
Begin to Sign in and Become Stronger from Painting the World
by Look At The Moon And Listen To The Rain
About This Novel
Once you travel to the world of Hua Jianghu and get the sign-in system, congratulations to the host for signing in and getting [God King Body] [Nine Apertures Exquisite Sword Heart]? ! What should I do if the system becomes invincible after just a few days? (Introduction is weak)
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Official(37)Scraped 21d ago
Licking the dog
Really licking the Marrow Cleansing Pill given by the system when signing in, the protagonist actually ground it into powder and added it to the meal to increase the potential of several others. This kind of secret licking without letting others know is probably not considered by the author, but in my opinion, this is licking.
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Collect Li Hanyi, Sikong Qianluo, Yin Luoxia
How come you can write novels about anything now?
I don't know what to think. Damn it, don't wash the Hail Mary.
author
Let's open a youth singing shop! The heroine joins Li Hanyi!
Well enough
Your words are too dense, but the content is okay, but it looks uncomfortable and difficult to understand. It is a bit more difficult to read than our books that deal with reality. If you trim it here, it will not be so embarrassing, and it will look much more comfortable as you continue reading.
Will come back for an update, it's National Day and I won't be back yet Just say that you have started school, and the National Day should also be celebrated.
What kind of thing is this written? I can't even tell which person it is, it's a mess. You need to abbreviate the name of the person in a novel. Is it so simple? Then you just write the beginning and end without finishing it? The protagonist has a system and still wants to lick Li Xingyun, which is really speechless. Then why don't you just write about Li Xingyun?
The author should open another shounen song fanfic!
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Community(0)
Official(37)Scraped 21d ago
Licking the dog
Really licking the Marrow Cleansing Pill given by the system when signing in, the protagonist actually ground it into powder and added it to the meal to increase the potential of several others. This kind of secret licking without letting others know is probably not considered by the author, but in my opinion, this is licking.
author
Collect Li Hanyi, Sikong Qianluo, Yin Luoxia
How come you can write novels about anything now?
I don't know what to think. Damn it, don't wash the Hail Mary.
author
Let's open a youth singing shop! The heroine joins Li Hanyi!
Well enough
Your words are too dense, but the content is okay, but it looks uncomfortable and difficult to understand. It is a bit more difficult to read than our books that deal with reality. If you trim it here, it will not be so embarrassing, and it will look much more comfortable as you continue reading.
Will come back for an update, it's National Day and I won't be back yet Just say that you have started school, and the National Day should also be celebrated.
What kind of thing is this written? I can't even tell which person it is, it's a mess. You need to abbreviate the name of the person in a novel. Is it so simple? Then you just write the beginning and end without finishing it? The protagonist has a system and still wants to lick Li Xingyun, which is really speechless. Then why don't you just write about Li Xingyun?
The author should open another shounen song fanfic!













