Net King: Ruoyue Shuyin
by Ice Oath
About This Novel
How will the story develop when there is an extra girl beside them? Stupid author with incompetent copywriting, enjoy! (This is my first novel, so please bear with me if I have any dissatisfaction.)
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Official(5)Scraped 5d ago
I really like the book you wrote, called Reality.
Quite pretty!
If the author had written more about the heroine in more detail instead of detailing the tennis match, maybe he wouldn't have abandoned the article. What a pity~ I finally found a book that I thought was good, but it was just gone.
Very pretty
Although the heroine is very strong, not everything is about her. Tennis is written about her. After all, it is a tennis story. Everything revolves around love. Isn't it too monotonous? But I still feel that the heroine part is a bit missing. If we go to the U17 part, I think we can make the heroine's tennis stronger and more attractive.
Didn't it say that Bunta was 15 years old at the beginning? Then why did Bunta's mother later say that she would go to Rikkai University after they graduated from elementary school?
Hmm... I feel like there are a few chapters that are not complete.
There are many places where I can't connect. There was no process like Shuyin's arrival at Rikkai University as an exchange student before. Her appearance was the next event. The violent incident in the tennis club didn't even begin or end. Just letting us know that a violent incident occurred is only half the end. Also, the doubles match with St. Rudolf and the doubles match with Gold were not over yet, right? After that chapter ended, it went directly to Clear Sky Killing?
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Community(0)
Official(5)Scraped 5d ago
I really like the book you wrote, called Reality.
Quite pretty!
If the author had written more about the heroine in more detail instead of detailing the tennis match, maybe he wouldn't have abandoned the article. What a pity~ I finally found a book that I thought was good, but it was just gone.
Very pretty
Although the heroine is very strong, not everything is about her. Tennis is written about her. After all, it is a tennis story. Everything revolves around love. Isn't it too monotonous? But I still feel that the heroine part is a bit missing. If we go to the U17 part, I think we can make the heroine's tennis stronger and more attractive.
Didn't it say that Bunta was 15 years old at the beginning? Then why did Bunta's mother later say that she would go to Rikkai University after they graduated from elementary school?
Hmm... I feel like there are a few chapters that are not complete.
There are many places where I can't connect. There was no process like Shuyin's arrival at Rikkai University as an exchange student before. Her appearance was the next event. The violent incident in the tennis club didn't even begin or end. Just letting us know that a violent incident occurred is only half the end. Also, the doubles match with St. Rudolf and the doubles match with Gold were not over yet, right? After that chapter ended, it went directly to Clear Sky Killing?
