I Treat You Like a Childhood Sweetheart, but You Want to Attack Me?

Hello everyone, I am the author(◍•ᴗ•◍) Because this book was first published on Qidian, I haven't paid much attention to QReading. It has been a long time since I finished this book. I accidentally took a look at it and found that so many people have read it. I am very happy. There are also many book friends who voted for me and gave me rewards. I would like to thank you all here. It is my first time to write a book, and there must be many shortcomings and even bad points. However, everyone is still willing to tolerate me and encourage me. The author is really grateful. There are too many previous comments so I won't go back and reply. If friends have anything to say, ask, or have any opinions, you can leave a message below this post and I will reply.

I listened to it elsewhere for 8 hours, and I found the original book if I was interested. ٩(•̤̀ᵕ•̤́๑)ᵒᵏᵎᵎᵎᵎ is sweet enough. Come on, the author (ง •̀_•́)ง!

I read the beginning... Frankly, it's a bit overwhelming. Judging from the description, the male protagonist was completely bullied one-sidedly until he was twenty years old. When the plot happened, his first reaction towards the female protagonist was fear. If he falls in love with the heroine under such circumstances, it can only be Stockholm Syndrome. In other words, this is a morbid psychological phenomenon. Therefore, the basic setting of this game is very strange. But it might be enough if you mix it with female videos... Quite a few of the works in female videos have quite weird views.

Generally speaking, regarding this book, I tell the truth. At this level, I don't say that my words are unpleasant. I just say a few words about the matter. Actually, although it is my first time to write a book, but it can be written like this, I won't hold back, and I will go straight to the point. My comments are about the matter and not the person, right, then I will say it directly. If you, the author, think that what I say is unpleasant, oh, don't take it to heart. Okay, all the above is polite. I personally think the writing is quite good and the plot is okay. It is the most realistic novel I have read so far. Except for rebirth, everything should be possible in reality. Each chapter will not feel boring. The word count is relatively small, but at the same time, there are no unnecessary chapters. In short, I give the author real support and encouragement. Okay, that's it. It's not real anymore.

At the beginning, the story was quite exciting, but later it became a bit boring. Since this is probably the first time for the author to write a book, I would like to give it five stars for encouragement. Authors can go to Bilibili to read the novels they wrote, such as Jian Feng Xiaodong, etc. It is more recommended to learn from them.

There is no big conflict. The feelings of the male and female protagonists are revealed in the ordinary life. Why is this not what people yearn for in real life? Unfortunately, we neither live in novels nor do we have the aura of the protagonist.

The overall sweetness of the book is okay, but the pace is too fast. It's understandable that the author is not too enthusiastic about writing a book for the first time. He is still grasping the shaping of the characters. Overall, it is quite good.

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Chapter 15, between a man and a woman who are not even in an ambiguous period, would they blatantly say "I want the scarf to smell like you"? And the most important thing is that this sentence was said by the male protagonist. In the article, the male protagonist can't see that he has made a big difference to the female protagonist. Don't you think it's strange to sit there? Does this conform to the logic of a person who just rejected the heroine? I can see from the details that the author had no intention of writing this book. He had no intention of properly handling the relationship between the two parties and gradually warming up to advance the plot. It was purely for the sake of sweetness, and he abandoned logic and brain for the sake of sweetness. The result is that some details are directly explosive, and they are all cancer.

Very good book, I like it very much, the author writes well