Saving Classics Starts from the Red Mansion

It can only be said that salt merchants are really rich. After all, relatively speaking, those who could control salt in ancient times were really rich, big and small. After all, it was too expensive. At that time

No, you want to resolve the grievances of the 12 Golden Hairpins, but Qin Keqing was already dead when you went there. Can this still be called the 12 Golden Hairpins? I don't understand.

The protagonist has already made a meritorious service and was awarded the title of earl, but he is still feeling aggrieved and resented in Jia's house. Jia's mother is always throwing all kinds of conspiracies at her, and the protagonist can only passively defend herself at every turn. It describes Jia Mu's eccentric second wife to the extreme. (It even feels a bit unintelligent) The protagonist's identity is earned by himself. He is the eldest son of the eldest brother, but he still has to help the second eldest brother wipe his ass everywhere. The protagonist knows the historical context of Red Mansions, but he doesn't change much. Can't figure out why. The description of Twelve Hairpins is also weird. Lin Daiyu becomes a casual person (she likes the protagonist, but doesn't take the initiative to do anything. Everything depends on the protagonist. She will be happy if the protagonist can marry her, but it doesn't matter if she can't marry someone else). Lin Daiyu is suddenly written as a very damn casual person. There are also Xue Baochai and so on. It can be said that the author wrote "The Red Mansion" too realistically. In it, men and women have no concept of love, and it doesn't matter who they marry. This is indeed the status quo of feudal society. But when I read novels, I don't read history. If the author doesn't adapt or add novel elements, then it's still a piece of cake.

Sister Lin uprooted the weeping willow, Pan Jinlian was loyal, and Xiao Qiao knelt down to play the flute. To save the classics, I need you. To save the beauties, I need you! ! !

The subject matter is quite good. The early writing was mediocre but there were new ideas and I could read it. However, the more I wrote, the more rubbish it became. There were many typos. I didn't see any improvement in the writing but rather a regression.

I'm afraid this isn't a nightmare. Let's change it to a system that wipes the Jia family's ass. The bunch of people in the Jia family are really disgusting and fucking disgusting gatekeepers! It's not wrong to take human life lightly, but this is the three views of gods. Shang Yang didn't even dare to say that.

In the last chapter, it was written that Xiang Ling is your maid, and in the next chapter, it is written that Xiang Ling and Xue Pan are going to have a child. That's why you wrote the first part of the article incorrectly and the second part of the article...

The first part was well written, but the Water Margin part was a little worse. After returning to the Red Mansion, it became even worse. After that, it became incomprehensible.

In the early stage, it was written that Yingchun was booked by Wang Shuirong of Beijing, Tanchun was booked by Niu Guogong's son, Jia Baoyu and Shi Xiangyun were booked, but in the later period, they were all gone. After becoming a prince, his titles were messy, and he called his mother what kind of Duke. The most disgusting thing was that the second wife was the same as his biological father. No, it should be said that he was his ancestor, or the kind of forced service. [Emot=default,01/]

The plot is basically the same, just a few names have been changed, Jiang Guogong has become Xu Guogong, haha ​​