Dream Beads of Time Travel
by Dream Light
About This Novel
Enter the world and watch the scenery at will. The door to the eternal world opens and collects thousands of books.
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Official(34)Scraped 18d ago
I can't read
Mu Wenhua, he looked confused and didn't know what the hell he was writing.
hehe
When I first read the book review, I thought it was a troll, but when I went in and took a look, I realized that what the hell was written in this book, it was no longer a problem with the writing, it was simply a problem with my ability to express myself. .
? I can't understand it at all!
The content is so cluttered that it feels like content from other chapters has been forced into another chapter.
It's not like keeping a running account
So I don't want to give it at all
can't read? ?
How can I understand how you write every jump? ! 😐😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
I'm confused. I can't understand.
The second chapter is written about Hangzhou, right? Then is the Qianliang bookstore you bought in Hangzhou or Suzhou? Why does Hangzhou appear now and then in Suzhou in the third chapter? Also, in the first chapter, it feels like cutting corners.
How should I put it? I don't even know who the protagonist is. It's so embarrassing. The author should write with the protagonist as the purpose, and everything should revolve around the protagonist.
I can't understand it. The content is written too hastily and not in detail.
can't read,
Brother, I don't understand. What do you want to express? Did I go to the wrong school? I can understand every word, but when I put it together, I feel confused. The idea is very good. Can you write it more smoothly? Don't jump ahead.
Looking for the primary school teacher's phone number
I spent five minutes reading the first chapter. Now I have to call my elementary school teacher.
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Community(0)
Official(34)Scraped 18d ago
I can't read
Mu Wenhua, he looked confused and didn't know what the hell he was writing.
hehe
When I first read the book review, I thought it was a troll, but when I went in and took a look, I realized that what the hell was written in this book, it was no longer a problem with the writing, it was simply a problem with my ability to express myself. .
? I can't understand it at all!
The content is so cluttered that it feels like content from other chapters has been forced into another chapter.
It's not like keeping a running account
So I don't want to give it at all
can't read? ?
How can I understand how you write every jump? ! 😐😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
I'm confused. I can't understand.
The second chapter is written about Hangzhou, right? Then is the Qianliang bookstore you bought in Hangzhou or Suzhou? Why does Hangzhou appear now and then in Suzhou in the third chapter? Also, in the first chapter, it feels like cutting corners.
How should I put it? I don't even know who the protagonist is. It's so embarrassing. The author should write with the protagonist as the purpose, and everything should revolve around the protagonist.
I can't understand it. The content is written too hastily and not in detail.
can't read,
Brother, I don't understand. What do you want to express? Did I go to the wrong school? I can understand every word, but when I put it together, I feel confused. The idea is very good. Can you write it more smoothly? Don't jump ahead.
Looking for the primary school teacher's phone number
I spent five minutes reading the first chapter. Now I have to call my elementary school teacher.
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