I Save Beautiful Girls in Tokyo

I would like to pay tribute to the passing crow god and "Love Travel" with this book. The original intention was to write a fanfic of "Love Travel", killing Watanabe and robbing Qingye, but after much thought, I couldn't bear to ruin the beautiful atmosphere of "Love Travel". I haven't finished reading "Love Travel" yet, and I can't bear to read it. I read half a chapter or a chapter in a day, and then it's gone and I cry to death. The last book that moved me so much was "Jianke" by Mao Ni, and I fell into it without even realizing it. Once again, I would like to express my highest respect to the crow god. You will often appear in this book and live in my heart forever (dog head saves his life)! Just kidding, I wish the flying crow god will always be healthy and contribute more masterpieces to book friends. Finally, let out a loud roar, Doraemon, yyds!

Does this only teach self-protection but not ideological and moral character? He doesn't have the most basic respect for his relatives. Even if his relatives are joking with each other, he wouldn't be so bad-mouthed. Besides, the protagonist has done nothing wrong to his sister. This character is so disgusting And from the previous article, it seems that the protagonist has been very good to his sister since childhood. Your temperament won't change drastically when you grow up, right?

First of all, tsundere is not like this. Secondly, no matter how much you dote on a sister like this, you can't dote on her so much that she can't stop talking. At least my sister is not such a person. If she says such things, first of all, my education is wrong. Secondly, I will definitely slap her to death.

After thinking about it for a long time last night, I deleted the part about Sister Tachibana wanting to go to Cowherd's shop. Although I didn't go there, even though it was under the influence of the super power of the sincere world, and although it was logically sound, I thought it would cause discomfort to some book lovers, so after thinking about it, I deleted that paragraph. We hereby inform you that all related posts have also been deleted.

I couldn't stand this book until I reached Chapter 60. I have to say that the author's writing style is pretty good, but there are indeed a lot of poisonous points. You should know that 99% of the people in this book are men. So what you should write that appeals to male readers is not the protagonist getting stronger bit by bit, but the scene of falling in love with the heroine. The background of the protagonist is that he is carefree and can waste money without any shortage of anything.

If the sister is a biological sister, then her existence will be meaningless

The first picture shows her trying to please the classmates around her, with her hairpin turning into a crying figure. The second picture is when he was trying to please Xiaoxiang, and then I saw her hairpin turned into a smile. This is what I understand, any questions? Above picture

Can you write her sister in a more normal way? This is too awesome now.

I really thought I was the protagonist and could do anything! -_-||Don't you think about the actual situation, or think about the same situation between yourself and other protagonists? He dares to confess his feelings without any emotional basis. I can only tell that the protagonist has a problem with his IQ and is too confident. Who gave the protagonist the courage?

What's the point of giving some props? Do you understand that it's not your own abilities that are all rubbish? When writing a book, try to figure out what the readers want, not what the author wants, understand?