroine acted like a licking dog and didn't care. Damn it, the hero made me feel like a freeloader. And the heroine didn't hiccup when someone fucked her like this? (Even if you are doing a task, why can't you abuse it?) I really licked everything until I lost everything. I was really looking forward to it, but you told me that it was just a few dozen words and passed by. Hahahaha, I am very disappointed with this. This dimension makes me feel like the overbearing president who once went viral all over the Internet. He tortured the female protagonist thousands of times and treated the male protagonist like his first love. I really can't stand it anymore.

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I feel that the relationship between Gouzi and Xihe is very interesting. It is impossible to be like this without certain feelings. After all, who would fight and make trouble with a strange person? Of course, this may be related to Xihe's character.

Shuang Jie Dang said that after watching the first world, it was really amazing, and then another world opened up, which was really unacceptable. I was so damn close to having a myocardial infarction. Lin Mo was so good and so miserable, why should he be like this? I really stopped watching the first world, but it was well written! ! ! !

In the small world of Tian Guan Blessing, I personally feel that the character portrayal is not delicate enough. For example, as a powerful minister with military power, Gu Qingchen was tricked by the heroine into saying "so what if you rebelled" at the door of the royal study. According to my understanding, if a person talks about rebellion, he must be acting extremely arrogantly and without any regard for imperial power. Only people with a clear intention to rebel would say such things. But in a later chapter, the author said that Gu Qingchen had no intention of rebellion at that time, so why did he say that "rebellion so what" at the beginning? Speaking of the ancient background means killing the nine tribes. If he didn't want to rebel, he would definitely not say it. (I guess the author may want to describe a powerful minister who does not take the imperial power seriously. But in terms of characterization, even if a powerful minister in the ancient background wanted to rebel, he would definitely say "so what if you rebel", not to mention that he had no intention of rebelling at the time, let alone said this sentence) The above is a flaw in the characterization of Gu Qingchen The second characterization issue is that of Zhen Guogong If the Gu family had no intention of rebellion, then why did Duke Zhen Guo say: The tiger talisman can be handed over, but the princess and the Gu family cannot afford it. If the king asks the minister to die, the minister must die. What's more, it's Princess Shang. No matter how disgusted she is, she still has to thank the Lord for his kindness. (This is not the mentality between a monarch and his ministers. If the ministers do not want to rebel, they cannot talk to the emperor with this attitude) If the Gu family has the intention to rebel, then it is normal behavior for the princess to dispel the emperor's fear, keep silent about handing over military power, and firmly hold the power in her own hands. Personal suggestion: The author should try to figure out the status of the plot characters in the small world, including the cultural background of the small world, so as to create a full-fledged character image. In the plot, each character has his own perspective and thoughts on the world. Every line should start from the character himself and consider what the person with this identity should say. Only in this way can a flesh-and-blood character be created. Finally, the author worked hard to write the article. The above are some of my personal opinions. If you think what I said is wrong, we can discuss it. There is no malice.

As far as the fourth plane is concerned, isn't the heroine a scumbag? This is too licking the dog. If the male protagonist gets better, that's all. 🙃🙃The fifth outside has just started. Just say that I want to avenge the male protagonist and feel sorry for him. . . She didn't like him at all, at the beginning. I can understand the heroine taking revenge for the hero. But I felt like I fell in love with him so much right away. Regardless of the matter or the person, the author's writing style is still very good. I like the first one, but I haven't read the second one yet. Hope you don't disappoint me. 😘😘