Start Growing from a Small World

Although the first thirty-three chapters are not very well written, at least the subject matter is new and still readable. From the following chapters, it becomes almost the same as Infinite Streaming. Originally, the new author's writing wasn't very good at first, but at least the content wasn't too cliche and it was still readable. I don't know if others will be able to read it or not. Anyway, I couldn't stand it after more than 40 chapters.

Same title, too lazy to explain, go in and read it yourself, I admire you for being able to read more than 100 chapters

After reading more than 30 chapters, the writing is very straightforward, just like a running account, without any sense of immersion.

It's not that great. It's written like a running account, very boring.

The front is relatively flat, but the back is getting better and better. The subject matter is very novel, and I feel it has the potential to become popular. Big boost for the author!

There is no sense of perception at all, no sense of immersion at all, it's like the protagonist is not alive, there is no passion at all, but the subject matter is good.

The writing is very straightforward and I can't get into it. If I don't like Pokémon, it makes no sense. Goodbye.

The narrative is a bit too straightforward, and the plot also lacks conflict and not much ups and downs. For example, the first two times I entered the game, it felt like it was just a quick glance, which was too brief. Several more plots could be considered. You can slowly reveal the entire world structure and story background through items and events, paving the way for more of the plot behind it. Novels are the same as other products. They must have a selling point or something attractive, either sophisticated writing, gorgeous vocabulary, witty characters, novel ideas, touching stories, etc. There must be something that can stir the hearts of readers and leave a deep impression... Personal opinion, pure nonsense Great support from the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

To be honest, I have problems with the previous chapters. Because it is my first time to write a book, the first part of the book was not very good, but it got better later on, or the remaining readers are used to my writing style, so not many people mentioned it. I re-read the previous chapters, and they are really not good. I will take some time every day to revise them little by little.

Come on, author, just write and write.