Trapped in the Shura Field, the Six Villain Sons Doted on Her

I've read Chapter 28 so far, and I'm not interested in the rest. So far, I'm an impatient person. I came here from the tweets and became a member. I can only say that if the tweets were more posted, I would not read it. 1. The heroine has been through so much and still doesn't notice the malicious intentions of the heroine. It's very stupid. You just say that the heroine is in a fairy tale world. How can she have experience in getting along with wild beasts? Haha, isn't there more cruelty shown in the animal world? Come from Snow White's plane, right? 2. Male supporting role. I spend so much time writing about the experiences and mixed emotions of the male and female supporting characters. I insist on giving the male supporting role a layer of armor to show the charm of the female protagonist. I suggest changing the title of the book to "The World of Mute". There is no such thing as a long mouth. 3. The female supporting role is a sex brain who won't come back even if she asks the gods. Currently, the male supporting characters that appear basically have a balancing role, which is also a mess. 4. The plot, as for whether it will be more exciting or slap-in-the-face, I am not in the mood to read it. Up to Chapter 28, if you say that the actions of the male partner and the slap in the face of the female partner are the most enjoyable part, then I really have nothing to say. 5. It is recommended that the length be shortened. Chapter 28 seems to be full of anecdotes, and the old woman's foot-binding cloth is smelly and long.

Boss Fu Siyue The second son, Si Mo Cheng, inherited the family business and is the real talker of the Si Group. The head office is located in the bustling city center. The third child, Yan Wenyu, has become an unparalleled star. He is world-famous and an international movie king. He often flies around the world. Si Zai, Wei Xifeng The fifth son, Yu Zaiyan, the heir to the leading medical profession, has been a genius since he was a child. When he grew up, he has overcome many century-old problems in the medical field. He is known as the man closest to God, and there are countless big shots who want to ask him to take action. Cui Yunye, the sixth cub, is also the most miserable cub he has ever lived. He has been dependent on his grandmother who made a living by picking up scraps since he was a child. Later, his grandmother left him, and he became a complete orphan at a young age. Fortunately, he is living a good life now and has opened a game company. OK, let's mark the six big boys first.

The most embarrassing thing is that the kids 20 years later all have their own stand-ins, Bai Yueguang, childhood sweethearts, etc. It's really a 1v1 companionship. Then the heroine came back, and she was framed by these stupid women and was in hysterics. The six men didn't protect her. They had power but they just didn't use it. What kind of brats did they think they were? They were useless brats who couldn't protect the heroine's little wife.

Is there a vicious female supporting role for every son? And then all the sons are torn between the vicious supporting actress and the heroine? That's not as good as a female supporting role. Otherwise, it would feel irritating to keep pulling like this. Various misunderstandings or misses. Now that the heroine is back, what kind of substitute is needed? Just once or twice can let the female supporting character leave and do whatever she wants. Otherwise, it will be these problems eight times out of ten. I'm really sorry, it's not interesting.

Some paragraphs have big logical loopholes, which makes it ugly and outrageous.

The heroine is not very smart. He can clearly see that the female counterpart is not a good person and still tells her child that this is because she likes you. Oh my god, people don't understand that they like you and just tell them that this is like them. Nerve. Can't you see the hostility towards her female counterpart? Damn it, I really can't believe this person is really someone who has experienced the end of the world?

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It's so ugly, so slow, and you can't even open your mouth just for the sake of the storyline.

These men care so much about the heroine that they still need to find a substitute? Why wasn't it explained clearly from the beginning that they were the heroine's substitutes? You have to let these disgusting things happen, show that you care about the heroine, and at the same time let troublesome things happen, and don't explain the misunderstanding of the relationship. Is this really a group favorite novel? Isn't this a piece of writing? Since the heroine is the group's favorite, then it means that these men only exist because of the heroine. Is writing so many female supporting characters a reflection of these men? The group favorite story just revolves around the heroine! ! ! She is already the heroine, why would she still be picked on for dozens of chapters because of men's troubles? Isn't the core of the group pet novel the protagonist enjoying happiness?