
Good Pregnancy and Childbirth: Save the Bai Yueguang Door Whistle at the Beginning!
About This Novel
[System + Childbirth + Sweet Pet] In the 21st century, Sulu was grieved because of the sacrifice of Bai Yueguang's door flute, and accidentally activated the good pregnancy system. He was bound by the system, entered the Holy Demon Continent, and became one of the tribesmen of the Star Demon God. And relying on the system, she went to the dream paradise to save her White Moonlight Door Flute! This time, she wants to save Mendi, rewrite the other party's fate, and rewrite the situation in the Holy Demon Continent! [Door whistle, here I come!
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Official(51)Scraped 18d ago
Beautiful (♥∀♥)! ! ! ! Really, really, really, push push push
I was attracted to Mendi at first, and I endured it after reading a few chapters, but then I really couldn't stand it anymore... Mendi and A'bao both liked the heroine when they met, and A'bao was even written as a jealous, tsundere and weird dog licker... Fengxiu also liked the heroine... It's outrageous, Sister Da, I'm really feeling unwell, I'm sorry😐
Wuwuwuwu, Wuwuwuwu, it's so miserable.
The story is very well written, and everyone is very happy, especially Mendi, who is simply happy. But why, Abao is so miserable. I was lamenting his misery earlier, but after reading this paragraph in the last chapter, I couldn't stop crying. --[I have never experienced being loved and affectionate in my life, but I gave all my love to my beloved woman and her children! -- Wuwuwu, why don't you love A Bao? His name is Bao A, A Bao, but why is Bao not loved or taken into consideration? Wuwuwu, why do you bully Bao? Is it the old saying that everything is doomed in fate, cannot be changed, cannot be undone, can only be accepted? Bao is not loved... Oooooooooo!
I really can't stand it! ㄟ( ▔, ▔ )ㄏThe plot is really a bit outrageous, I just can't stand it anyway
6
Is Feng Aotian the type? I thought it was pure love for Mendi, but in the beginning, Abao was in love with Fengxiu and Fengxiu wanted to get married. Fengxiu is still a domineering type, what an old routine, "Woman, you caught my attention", it's numb.
It's a bit insulting to Po. He fell in love with the heroine when he saw it. I laughed to death😔😔😔
It's very interesting, and it's rare to see a fan of the Divine Seal who is a female channel, or from the Mendi (Demon Clan) side, but I have a little immature suggestion, that is, can you break the sentences properly, and don't break the ones that shouldn't be broken? 😶It's a bit brain-consuming😜
I can't understand it, you know?
I actually saw some comments in the comment section saying it was good-looking and so on, so I still had hope. But actually after watching it, I don't quite understand those people who said it looked good. The author must be a novice. There are many typos and sentence fragmentation is not very smooth. The plot is very embarrassing. The heroine fell in love at first sight just after passing through the door whistle, and then said something very domineering, such as "Stop crying, I don't want to see you cry." Then I felt that the plot was a bit mindless. After Fengxiu met the heroine, he became interested in her. He was sitting on the handle of the throne and said it was a bit cute. I felt that this was really OOC and very mindless, you know? ? ? It seems that people who meet the heroine must fall in love at first sight. After meeting twice, they can kiss directly, and then the people next to them will be particularly jealous? ? ? I don't quite understand it. I rarely write negative reviews. I really can't stand this one. I couldn't stand it after reading a few pictures. In fact, I also want to avoid some thunderstorms for everyone. Finally, these are personal opinions and do not represent public preferences. 👿I also hope some little fans won't come here to troll me.
The author is very good at writing. It's so beautiful. I highly recommend it.
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Official(51)Scraped 18d ago
Beautiful (♥∀♥)! ! ! ! Really, really, really, push push push
I was attracted to Mendi at first, and I endured it after reading a few chapters, but then I really couldn't stand it anymore... Mendi and A'bao both liked the heroine when they met, and A'bao was even written as a jealous, tsundere and weird dog licker... Fengxiu also liked the heroine... It's outrageous, Sister Da, I'm really feeling unwell, I'm sorry😐
Wuwuwuwu, Wuwuwuwu, it's so miserable.
The story is very well written, and everyone is very happy, especially Mendi, who is simply happy. But why, Abao is so miserable. I was lamenting his misery earlier, but after reading this paragraph in the last chapter, I couldn't stop crying. --[I have never experienced being loved and affectionate in my life, but I gave all my love to my beloved woman and her children! -- Wuwuwu, why don't you love A Bao? His name is Bao A, A Bao, but why is Bao not loved or taken into consideration? Wuwuwu, why do you bully Bao? Is it the old saying that everything is doomed in fate, cannot be changed, cannot be undone, can only be accepted? Bao is not loved... Oooooooooo!
I really can't stand it! ㄟ( ▔, ▔ )ㄏThe plot is really a bit outrageous, I just can't stand it anyway
6
Is Feng Aotian the type? I thought it was pure love for Mendi, but in the beginning, Abao was in love with Fengxiu and Fengxiu wanted to get married. Fengxiu is still a domineering type, what an old routine, "Woman, you caught my attention", it's numb.
It's a bit insulting to Po. He fell in love with the heroine when he saw it. I laughed to death😔😔😔
It's very interesting, and it's rare to see a fan of the Divine Seal who is a female channel, or from the Mendi (Demon Clan) side, but I have a little immature suggestion, that is, can you break the sentences properly, and don't break the ones that shouldn't be broken? 😶It's a bit brain-consuming😜
I can't understand it, you know?
I actually saw some comments in the comment section saying it was good-looking and so on, so I still had hope. But actually after watching it, I don't quite understand those people who said it looked good. The author must be a novice. There are many typos and sentence fragmentation is not very smooth. The plot is very embarrassing. The heroine fell in love at first sight just after passing through the door whistle, and then said something very domineering, such as "Stop crying, I don't want to see you cry." Then I felt that the plot was a bit mindless. After Fengxiu met the heroine, he became interested in her. He was sitting on the handle of the throne and said it was a bit cute. I felt that this was really OOC and very mindless, you know? ? ? It seems that people who meet the heroine must fall in love at first sight. After meeting twice, they can kiss directly, and then the people next to them will be particularly jealous? ? ? I don't quite understand it. I rarely write negative reviews. I really can't stand this one. I couldn't stand it after reading a few pictures. In fact, I also want to avoid some thunderstorms for everyone. Finally, these are personal opinions and do not represent public preferences. 👿I also hope some little fans won't come here to troll me.
The author is very good at writing. It's so beautiful. I highly recommend it.










