
Quick Travel: the Boss Tear Cannon Fodder Script
by Chujinmian
About This Novel
Yan Ling is lazy, strong, and doesn't like to suffer losses. One day she started to do missions quickly, and the bug makers began to tremble... Yan Ling: It's a beautiful idea, but a bit stupid. Later, the eldest sister cried: "I was wrong. If I don't marry for you, why don't I just regret the marriage?" Yan Ling: It's too late* Yan Ling looked at the second-rate man who was whistling at him, and set a rule: If you want to get married, you must first separate the family, go to work, and make money. If you don't wait for me to lie down, you will be finished! In the end, the heroine, the village beauty, looked at the business empire and the loyal man who had developed in Yan Ling's hands for some time, and shouted unwillingly: Isn't she the one who was reborn? *[The stepmother in the control group in the article "The Stepmother of the Ages" has a praise and praise system. She strives to be a good stepmother, and can exchange generous materials for receiving praise. However, after a while of hard work, the heroine of the stepmother is confused: "Obviously I have the system, why can you still live so well?!" Yan Ling: There is no way, the child is sensible, you are a bitch, give your mother a glass of water. There is an old mother who was "paralyzed in bed" at the age of twenty. Goudan: Mom, drink water. [With a male protagonist]
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Official(301)Scraped 11d ago
I am writing very seriously, I hope everyone will read it!
First of all, I like the first two small worlds of this novel very much, so I have been following it. The previous ones were very enjoyable, but why is this small world inexplicably afraid of the contrast between human beings and society? Why didn't Little World say before that we were afraid that people and society would be too different? This small world is really poorly written. The male protagonist has three of the best sisters-in-law. Even though there are many of them, his family has taken over them all. This is too fast. It is as if the whole village is full of bad people, and the people in this village are indeed not very good. I haven't seen anyone who can clearly distinguish right from wrong and has three correct views. They all help the male protagonist's family to marry the female protagonist, who is from the city. The female protagonist comes to the countryside and her parents are not dead. Why does she fall into trouble and insist on letting a girl marry into their family? [If it is a rule in the village (necessary for the plot), they are all from the same village, and both parents recognize it, but not the heroine, it really feels too shameless], the author's description makes me feel that the people in the whole village are very bad, (uneducated They are not bad people, but this village reminds me of a woman who was kidnapped and trafficked in the ravine. The whole village helped to monitor her and prevent her from escaping.) It is no different from the male protagonist's sisters-in-law. In this situation where everyone in the village is (bad), how good can the male protagonist be? There is no need to forcibly highlight the male protagonist's level. There is no need to write everyone so bad that no one can distinguish right from wrong. Really, my head hurts after watching this small world. Yesterday I was so angry that I was so angry that I wrote cool articles. If you wear fast clothes with gold fingers or something, then write boldly. The heroine in the last world was so awesome that she could do everything. I loved it to death. But the contrast in this world is really good. I hope you can see it. This small world is really sad. Please continue to maintain the pattern of the first two small worlds. I really love your articles (except this small world😻)❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
not bad
The heroine's character is one of revenge and cleverness, but when I clicked in, I found that the proportion of romance was higher than I expected. After a second look, it was still 1v1. I suggest you mark the author's profile. When I looked at the profile, I thought there was no cp or that the male protagonist in each world is different.
nice
This Wei Mian story is so interesting, could you please write more about it? I just saw that the male and female protagonists are so sweet, and I can't bear to end it. I also want to see them give birth to a baby.
ʕ•̫͡•ʕ*̫͡Goodʕ•͓͡•ʔ-̫͡Look atʕ•̫͡•ʔ*̫͡*
I have been reading on QQ for almost eighty or nine years. I have never written a review in the book club. I have read thousands and hundreds of books over the years. The characterization of this book. The level of detail is definitely in the top 10 in my mind. This is the first impulse to write a book friend circle for a book. Come on, Miss Author. Hope you can get better and better. Love you😽
When will the update be released?
It's 2023. It's been three years since masks were released. Are you really planning to release a new update to celebrate such a joyful day?
Check in
Are you good at writing period stories? There are so many short stories but the frequency of period stories is too high. This is the third one I have added. I don't mean to say bad. I think I can write more about other things, such as fairy tales, interstellar, apocalypse, heavenly masters, cultivating immortals, the Republic of China, ancient Chinese novels, female queens, unlimited streaming, period stories and entertainment industry variety shows. I feel that the frequency is a bit high. Although the stories are different, if you read it as a fast time traveler, you will feel a little tired. Besides, This kind of novel about non-growth heroines should expand on other dimensions. The dangerous interstellar space and the apocalypse are very good materials. There are also relatively novel (personal feelings) fairy tales, Snow White and Cinderella, the daughter of the sea. I feel that they are both good at writing, and the writing style is good, which is really to my taste, so writing so much is considered a small selfishness of mine. These are the planes I prefer to read, and I hope to expand them when the time comes!
Personality
What kind of character is the heroine? Sometimes he talks about lying down, sometimes he likes money, sometimes he likes food, but he can't stand up, so it's very embarrassing. I also have to do tasks. The first world is okay, and then I become less active. The second world I don't understand.
