The Heaven-defying Master and Apprentice Sway the Nine Realms
by Not Queen
About This Novel
Refining the body with vitality, one movement shakes the world, everyone is envious! The elixir and spirit beast are snatched from all directions, you can only meet them but you cannot find them! They were all others. She had the elixirs and magic at her fingertips. She could control the world with one move, travel across the world and command the world, open mountains and establish sects with her hands, recruit disciples who defied the will of heaven, and all of them walked away sideways!
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Official(27)Scraped 18d ago
Came in after looking at the introduction
I haven't read a new article for a long time. I was occasionally looking for new articles and found this one. The introduction attracted me. I just started watching it, and I think it's quite interesting. It's my favorite kind of strong female character. The male protagonist should be the eldest apprentice, haha!
🍓Look over here! (untitled)
This article is fresh and delicious. It is a good book that I encountered during the summer vacation! The first description of the heroine made me feel my heart skip a beat, and I was so excited that the heroine was really beautiful. She gives me the impression that she is stunning. She looks like a fiery woman dressed in red, which is very similar to her character. This article is delicate but also very burning I like the heroine who protects the calf. The author has created such a perfect character in both personality and appearance. I love it. Summer vacation is full of book shortages. This book deeply attracted me with its wonderful content. My favorites are Second Senior Brother and Ice Beauty! I'm really looking forward to the development of the plot in the future, It's just that there weren't many people around when I started thinking about it. It's unreasonable to tolerate this book if it's not popular. Also, I'm a little careless, there are a lot of typos, but I understand that writing a chapter takes a lot of time and energy, so you should pay attention to your health. ! ! ! Also, let me ask a big question: Who is the specific male protagonist? ? ? I will be with the heroine from now on
have eaten
When I saw the heroine accepting the little beggar as her disciple, I was a little confused. Didn't the heroine accept a traitor as a disciple? Why don't you have a long memory? Moreover, the original description of this little beggar also showed that he had an unclean mind. Why did the heroine still accept him as her disciple? Or is there a foreshadowing behind it? Please tell me!!![Emot=default,06/]
Although I may have lowered the rating, I still want to say that the author is great. Could you please check for typos every time before posting? ? ? The logic of the story is pretty good, but the broken sentences and typos are hard to read! ! !
I would like to give some advice to the author. The writing is a bit messy, some sentences do not make sense, and some paragraphs do not have commas. It is difficult to read, and there are some typos. However, the content of the article is very good. I believe that as long as the shortcomings I mentioned above are corrected, it will be a good novel.
I'm afraid everyone doesn't understand, so I'll give you a level
Yunqi Continent is a cultivator of vitality, and the heroine is a cultivator of immortality. The following is a correspondence table. Please read it clearly. There is also a correspondence table in the first chapter. [Level Differentiation] Yuan Master [Qi Training] Yuan Master [Foundation Building] Yuan Ling [Golden Pill] Yuan King [Ling Ji] Yuan Emperor [Yuan Ying] Yuan Zun [Distraction] Yuan Saint [Mahayana] Yuan Emperor [Overcoming Tribulation]
Like it like it like it😍
Because it's the only thing you can see at a glance
The heroine is so stupid. A cultivator shouldn't be so indecisive.
The heroine is too stupid to write. Immortal cultivators should not be like this. Otherwise, I don't know how I died, my IQ is not online, I just rely on my appearance, I'll vomit. Not good-looking
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I like it very much and it looks good. Come on, come on, come on.
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Official(27)Scraped 18d ago
Came in after looking at the introduction
I haven't read a new article for a long time. I was occasionally looking for new articles and found this one. The introduction attracted me. I just started watching it, and I think it's quite interesting. It's my favorite kind of strong female character. The male protagonist should be the eldest apprentice, haha!
🍓Look over here! (untitled)
This article is fresh and delicious. It is a good book that I encountered during the summer vacation! The first description of the heroine made me feel my heart skip a beat, and I was so excited that the heroine was really beautiful. She gives me the impression that she is stunning. She looks like a fiery woman dressed in red, which is very similar to her character. This article is delicate but also very burning I like the heroine who protects the calf. The author has created such a perfect character in both personality and appearance. I love it. Summer vacation is full of book shortages. This book deeply attracted me with its wonderful content. My favorites are Second Senior Brother and Ice Beauty! I'm really looking forward to the development of the plot in the future, It's just that there weren't many people around when I started thinking about it. It's unreasonable to tolerate this book if it's not popular. Also, I'm a little careless, there are a lot of typos, but I understand that writing a chapter takes a lot of time and energy, so you should pay attention to your health. ! ! ! Also, let me ask a big question: Who is the specific male protagonist? ? ? I will be with the heroine from now on
have eaten
When I saw the heroine accepting the little beggar as her disciple, I was a little confused. Didn't the heroine accept a traitor as a disciple? Why don't you have a long memory? Moreover, the original description of this little beggar also showed that he had an unclean mind. Why did the heroine still accept him as her disciple? Or is there a foreshadowing behind it? Please tell me!!![Emot=default,06/]
Although I may have lowered the rating, I still want to say that the author is great. Could you please check for typos every time before posting? ? ? The logic of the story is pretty good, but the broken sentences and typos are hard to read! ! !
I would like to give some advice to the author. The writing is a bit messy, some sentences do not make sense, and some paragraphs do not have commas. It is difficult to read, and there are some typos. However, the content of the article is very good. I believe that as long as the shortcomings I mentioned above are corrected, it will be a good novel.
I'm afraid everyone doesn't understand, so I'll give you a level
Yunqi Continent is a cultivator of vitality, and the heroine is a cultivator of immortality. The following is a correspondence table. Please read it clearly. There is also a correspondence table in the first chapter. [Level Differentiation] Yuan Master [Qi Training] Yuan Master [Foundation Building] Yuan Ling [Golden Pill] Yuan King [Ling Ji] Yuan Emperor [Yuan Ying] Yuan Zun [Distraction] Yuan Saint [Mahayana] Yuan Emperor [Overcoming Tribulation]
Like it like it like it😍
Because it's the only thing you can see at a glance
The heroine is so stupid. A cultivator shouldn't be so indecisive.
The heroine is too stupid to write. Immortal cultivators should not be like this. Otherwise, I don't know how I died, my IQ is not online, I just rely on my appearance, I'll vomit. Not good-looking
If you pass by and take a look, put it on the shelf, if you collect enough comments and ratings, this article will be set as a monthly subscription.
With 1,200 collections, 50 comments, and enough ratings of 30, you will get a monthly subscription.
I like it very much and it looks good. Come on, come on, come on.
