Modify the Plot Starting from Douluo
About This Novel
As long as the plot is rewritten, he can become stronger. Li Ang said, this is easy to do! Ever since, at the door of Notting Junior Soul Master Academy, the kind-faced, elegant and easy-going Li Ang looked at Tang San in front of him with a sincere expression: "Wow, that's amazing, young man, I can tell at a glance that you are a unique soul master genius. If there is One day I ask you to open up the Ren and Du channels, but you still don't fly to the sky. As the saying goes, if I don't go to hell, who will go to hell... Young man, this self-created soul skill, Sunflower Technique, is very suitable for you. I think you and I are destined, how about selling it to you with a copper soul coin? " Tang San:? ? ?
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Official(46)Scraped 20d ago
Forcibly exaggerate
I don't know how far Tang Hao's strength was exaggerated, and he was covered in injuries and hidden injuries. Then, after the spirit power dropped to 89 when the bombing ring could not easily be used, a dozen Contras who could fight against the title were besieged and ran away with Tang San. What is it? Is Tang Hao probably going crazy? Or is the protagonist too useless? And why not kill Yu Xiaogang directly? Wouldn't this be a bigger change? Is it fun to be restricted everywhere?
nice. . . . . . . . . . . .
It seems okay, I hate Tang San, Dai Mubai and the others.
What Boyi
All I can say is Boyi, is Tang Hao your biological father? So powerful? If I weren't afraid that one star would be stuck, I would give you one star directly.
It's okay. I can understand the plot clearly and know what I want to write. I think the control of the content is relatively good. However, the choice of this martial spirit is not very comfortable. The name Black Beast gives people a feeling of persuading people to quit. It doesn't need to spend more, but it must be at least a normal martial spirit. Even a white snake sounds better than a black beast. The name Black Beast The characters give people a feeling of appearance plus species. Although the white snake is the same, at least the species is clear. Beasts are too broad to display, including tigers, leopards, jackals, and wolves. Although it is clearly stated to be something similar to a wolf, change the black characters to say Night Beast, for example, so that the quality is not too low. It feels a little uncomfortable to look at the martial spirit, but the content is still very comfortable to read.
After watching 25% of the movie, it is not worth recommending. The main reason is that the three views are incorrect. The protagonist feels that "Tang San is yellow, black, and villain, and the enemy is mentally retarded." The plot idea is pretty good, but the writing style and perspective are very crooked.
It's really good. I loved this book.
Although I am a free prostitute, I still like you
Highly recommend this book
No one wants the awesome soul bone of the Eight Spider Spears? I thought it would be given to Ning Rongrong, but Tang San didn't absorb it at level 30 in advance.
After reading it, I can only say that many parts of the article are rubbish and obviously do not make sense. First of all, this affects the plot. The two eyes of ice and fire are considered one-tenth. The counterattack point of the seven monsters and the training of ice and fire. Ah Yin speeds up the resurrection and Dugu Bo, the help in the middle and late stages of the title. Secondly, how is it possible for someone to become the city leader in Notting City at the beginning? It's really stupid. The second time you commit stupidity, you should find someone else. For example, that was Zhu Zhuqing in that period. At that time, there was a titled teacher who gave her resource skills and immortal grass. Wouldn't it be better? Doubo's elixirs were all released. So it would be no problem to use your own power to get a pistol AK for Qibao Glazed Sect. Then what's the matter with Xiao Zha San?
This is a high-end operation with plug-ins, familiar plot and IQ online!
There are a lot of women, but it's not a big problem. The persona is just like an LSP, much better than some licking dogs. She has a lot to look forward to, she has strength and good looks, and she's familiar with the general situation of the characters. How can she become a licking dog?
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Community(0)
Official(46)Scraped 20d ago
Forcibly exaggerate
I don't know how far Tang Hao's strength was exaggerated, and he was covered in injuries and hidden injuries. Then, after the spirit power dropped to 89 when the bombing ring could not easily be used, a dozen Contras who could fight against the title were besieged and ran away with Tang San. What is it? Is Tang Hao probably going crazy? Or is the protagonist too useless? And why not kill Yu Xiaogang directly? Wouldn't this be a bigger change? Is it fun to be restricted everywhere?
nice. . . . . . . . . . . .
It seems okay, I hate Tang San, Dai Mubai and the others.
What Boyi
All I can say is Boyi, is Tang Hao your biological father? So powerful? If I weren't afraid that one star would be stuck, I would give you one star directly.
It's okay. I can understand the plot clearly and know what I want to write. I think the control of the content is relatively good. However, the choice of this martial spirit is not very comfortable. The name Black Beast gives people a feeling of persuading people to quit. It doesn't need to spend more, but it must be at least a normal martial spirit. Even a white snake sounds better than a black beast. The name Black Beast The characters give people a feeling of appearance plus species. Although the white snake is the same, at least the species is clear. Beasts are too broad to display, including tigers, leopards, jackals, and wolves. Although it is clearly stated to be something similar to a wolf, change the black characters to say Night Beast, for example, so that the quality is not too low. It feels a little uncomfortable to look at the martial spirit, but the content is still very comfortable to read.
After watching 25% of the movie, it is not worth recommending. The main reason is that the three views are incorrect. The protagonist feels that "Tang San is yellow, black, and villain, and the enemy is mentally retarded." The plot idea is pretty good, but the writing style and perspective are very crooked.
It's really good. I loved this book.
Although I am a free prostitute, I still like you
Highly recommend this book
No one wants the awesome soul bone of the Eight Spider Spears? I thought it would be given to Ning Rongrong, but Tang San didn't absorb it at level 30 in advance.
After reading it, I can only say that many parts of the article are rubbish and obviously do not make sense. First of all, this affects the plot. The two eyes of ice and fire are considered one-tenth. The counterattack point of the seven monsters and the training of ice and fire. Ah Yin speeds up the resurrection and Dugu Bo, the help in the middle and late stages of the title. Secondly, how is it possible for someone to become the city leader in Notting City at the beginning? It's really stupid. The second time you commit stupidity, you should find someone else. For example, that was Zhu Zhuqing in that period. At that time, there was a titled teacher who gave her resource skills and immortal grass. Wouldn't it be better? Doubo's elixirs were all released. So it would be no problem to use your own power to get a pistol AK for Qibao Glazed Sect. Then what's the matter with Xiao Zha San?
This is a high-end operation with plug-ins, familiar plot and IQ online!
There are a lot of women, but it's not a big problem. The persona is just like an LSP, much better than some licking dogs. She has a lot to look forward to, she has strength and good looks, and she's familiar with the general situation of the characters. How can she become a licking dog?
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