Forbidden Land of the Underworld
by Mushroom Stewed French Fries
About This Novel
My name is Chen Baoshan. I have been disliked by people in the village since I was a child. They all call me the Son of Death because I was born in a coffin. What's even more bizarre is that on the third night after I was born, my father hung himself from the big locust tree at the door, and his blood flowed into the house. But before he died, my grandfather peeled off a piece of human skin and wore it on me...
What Readers Think
Rating
Community(0)
Official(16)Scraped 11d ago
The novel is good and beautiful.
The novel is essentially good, the atmosphere is well rendered, and it can bring people with rich imaginations into a fantasy world. But for people with poor imagination, it seems a bit embarrassing. The only thing that doesn't work is that the protagonist is good at ink, and she's also a bitch, and she's still kind of soft-hearted. The writing is a bit annoying. Please change it a little bit. At least don't be as cowardly as you write. Like in the first few pictures, when someone hits you, why don't you fight back? Damn it, others hit you, why do you still help them? It just feels like a very holy mother bitch. I can't stand it anymore. I only made it to chapter 35. If you continue, I will quit.
not good
The protagonist looks like a fool at the beginning Not recommended to enter the trap
Why
It's a virgin bitch again, it's a novice again Really boring When I saw ghosts blowing out lamps, I should have gone to third grade again There were smart phones at that time, but they were very expensive and I couldn't afford them. I used a push-button phone, which was much better than yours.
A total of four average
Without Taoist friends to test the poison, what should we do...
The introduction is so scary
The author is great... No wonder the subscription collection of this book is so low... I was frightened by your introduction as soon as I came in. I really didn't dare to read it... Because I was originally afraid of those weird things... I am timid... Others probably don't dare to read it. I think the introduction can be changed, so that it is not so scary... It is more than 900,000 words, and it is less than 1,000 collections... You can try to change the introduction... After all... It's really scary... Woo woo
Not bad
But please correct me. Don't be lazy and just use me when typing the main character's name. It's too lazy😘 By the way, it's free anyway. If you don't like the first part, just pull it to the last part. There's a surprise😘
curious
Curious why no book friends have read this book? 🌝
Chen Baoshan's grandfather is a bit scary. He went out and did something unknown, and then brought back the coffins of Chen Baoshan's parents. First, he said that his grandfather was awesome. He carried three coffins by himself, and then... It felt a little creepy.
What a sin Chen Baoshan is simply a magical person Because he is extraordinary Chen Baoshan was born in a coffin, which made the superstitious villagers feel very bad about him. Coupled with some evil things, Chen Baoshan was labeled as unknown.
Unreasonable start
The logic of the first 20 pictures is confusing. The protagonist knows Taoism, but doesn't know what his grandfather is going to do. He even gets out of the coffin. After his grandfather dies, he starts to slay demons, and the opponent is obviously better than him. You don't need to think about it. The first thing is that it is either the treasure or his fate that saved him. The logical thinking is not clear, and there is no character introduction at all, so the fight begins.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(16)Scraped 11d ago
The novel is good and beautiful.
The novel is essentially good, the atmosphere is well rendered, and it can bring people with rich imaginations into a fantasy world. But for people with poor imagination, it seems a bit embarrassing. The only thing that doesn't work is that the protagonist is good at ink, and she's also a bitch, and she's still kind of soft-hearted. The writing is a bit annoying. Please change it a little bit. At least don't be as cowardly as you write. Like in the first few pictures, when someone hits you, why don't you fight back? Damn it, others hit you, why do you still help them? It just feels like a very holy mother bitch. I can't stand it anymore. I only made it to chapter 35. If you continue, I will quit.
not good
The protagonist looks like a fool at the beginning Not recommended to enter the trap
Why
It's a virgin bitch again, it's a novice again Really boring When I saw ghosts blowing out lamps, I should have gone to third grade again There were smart phones at that time, but they were very expensive and I couldn't afford them. I used a push-button phone, which was much better than yours.
A total of four average
Without Taoist friends to test the poison, what should we do...
The introduction is so scary
The author is great... No wonder the subscription collection of this book is so low... I was frightened by your introduction as soon as I came in. I really didn't dare to read it... Because I was originally afraid of those weird things... I am timid... Others probably don't dare to read it. I think the introduction can be changed, so that it is not so scary... It is more than 900,000 words, and it is less than 1,000 collections... You can try to change the introduction... After all... It's really scary... Woo woo
Not bad
But please correct me. Don't be lazy and just use me when typing the main character's name. It's too lazy😘 By the way, it's free anyway. If you don't like the first part, just pull it to the last part. There's a surprise😘
curious
Curious why no book friends have read this book? 🌝
Chen Baoshan's grandfather is a bit scary. He went out and did something unknown, and then brought back the coffins of Chen Baoshan's parents. First, he said that his grandfather was awesome. He carried three coffins by himself, and then... It felt a little creepy.
What a sin Chen Baoshan is simply a magical person Because he is extraordinary Chen Baoshan was born in a coffin, which made the superstitious villagers feel very bad about him. Coupled with some evil things, Chen Baoshan was labeled as unknown.
Unreasonable start
The logic of the first 20 pictures is confusing. The protagonist knows Taoism, but doesn't know what his grandfather is going to do. He even gets out of the coffin. After his grandfather dies, he starts to slay demons, and the opponent is obviously better than him. You don't need to think about it. The first thing is that it is either the treasure or his fate that saved him. The logical thinking is not clear, and there is no character introduction at all, so the fight begins.
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