Apocalypse: I Pick up Trash in a Survival Game

The creativity of this book is good, but the writing is really tender, and the conflict plot is also... Childish. I suggest you put more effort into character creation. The heroine is not fleshed out enough, and it feels too ethereal and soft, as if she can change her character into anything. The storyline is too fast, and the conflicts and intersections between the characters are very exaggerated? Also, why is a woman jealous of the heroine? I feel that the portrayal of women is really too... Crude. It is really boring to use other people's badness to set off the heroine's "reason" and "smartness". Watching it all the way, the heroine is like a golden finger. All kinds of good things come to her. It is interesting to watch, but you will get tired of it if you watch it too much. The difficult description is too simple, which makes people feel that it is just for the sake of pleasure. Writing is difficult. I give you 5 stars. I hope you can work harder and practice more. Come on.

Book lovers, come and vote to support the author. Let us join Suning in various dungeons of the survival game to pick up trash, collect daily necessities, test food, make delicious food, and survive the end of the natural disaster together.

It's okay, but can you please stop giving the items the same names all the time? They are all AAB names, and the heroine of the plot is quite talkative. She has to explain herself to herself for a long time before taking action. By then the day lilies are cold.

The plot description is too fragmented. The modern plot is interspersed with literary and ancient descriptions. It is recommended to use vernacular descriptions that are more in line with modern themes and look more coherent. It seems very strange that the character always uses "I" when describing his own psychological activities. You can change it to "self", which will make it read more smoothly. This is my little suggestion, don't criticize me🤥🤥

I would like to make a small suggestion. Many sentences are not read smoothly, which affects the sense of reading. They are not one or two sentences, but there are quite a lot. I suggest you read them all before posting them next time. I had to endure it just to watch the plot, and I was afraid that I might not be able to stand it any longer😏

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I'm a little curious if the heroine has cp

It's beautiful and well written. But it's still serialized. I've finished reading it.

The dialogue is old-fashioned and not suitable for a post-apocalyptic novel. It's too dramatic.

Although I don't know what kind of ending I want to see, I always feel that it shouldn't be so sloppy.