Hey, let's clear things up a little bit. 1. The heroine is supposed to be a boss, but due to the plot and the historical background, it feels inconsistent with the setting. For example, some things that can be avoided in advance are not avoided, and it is said to be the limitation of the historical background, so readers who like the heroine novel can quit. 2. At first glance, there is nothing wrong with the plot, but upon closer inspection, you will find that it is full of loopholes, and there is an obvious phenomenon of supporting characters' intelligence being reduced. 3. Some friends who are picky about reading the article can also withdraw. There are at least five lines and one typo in the article. I don't know why some readers pointed it out but haven't changed it yet. Is the chapter blocked? Then let me talk about my thoughts. The author's writing style is okay, but I can see that it is still very raw. I hope that the next book will be better. If you are a book lover, you can take a look. (If the author or readers are not satisfied with my evaluation, you are welcome to delete the comment directly. There is no need to say whether you like it or not, or you can express your different views from mine in a civilized and polite manner, and refuse to be angry. Everyone is responsible, thank you)
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Official(301)Scraped 11d ago
I am writing very seriously, I hope everyone will read it!
First of all, I like the first two small worlds of this novel very much, so I have been following it. The previous ones were very enjoyable, but why is this small world inexplicably afraid of the contrast between human beings and society? Why didn't Little World say before that we were afraid that people and society would be too different? This small world is really poorly written. The male protagonist has three of the best sisters-in-law. Even though there are many of them, his family has taken over them all. This is too fast. It is as if the whole village is full of bad people, and the people in this village are indeed not very good. I haven't seen anyone who can clearly distinguish right from wrong and has three correct views. They all help the male protagonist's family to marry the female protagonist, who is from the city. The female protagonist comes to the countryside and her parents are not dead. Why does she fall into trouble and insist on letting a girl marry into their family? [If it is a rule in the village (necessary for the plot), they are all from the same village, and both parents recognize it, but not the heroine, it really feels too shameless], the author's description makes me feel that the people in the whole village are very bad, (uneducated They are not bad people, but this village reminds me of a woman who was kidnapped and trafficked in the ravine. The whole village helped to monitor her and prevent her from escaping.) It is no different from the male protagonist's sisters-in-law. In this situation where everyone in the village is (bad), how good can the male protagonist be? There is no need to forcibly highlight the male protagonist's level. There is no need to write everyone so bad that no one can distinguish right from wrong. Really, my head hurts after watching this small world. Yesterday I was so angry that I was so angry that I wrote cool articles. If you wear fast clothes with gold fingers or something, then write boldly. The heroine in the last world was so awesome that she could do everything. I loved it to death. But the contrast in this world is really good. I hope you can see it. This small world is really sad. Please continue to maintain the pattern of the first two small worlds. I really love your articles (except this small world😻)❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
not bad
The heroine's character is one of revenge and cleverness, but when I clicked in, I found that the proportion of romance was higher than I expected. After a second look, it was still 1v1. I suggest you mark the author's profile. When I looked at the profile, I thought there was no cp or that the male protagonist in each world is different.
nice
This Wei Mian story is so interesting, could you please write more about it? I just saw that the male and female protagonists are so sweet, and I can't bear to end it. I also want to see them give birth to a baby.
ʕ•̫͡•ʕ*̫͡Goodʕ•͓͡•ʔ-̫͡Look atʕ•̫͡•ʔ*̫͡*
I have been reading on QQ for almost eighty or nine years. I have never written a review in the book club. I have read thousands and hundreds of books over the years. The characterization of this book. The level of detail is definitely in the top 10 in my mind. This is the first impulse to write a book friend circle for a book. Come on, Miss Author. Hope you can get better and better. Love you😽
When will the update be released?
It's 2023. It's been three years since masks were released. Are you really planning to release a new update to celebrate such a joyful day?
Check in
Are you good at writing period stories? There are so many short stories but the frequency of period stories is too high. This is the third one I have added. I don't mean to say bad. I think I can write more about other things, such as fairy tales, interstellar, apocalypse, heavenly masters, cultivating immortals, the Republic of China, ancient Chinese novels, female queens, unlimited streaming, period stories and entertainment industry variety shows. I feel that the frequency is a bit high. Although the stories are different, if you read it as a fast time traveler, you will feel a little tired. Besides, This kind of novel about non-growth heroines should expand on other dimensions. The dangerous interstellar space and the apocalypse are very good materials. There are also relatively novel (personal feelings) fairy tales, Snow White and Cinderella, the daughter of the sea. I feel that they are both good at writing, and the writing style is good, which is really to my taste, so writing so much is considered a small selfishness of mine. These are the planes I prefer to read, and I hope to expand them when the time comes!
Personality
What kind of character is the heroine? Sometimes he talks about lying down, sometimes he likes money, sometimes he likes food, but he can't stand up, so it's very embarrassing. I also have to do tasks. The first world is okay, and then I become less active. The second world I don't understand.
Hey, let's clear things up a little bit. 1. The heroine is supposed to be a boss, but due to the plot and the historical background, it feels inconsistent with the setting. For example, some things that can be avoided in advance are not avoided, and it is said to be the limitation of the historical background, so readers who like the heroine novel can quit. 2. At first glance, there is nothing wrong with the plot, but upon closer inspection, you will find that it is full of loopholes, and there is an obvious phenomenon of supporting characters' intelligence being reduced. 3. Some friends who are picky about reading the article can also withdraw. There are at least five lines and one typo in the article. I don't know why some readers pointed it out but haven't changed it yet. Is the chapter blocked? Then let me talk about my thoughts. The author's writing style is okay, but I can see that it is still very raw. I hope that the next book will be better. If you are a book lover, you can take a look. (If the author or readers are not satisfied with my evaluation, you are welcome to delete the comment directly. There is no need to say whether you like it or not, or you can express your different views from mine in a civilized and polite manner, and refuse to be angry. Everyone is responsible, thank you)












