Restaurants Connect All Worlds? is it Reasonable for Me to Earn One Billion?

Overall, it's okay, but can you please stop writing about the heroine's relatives? Are they just top-notch relatives? Do you have to spend a good life with people like this? This kind of relative is so disgusting. Or it's the heroine's drag. The heroine has to risk death to fight in aliens for them, and her brothers are clearly settling the score. What kind of relatives are worthy of the heroine risking her life again and again? It's all a drain on the heroine. Can't the heroine take risks for herself so that she can have higher achievements in the future, become immortal, etc.? I have to write about a bunch of relatives and friends...

Anyway, I like the article. The author's writing is not bad, but there are some flaws (personal opinion). Our main plot is to open a restaurant to cook and collect ingredients. It doesn't matter if you are in love, but can you describe less about those people's love for the heroine? It's not that I don't write it, but to reduce it a little. Sometimes I really feel that the atmosphere is not suitable. Even if the heroine is not sensitive to this aspect, she cannot be so sweet. (If you think I have feudal thoughts It's okay) It's not that my feudal thoughts are true. There is still a distance between men and women. When there is a protection crisis, the distance is not special. In general, it is better to keep spreading. Feeding water is not appropriate. When the heroine reacts, she should not say no, I will do it myself, or refuse. Why does the heroine think that it is okay and embarrassed when she sees others? She also thinks it is okay. He is also a child, and people can't be that nervous. Seventeen and fourteen are children, and adults are children, right? This is no longer a matter of big-heartedness, it feels like the thinking is poisonous (I'm sorry for my harsh words). It's okay to be ambiguous, but there must be some logic. I remember the heroine correctly, she is 23. No matter what, that one is older than the heroine, I have never seen a child older than myself. Also, Ares's control is a bit too broad. He has no wages, so he is a worker, and he relies on working for food. He has money from the distant guests, and he must be working too. Ares can't stand others every day, and thinks he is a bad person. He also talks to him in a pua way. After all, he is the boss, and the heroine is the boss? Or is he the male protagonist? Moreover, when the male protagonist was fighting earlier, he and the female protagonist were flirting with each other. Isn't that inappropriate? This place, this time. Is it possible for the author to make major changes? Even if he doesn't change it, the next question is whether it can stop being like this again.

The daily limited quantity needs to be sold until the Year of the Monkey and the Horse Month to earn 1 billion. One copy is 68. Even if you sell 100 copies a day, you will not earn 2.5 Million all year round. How to make a billion. There are also too many words to describe food and taste. Some of them don't need to be so detailed. It feels like I am trying to make up the number of words. Although it is described as delicious, I always skip it when describing food. They are all described in the same way, which is touching, and very delicious!

Deng Deng Deng, look at the dried green pepper scrambled eggs I made myself, and the quick-frozen soup dumplings I steamed at noon.

Overall, it's okay. I don't really read this kind of novel where different stories happen in the same place most of the time. The subject matter is quite novel to me, but it is too wordy, and some things that have been said are repeated over and over again. For example, if several people eat the same dish, they will describe it several times, focusing on the ingredients and taste. For example, when new customers came in, some thought it was expensive and left, while others thought it was delicious and stayed. We talked about this several times. There are also diners who will explain their family situation again when they show up later to explain why they come to eat, such as the person opposite who is drooling with greed every day, such as parents who do not let their children eat outside because of hygiene and safety, such as guests who come to buy porridge for medical treatment and are reluctant to buy other dishes, such as seafood allergies and high school students. And the types of frequent visitors we focus on are very repetitive. For example, the uncles and aunts who control their eating are the same type. The aunts taking care of children are the same type as the parents taking care of the children. A man and a woman whose elders are sick are the same type. For example, a workaholic who works overtime and has a bad stomach is the same type as a male and female friend who works overtime. (My generalization is rather confusing, because I listen to books a lot and am a bit distracted, so I don't remember people's names very well) After reading it over and over again, I found it to be quite verbose and fluent, and I personally felt that the characters of Yuan Ke were a bit unlikable. Maybe because the small team of Interstellar is more capable, Yuan Ke seemed a bit too lazy and picky (not that serious, a little). Although it is said that Yuan Ke paid for it, I currently feel that the heroine's goal is to treat the aunt's illness and run the restaurant well, and she is not greedy for money. The restaurant is low-cost and high-profit, and the metal iridium is sold for a lot of money. At present, I don't feel that Yuan Ke plays a particularly big role, but it is a bit confusing, but it is just my personal opinion. It's mainly wordy. People like me who like to talk things over and over find it a bit wordy.

Although she pays to eat, every time the diners give her a lot of things that are very precious to the heroine. The heroine only pays for a little food, and even one meal is not enough. She is too stingy. She must be generous to relatives and friends who have not described the sacrifice, and stingy with the diners who give her spiritual things...

Can I add more updates for no apparent reason?

I would like to ask the author, does this article have a CP? Is it 1V1? I'm a little confused after reading the introduction.

I've also read a few of the author's books. I can't stand this one, so I'll give it a try and start reading it again. I'm not interested.

I really like this kind of writing about food. I cook happily and every dish is delicious. Running a small shop of my own in this way, and going on an adventure trip of collecting ingredients from other worlds from time to time, is very relaxing and relaxing to watch. I just hope that the next system upgrade can make the space on the second floor larger, and space compression and space folding can be implemented. The heroine picks up more and more people, and more and more people live there. Visitors from new dimensions have no place to greet them when they arrive. There will be more and more space planes, and there will be more and more guests. I hope that the quality of life of the heroine will also get better and better. It doesn't matter if you have CP or not, but I hope it won't affect your career. Office romance really affects your career. There are also some more female diners. There are too many men, which makes Shura Restaurant annoying. And the new male diners from the wasteland radiation plane are really unpleasant. Miss Wen from the ancient plane looks very good, and her decision to deal with the pervert is very cool. The witch in the western fantasy world, the princess in the fairy tale plane, the female knight who slays the dragon, the chivalrous woman in the martial arts world, and the eldest lady in the fantasy world. They all feel like good themes. Would the author consider it? (*ˊᵕˋ)✩︎‧₊