She is a Swordsman

This book was designated to be written in a small account The writing style is more than smooth, and the flowing clouds and flowing water seem to be natural, which is probably synonymous with the author. It feels good where it should be connected. The main characters are plump and the secondary characters are vivid. They struggle to seek immortality. The ease and difficulty of repairing the line are slowly revealed in this sophisticated but not worldly text. It must be a trumpet! ! Not enough, not enough I want to go to DaDa to read other books

The heroine is not a Holy Mother. She is really not a Holy Mother at all. It is really the best sword cultivation novel I have ever read. The writing style is very good. Many fairy cultivation novels cannot compare with his writing style. I really like it. Although the front is a bit dull, it becomes more and more exciting as you read later. The heroine herself becomes a person step by step. She has grown up and grown from weak to strong. She has never given up. Zhao Shun is really the best heroine in my mind. She has a cold personality. There are also many powerful female cultivators in this book. It will not be like other fairy tales that emphasize how powerful the protagonist is as a girl. There is no female cultivator more powerful than her. , In this book, Zhao Shun does not have any love, nor is she attracted to a certain man for the first time. She only has her own path. She often grows up alone without many friends. A strong person guides her, but it is only a guide. Her strength is almost earned by herself. The reason why she learns to make swords is because she wants to make swords for herself. She has been honing her swords and improving her cultivation. Here you can see the difficulties of her path to immortality. The author also buried There are a lot of foreshadowings, which are really very curious. Zhao Chun should have a very good identity. There is nothing about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger in this book. There are many articles on cultivating immortals that have been hidden and hidden. If something is seen through by a powerful person, it is quite childish. Zhao Chun She is also very low-key when it comes to showing her strength. She is usually practicing, and her talent in swordsmanship allows her to shine. Every place the author writes is connected and not obtrusive at all. The writing is good and the writing is honest and true, which is very advanced! The writing is really advanced! In particular, the new ideas are different from the fairy tales I have seen before. There is no intrigue among the sects. There are also many heroes competing with Zhao Chun. Zhao Chun was a little transparent for a long time at the beginning. Later, his talent for swordsmanship appeared and his character was very tenacious. The writing is very real. There are many new ideas that I have never seen in other fairy tales. I really recommend this book! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! This is also the first time for me to write such a long comment, so please give me such a good article on cultivating immortality! ! ! I read that the author of this book said that he gave up a lot of social and entertainment time to write this book. Sometimes he was really tired and unhappy. Many times, he saw the encouraging messages from friends in the comment area to the author, which gave him the motivation to write. It is really not easy for the author. If you don't like reading this book, please don't slander him. One of your dirty words may make the author very sad. If you don't like it, please go find you. If you like it, please don't deliberately leave bad reviews. It's really difficult for the author. Writing is very difficult. It requires inspiration, writing, accumulation of knowledge, and a lot of love for the characters in his works. What's more, the article written by the author is really great. It's not the kind of mindless and refreshing article. The writing is very good. Once you read it, you will know how charming this book is. Of course, the author should also take a good rest. I will always read your book and wait for your update💕

For me, a female reader, the most surprising setting of this book is that I can feel that the author is really trying to depict a world of immortality where men and women are equal, with only the division of strength and talent and no difference between men and women. 1. In the ratio of the number of male to female characters, women are by no means less than men. Many bosses, geniuses, and passers-by A, B, and C are women. 2. In the family system, in many novels I have read (just the ones I have read), many authors will subconsciously write the male inheritance system, grandfather, father, son, this is probably the model, and the children always take the father's surname. However, this novel does not have such a problem at all. The further you go, the more the world view becomes larger, the more it will be reflected. 3. No male monk in the novel said, "I am a man..., How can I let you, a woman..." There is no such thing as a male cultivator being humble to a female cultivator. ... Maybe I am more sensitive. I think true equality would not say such words or do such actions. 4. Another thing is the way the protagonist behaves, I really like it. (1) There is no woman pretending to be a man or deliberately looking ugly. (2) Will not hide talent or cultivation. (3) It means being upright and powerful, not being able to hide, not being able to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger. ... Personally, I don't really like reading articles about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. Being strong means being strong, and hiding it, even if the author gives a reason, will always make people feel aggrieved. I have to avoid trouble because of my appearance, and I have to hide it because I don't want to expose my talent. I have always been too timid. 5. The author's writing style is rigorous throughout, the writing is very good, the words and sentences are beautiful, and the reading has a sense of eloquence. I particularly like this. I have tried to read some witty writing before, but I can't stand it. 6. I like some of the things about the level of cultivation described by the author. The most important thing is the issue of time. No matter how talented a person is, he will not have a setting where decades of cultivation can offset the results of thousands of years. There is also a cultivation system created by the author. Then there are the shortcomings in my opinion: The author's writing feels relatively flat. Some scenes that I think should be very grand, such as the previous Hengyun Competition, the subsequent sword debate at Tianjian Tai, and the apprenticeship competition that has been prepared for a long time. These are all scenes that I am looking forward to and looking forward to. However, after the author wrote it, I really didn't have that feeling (it only represents my own opinion). It's not that it's not good, but I always feel that something is missing. I don't know how to describe it. When I read it, I felt like my heart was not up and down, and it was a bit unsatisfactory. But overall, this novel is really my favorite, and it should be said to be my favorite one so far. Among the novels I read that really made me feel that men and women only care about talent, this is the author's book, and the Emperor's Divine Tongjian is the only two of them. I hope the author will get better as he writes more!

