Diary of My Shared Apartment with a Female Teacher

This book combines the stories of many people around me and my own ideas. The plot is light and humorous.

It's so damn sweet. There may be such love in reality, but how many there are? I don't know if I can meet them in this life.

I read the comments, but before I started reading the text, someone said that the female tenant had a sense of sight. The author can give me an accurate answer. Does she have a knife?

Hahahahahahahaha, come on

Update soon. . . . . . . . . . .

The male protagonist and the female protagonist fight and fall in love

The main reason is that some parts are very irritating. Readers read the novel to relax. The protagonist is always being annoyed here and there. It is too depressing. He has to listen to the girls for everything. Is it okay to have his own opinions? Then there is the character Wang Bing who is not suitable. He keeps bullying the protagonist and there is no way to do it. I just skipped it. The above is just my personal opinion, please don't criticize me

The book makes me feel like a little bit of beautiful fantasy in the lives of ordinary people. But I will never meet a girl like the heroine in my life. I don't know if I see it quickly. It feels like it's a bit out of context in some places or the timeline is too fast. Maybe it's because the timeline is too fast, which makes me feel a little out of context.

I am also in high school today. I just came home from the military training in my first year of high school. Then I opened it and read other novels that had twenty or thirty chapters updated. One novel even had 50 chapters updated in ten days. We read it during the ten days of military training and found that this book had only updated three chapters. When I looked at the update time on August 20th, I knew that the author should be a student. We also went to military training on August 20th. I guess the author should be a college student, maybe a freshman, and then went to military training.

There are a few problems. One is that the time is not very clear. For example, at the beginning, the male protagonist picked up the female protagonist at the train station and was about to go to Peking University. Not even two days after arriving at Peking University, he said that they had been living together for several days. At that time, it was a bit confusing. Also, when I went to Lu Li's hometown later, the time was not clear. In the future, I could add a dividing line in the middle of the time span to improve the perception. There is also the problem of speech flow. The speech flow of Lin Lu and Wang Bing in the company is not clear. A distinction can be made between the voice of the heart and the speech. For example, when speaking, use "" and when speaking, use ''. These two points are more important. Of course, it's up to you whether you adopt it or not. I personally hope you pay more attention to it later because it will really improve the look and feel. Let's work together at the end!