Douluo: Qian Renxue is My Sister
by I Am Best At Breaking Updates
About This Novel
As for the introduction, I don't know how to write it. Anyway, you can figure it out yourself.
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Official(5)Scraped 14d ago
Give you a five-star cheers, I can't hold on anymore
Baby, here I come. It's okay to follow the protagonist's group. Many fanfics are written about following the protagonist's group. The timeline can remain unchanged but the plot will be changed. Otherwise, it will be no different from the original work. Also, the title of this book is not very good. If you want to sign a contract and make money, it is best to give the book a title that is attractive. The introduction must be well written. The title and introduction of the book are the face of the book. They should make people want to click on it after reading it.
So far, I think it's okay, but the author's introduction is a bit difficult to comment on.
come on
Very good, but I suggest more punctuation marks
Really, you can think that I plagiarized it, but most of the plot of my book is the same as that of the original work. In the early stage, I followed the protagonist's group, but it was not with the protagonist, the side fighting the Spirit Hall. It was not until the end of the Continental Advanced Soul Master Academy Elite Competition that the most original creation was made. So please understand. People from Tang San's party should not come in, otherwise you might not be happy. In addition, the author is a student and is not subject to criticism, so he can also make some suggestions. Please collect and recommend.
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Community(0)
Official(5)Scraped 14d ago
Give you a five-star cheers, I can't hold on anymore
Baby, here I come. It's okay to follow the protagonist's group. Many fanfics are written about following the protagonist's group. The timeline can remain unchanged but the plot will be changed. Otherwise, it will be no different from the original work. Also, the title of this book is not very good. If you want to sign a contract and make money, it is best to give the book a title that is attractive. The introduction must be well written. The title and introduction of the book are the face of the book. They should make people want to click on it after reading it.
So far, I think it's okay, but the author's introduction is a bit difficult to comment on.
come on
Very good, but I suggest more punctuation marks
Really, you can think that I plagiarized it, but most of the plot of my book is the same as that of the original work. In the early stage, I followed the protagonist's group, but it was not with the protagonist, the side fighting the Spirit Hall. It was not until the end of the Continental Advanced Soul Master Academy Elite Competition that the most original creation was made. So please understand. People from Tang San's party should not come in, otherwise you might not be happy. In addition, the author is a student and is not subject to criticism, so he can also make some suggestions. Please collect and recommend.