When I first saw the book, I thought it was very good after reading it... The plot, emotional processing, character relationships, story extension, and foreshadowing were all explained clearly one by one. It can be seen that the author has ideas, ability, and good writing style. This book is worth reading. But... I am really tired from reading. The more I get to the end, the more I feel that the writing is too sophisticated and completely inconsistent with most people's reading habits and understanding. I can speak clearly in plain English and change another sentence. It seems very powerful, but... It increases reading difficulties and chews words... It's easy to dissuade many people. The more I read, the more I feel that it is a good novel. I can understand the author's intention, but... The book is for people to read, and there is no need to chew on words every few sentences. The words are gorgeous and the words are rich. Isn't the vernacular delicious? ! This book has the potential to become popular, but the premise of becoming popular is that most people can read it... I hope the author can pay attention to this issue in the future. If you look back at the part where you first wrote this article, you will find that the rhythm and wording are very comfortable. But now when I read it, I often have to understand what you say. This is not bad ←_←, but after too many times, I feel that I have nothing to do and feel tired. This is the reason why most people can't read.

This book is written with sophistication and is loved by everyone. But I personally feel that the early story is a bit bland. In fact, although the first ten chapters feel bland, they feel like they can be read on. However, the heroine was sentenced to three months of confinement for self-defense. I feel that the villain had no intention of taking action, just because the heroine called him a villain, and then the villain failed to attack and was beaten instead. In this way, it feels a bit like forcibly creating contradictions and conflicts. When it came to the Tu family matter, it was a bit unsatisfactory. The head of the Tu family entrusted the Tu family to the care of a little girl, which made people feel that it was not that big of a deal. The four points represent the understanding of the author's hard work, as well as my gentleness and grace as a reader. I left one point because of some doubts

Come on, the author ^0＾~ Don't give up. I like the character of the heroine very much. I hope that the character of the heroine will not be ruined in the later stage. Come on, don't give up. Moreover, the writing style of the author is very good. Come on and support you.

I think the heroine in this book is the heroine who best fits the so-called powerful female cultivator in my mind. Not a Holy Mother, not weak, not a Mary Sue, not nosy, not deliberately funny, dual business online, decisive in killing She has no unfavorable opportunities, and is never arrogant. Rather than saying it is a coming-of-age story, it is better to say that she has been in line with the maturity of a time-travelling person from the beginning. I don't know what the original intention of those authors was when they wrote time-traveling articles. Is it to be funny? Is it to be in line with the public? Or is it just for watercraft? What are the characteristics of time-travelers? Are you funny all day long? Modern vocabulary emerges in an endless stream? Do you think about it all day long? Are you inventing this invention, or do you still know the plot? I don't think so - as an adult who was already several decades old before time travel, I think his characteristics should be mature, calm, sophisticated, scheming, understanding of the world, recharged, connotative, not inferior, not blind, and calm beyond his peers. And the heroine Zhao Shun in this novel is exactly such a protagonist. When it is time to show off her talents, she should not act like a pig and eat the tiger. When it is time to recuperate, she should not be arrogant and arrogant. After jumping out of the small world, she has a lofty world view. The plot is reasonable and the logic is clear. There is no such thing as heartbreaking, and there is no stupidity like repaying a drop of kindness in a spring. There is no invincibility, no indecisiveness, and no such great kindness. She is a complete evil person. He doesn't care how many people he kills for himself. He does whatever it takes to achieve his goal. He will kill anyone who gets in the way. If he doesn't indulge in memories, no matter whether they are innocent or not, he will deal with it as long as he feels sorry for himself. The heroines of too many novels are true, kind, simple, idiotic and have no brains. They feel sorry for their eighteen generations of ancestors even if they kill monsters. They don't say that I am a bad person. When they get older, they don't dare to kill anyone, and they are bound by rules and regulations. This is an era of equality between men and women. He doesn't care whether you are a man or a woman. He only cares about whether you are strong or not, whether your background is strong or not, how great your achievements are, how much potential you have, and there is no gender discrimination. This is a real era of cultivating immortals, breaking away from the shackles of the world. The era of the strong. Isn't this a cool article? The qualifications of the heroine of this novel are also very interesting. Many people say that the early stage is too bland, and I am the same. I have no desire to continue reading. But when you read later and your world view expands, you will find it more and more interesting. The qualifications of the heroine in the first part are very ordinary, but in the later part she becomes a double spirit root, which is almost 40% of the online novel. The heroine's qualifications are not bad, but they are not top-notch. Later, the author turned him into the Great Sun Spiritual Root. This is the so-called genius flow. This time is already 100 cards later. The subsequent swordsmanship talent, dual path platform, the best sword in the world, the demon clan venerable, Haiqing Mighty, and dual sword intent, aren't they geniuses? Isn't he a genius? He is still the so-called genius in other cultivating articles, and it is very shocking to see him. The article does not always say that he is a genius, nor does he always emphasize that he is a genius. He is very powerful, but his words, deeds, and everything he does give people a very powerful feeling. This is what I thought was the great heroine, what I thought was the genius, what I thought was the time traveler, what I thought was the world of cultivating immortals, what I thought was the genius stream, what I thought was the heroine's character, what I thought was Zhao Chun's sanity, how slow the author's updates were, and how the author took a leave of absence every once in a while

