
Fishing at Work and Being Taken to Meet His Parents by a Beautiful Ceo
About This Novel
The new book "I Can Deduce Everything for Millions of Years" has been released! [Highly sweet system article in the workplace, the whole process is so sweet that you will get diabetes! ]Yang Yang went to work to fish, but was dragged by the female president Su Ling to pretend to be her boyfriend to meet her parents. I thought that my parents would dislike Yang Yang and would persuade them to break up. Unexpectedly, Yang Yang was deeply loved by his parents, and they threatened that his son-in-law must be Yang Yang! Forced to have no choice, Su Ling could only pretend to be real and pursue Yang Yang. "Yang Yang, please be my boyfriend!" "Yang Yang, stop going to work and go shopping and watching movies with me!" "Yang Yang, I want to eat this!" "Auntie, Yang Yang bullies me, you have to make the decision for me!" Yang Yang's mother: "You brat, why don't you hurry up and work overtime with your girlfriend!" After this series of pursuits, Yang Yang was also helpless: "Mr. Su, don't make trouble, why don't I get married!" Book club skirt: 852828450
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Official(52)Scraped 9d ago
Some tips and ideas
I have been reading novels for seven or eight years, and I am an old bookworm. To be honest, your book is a bit awkward. Normally, in a company, in a major meeting, the speech of a manager like He Xing is relatively stupid. It is impossible for a stupid person to sit in the position of a manager. Even if the author wants to use this manager to cause conflict and give the protagonist room to play, it is still very awkward for a reader. Secondly, the core of the author's book is still about love. The heroine's personal personality is a bit like a child. I can also understand that the author wants to portray the attitude of a young woman in love. Let me summarize it at the end. I hope the author can sort it out a little bit. Because this Manager He is a poisonous person, not too big or too small, and is dispensable. Then there is a lot of room for development of the theme of love. Personally, I'm still very optimistic about you. It can be divided into food and grass. For the new book stage, this book has an okay start. It depends on how the author performs in the future. If the heroine can be made more three-dimensional, I feel that it can still reach a higher level. The potential is quite huge. Looking forward to the author's performance.
It's okay, but if you look back you'll see how many typos he made.
I'm a sailor
This is a stunning, gripping and fascinating book. The author's words are exquisite and the pen is full of flowers. After reading this book, I took a long breath, gently closed the book, and caressed the smooth cover. The soft sunlight gently shone on the top of my head, forming a circle of light. I faced the bright sunshine, closed my eyes, and returned to the various plots in the book again. It seemed like a misty mist, leading me to the front of time and space. The most important thing is that the author of this book is handsome, charming, graceful, brave and mighty, invincible in the world, the best in the world, a lonely master, invulnerable, you are the only one, a man with a jade face, and the benevolent is invincible. , Brave without fear, wise and mighty, extraordinary chivalrous, righteous and unparalleled throughout the ages, unparalleled, humble and eager to learn,... It is simply that the ancients have never been seen before. Wisdom Clever Clever Clever Clever Clever Wisdom Wise Genius Magnificent, admired by thousands of people, unparalleled, humble internally and externally, talented, noble sentiments, super invincible, proficient in one's work, reaching the pinnacle, loved by everyone in the world, flowers blooming from tree to tree The candle illuminates the world, you can see thousands of miles clearly, the rain and dew are all over the world, the vegetation is everywhere, the dragon walks and the tiger steps, it is better than Song Yu, your sleeves are refreshing, your face is that of an angel, a pear tree is full of tang He is the best, most energetic and most powerful person in the world It is simply No. 1. The admiration for the author is like an endless stream, and like the Yellow River overflowing, it is out of control. You are a dragon among men, a phoenix among beasts, and you stand out from the crowd.
Good 😁
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It doesn't look good. Are there multiple female protagonists? All kinds of ambiguity. . . .
It doesn't look good. Are there multiple female protagonists? All kinds of ambiguity. . . .
The more I read, the more chauvinistic it becomes. It says that no man in the old Su family has the obligation to wash dishes. It's very patriarchal.
Is it a single heroine?
Is it a love story? What's the situation with the heroine's best friend? If you don't want to accept it, don't write it so ambiguously. Personal advice.
I think it's okay
There's a bit of drama in it
Rating
Community(0)
Official(52)Scraped 9d ago
Some tips and ideas
I have been reading novels for seven or eight years, and I am an old bookworm. To be honest, your book is a bit awkward. Normally, in a company, in a major meeting, the speech of a manager like He Xing is relatively stupid. It is impossible for a stupid person to sit in the position of a manager. Even if the author wants to use this manager to cause conflict and give the protagonist room to play, it is still very awkward for a reader. Secondly, the core of the author's book is still about love. The heroine's personal personality is a bit like a child. I can also understand that the author wants to portray the attitude of a young woman in love. Let me summarize it at the end. I hope the author can sort it out a little bit. Because this Manager He is a poisonous person, not too big or too small, and is dispensable. Then there is a lot of room for development of the theme of love. Personally, I'm still very optimistic about you. It can be divided into food and grass. For the new book stage, this book has an okay start. It depends on how the author performs in the future. If the heroine can be made more three-dimensional, I feel that it can still reach a higher level. The potential is quite huge. Looking forward to the author's performance.
It's okay, but if you look back you'll see how many typos he made.
I'm a sailor
This is a stunning, gripping and fascinating book. The author's words are exquisite and the pen is full of flowers. After reading this book, I took a long breath, gently closed the book, and caressed the smooth cover. The soft sunlight gently shone on the top of my head, forming a circle of light. I faced the bright sunshine, closed my eyes, and returned to the various plots in the book again. It seemed like a misty mist, leading me to the front of time and space. The most important thing is that the author of this book is handsome, charming, graceful, brave and mighty, invincible in the world, the best in the world, a lonely master, invulnerable, you are the only one, a man with a jade face, and the benevolent is invincible. , Brave without fear, wise and mighty, extraordinary chivalrous, righteous and unparalleled throughout the ages, unparalleled, humble and eager to learn,... It is simply that the ancients have never been seen before. Wisdom Clever Clever Clever Clever Clever Wisdom Wise Genius Magnificent, admired by thousands of people, unparalleled, humble internally and externally, talented, noble sentiments, super invincible, proficient in one's work, reaching the pinnacle, loved by everyone in the world, flowers blooming from tree to tree The candle illuminates the world, you can see thousands of miles clearly, the rain and dew are all over the world, the vegetation is everywhere, the dragon walks and the tiger steps, it is better than Song Yu, your sleeves are refreshing, your face is that of an angel, a pear tree is full of tang He is the best, most energetic and most powerful person in the world It is simply No. 1. The admiration for the author is like an endless stream, and like the Yellow River overflowing, it is out of control. You are a dragon among men, a phoenix among beasts, and you stand out from the crowd.
Good 😁
? ? ? ? ! ?
It doesn't look good. Are there multiple female protagonists? All kinds of ambiguity. . . .
It doesn't look good. Are there multiple female protagonists? All kinds of ambiguity. . . .
The more I read, the more chauvinistic it becomes. It says that no man in the old Su family has the obligation to wash dishes. It's very patriarchal.
Is it a single heroine?
Is it a love story? What's the situation with the heroine's best friend? If you don't want to accept it, don't write it so ambiguously. Personal advice.
I think it's okay
There's a bit of drama in it











