When Pan Geng Moved to Yin, I Initiated Jian Shang

There are just some flaws. 1. First of all, the protagonist in the era of tribal conflict should not have so many advanced vocabulary. The narration is fine and the dialogue is written in this way. It seems a bit nondescript. Is this the vocabulary that ancient people could have? I don't know the author, and I don't know the ethnic minorities in our country. Those who still retain their language, except for some lost content, some people who can communicate in everything actually don't have so many words. Many times, the words cannot express what they want, and they have to use body language to support them. There are a lot of Chinese vocabulary, but people who have not read books do not use body language, and often the same words cannot convey the meaning. Modern people have trouble communicating because there are more educated people. Let's not talk about our country. If you look at English and the British, if it weren't for Shakespeare's large number of coined words, they probably wouldn't be able to write a coherent article until now. 2. The problem of the protagonist's heirs. How can I put it this way? As a bookworm, I find it quite disgusting. Whichever book I read on weekdays, the protagonist is almost always impotent or impotent. After looking around, almost no protagonist is a normal person. People's fantasy novels can also be explained later by saying that it is not easy to be strong. You are an imaginary historical novel. You are fighting day and night. It is very strange that Themade has no descendants after several years. 3. Update issues. You'd better update more, it's too slow and I'll probably forget about it after a while.

The author takes it too much for granted. He thinks everything is so simple, saying that he wants to instigate the Ji family and then succeed immediately. It is obvious that more than a thousand people were burned to death by you, but they can still be instigated by you to rebel. Don't you have any common sense? The author is probably still a sixteen-year-old high school student. He is too naive and thinks that life means "if there is light, then there will be light." This is just a few golden fingers.

A leader who leads everyone to continuously win battles and gain continuous benefits has no dignity at all. He laughs and laughs in an inappropriate manner or asks and curses without taking pig's feet seriously.

Wu Ding, Wu Jia, Wu Yi, and Wu Xin were all promising kings. As expected, the butt determines the head. It was King Wen and King Wu of Zhou who were smarter. King Wen of Zhou: Emperor Xin won't let you sacrifice your ancestors, so I'll help you sacrifice them. How many people are going to be killed? Please give me a quantity (first generation salesperson). It can be said that the efforts of several generations of the Shang Dynasty were disintegrated by King Wen of Zhou. Towards the end of the Shang Dynasty, Emperor Xin only allowed himself to worship his ancestors (only he was allowed to worship his ancestors alone in a family), which meant that except for himself, no princes or clans could offer sacrifices. Wouldn't this offend others? So many people want to overthrow him, even his eldest brother.

Is there a Xin family? ? ? A native of Linyi, Shandong? ? ? I haven't watched it yet, so I'll give it five stars! !

This book is well written. I know very little about the Shang Dynasty. I recently learned more about Jian Shang. The author must have read Jian Shang, and even came up with the idea of writing this book because of this. I admire the author's courage very much. I also thought about writing a novel, but I could only write one chapter in two hours. My roommate thought it was rubbish after reading it, so I stopped writing. I have no time to write novels after going to work, but I still like to read novels. Being able to restore the history of more than 3,300 years ago from only a few words of historical records, the author is still capable, but the development is too slow. I don't know whether the outline is the life of the protagonist Xin Qu, or whether it is mainly about the protagonist, passed down from generation to generation or even the entire tribe, but judging from the title of the book, it should be mainly about the life of the protagonist Xin Qu. Now it is gradually entering the main line and is about to contact Pan Geng. Then within a few years, it will dominate the Haihe River Basin and become a kingdom of ten thousand households. Then it will support Zixun in fighting for the throne and absorb energy. Within ten years, it will completely reject Hebei (north of the Yellow River, Jizhou among the nine states, including today's Hebei, Lu, Beijing, Tianjin, Jinliao) and even Hexi. When Pan Geng moved to Yin, he launched a revolution (removing the Mandate of Heaven), changed dynasties, and established the dynasty with the surname 㛙

Overall, it's pretty good. If you can keep reading, this is the update... Is it slow? Please update quickly!

The writing is still great, the character logic is online, and it is a cool article. You can read it. The only flaw is that the characters are too mature and have no sense of ignorance of that era. The protagonist is a time traveler, so everything he says and does is understandable. However, what other characters say does not sound like what a savage says, and each tribal leader does not seem to be at the level that a savage leader should have. Perhaps he should give wisdom to others.

After reading this book, my heart couldn't calm down for a long time! This book has a novel concept, unique subject matter, clear paragraphs, strange plot, ups and downs, clear main line, fascinating, and shows extraordinary literary skills in the ordinary. It can be said that every word is precious, every sentence is a classic, and it is a model that our generation should learn from. From the perspective of novel art, it may not be too successful, but its experimental significance is far greater than the success itself. A galloping horse, shooting a vulture and drawing a bow, heaven and earth are in my heart! This book is worthy of being the new generation of pioneers in the nonsensical world! This is a rare novel that rekindles the fire of hope in my heart.

This Zhou Si takes herself too damn seriously, and so does the protagonist. I feel like giving a dog too many privileges and preferential treatment to a woman, it feels too licking.