After reading more than a hundred chapters, the heroine treats her relatives and her first sect like strangers. Although the relatives don't have much communication or other feelings, they must have been raised by them for more than ten years! The heroine feels particularly cold here. Although the first master of the sect didn't take much care of her, he didn't suppress her or anything. Moreover, the sect also had the grace of guiding the way and sharing the fortune. She initially expected to grow up, and all the benefits that should be given were given without any personal deductions. If there were any private deductions, it was the discretion of the outer sect disciples. The heroine did not receive it herself, nor did she ask for it. When the sect was destroyed, I felt that the heroine took the sword that suppressed the sect and went to the upper world, euphemistically calling it a benefit to everyone. I was a bit speechless here. The sect was destroyed, and the heroine's treasure, although she had to return it, had she protected the weakling heroine in the early stage, and the sword was just a trivial matter of returning to its owner. This unequal agreement was actually okay. Moreover, the sect's annihilation of the heroine showed no sadness, or even indifference. She gave up without forcing Senior Brother Zeng even though she could save him. He said he didn't hate the people who killed the sect, but he just didn't understand and didn't take it to heart. He felt like he had nothing to do with me and only cared about the people in Xuancaotang. Obviously Senior Brother Feng, Senior Brother Zheng and Senior Brother Xu also knew people who had some friendship! The heroine is really indifferent. Moreover, it is a bit strange that the Lord appears, and he is particularly concerned about the heroine. It's like waiting for the little world to wait for her, and it is calculated that the heroine will save the venerable one in the future, but it is true that the cause and effect of the heroine is complicated, and the golden fire grass elixir can be easily calculated. As for the thirty-six petals, the co-authoring is necessary for the plot. The small world does not even suppress the venerable strength, and cooperates with the heroine to get what she wants, and because the venerable one will still be here to look up to the heroine in the future. Does the lord know like us readers that the heroine has the aura of the protagonist and can survive to the end? Even the Venerable's junior Senior Sister Liu needs her to take care of her so that she can be safe. Then there is the issue of the stance of humans and spirits. In humans, for the sake of the Shark Pearl and a lifespan of 800 years, they can kill the same sharks at will, or even destroy their race. In the eyes of the heroine, this is just the law of the jungle. In the human race, killing monsters and taking blood for cultivation is normal, but facing the spirits and cannibalizing people is a heretical practice. It can be said that the heroine's position is a matter of position. In fact, the heroine also recognizes in her heart that people can hurt you, and it is wrong for you to hurt others. But isn't the ultimate goal of cultivating Taoism the pursuit of the Tao? Don't they all say that all living things are equal? Could it be that after becoming a god, it depends on the race and birth.

I have read this book several times, but to be honest, I don't know what the heroine's character is and what her heart is for the Tao. Her heart is too plain, without any waves, and there are very few descriptions of her inner emotions. There are many descriptions of the way of the sword, but a little less of her own way. There are very few descriptions of the Way of the Sun. The heroine never seems to be proud, and she has very little arrogance, but she has the dignity of a superior. , Even the advancement of swordsmanship is only joy, you can see between the lines, it is inevitable

The writing is good, but there are still some flaws ① The author's realm setting gives me a headache, I'm used to it Qi training→Foundation building→Golden elixir→Nascent Soul, I am a little confused about this setting ② The fighting process is too bland. Although it is not required to be lifelike, the details must be present. I feel that this is a major weakness of the author. ③The increase in Yuan Shou is not appropriate. The further you go, the harder it is to improve. However, the increase in Yuan Shou is not twice as high as the previous level. Usually, you only need to retreat for a year and a half, so time is a bit tight. ④The so-called sword cultivation, I think other books are all improved through fighting. How come this one is all learned through cultivation? Mood is of course important, but if you don't fight, how can you recognize other people's moves? It seems a bit unreal for some reason.