My Copy Panel

The protagonist travels through three years without any cheats. When your family encounters big difficulties, a panel suddenly comes out. Don't you feel it's very abrupt? If you had traveled through time and had this panel, you would still be able to accept it. What the hell is going on when you show up a panel like this after the protagonist is in trouble? There is no foreshadowing. Just give you a panel when the protagonist encounters difficulties. I was so fucking confused when I saw him. You write an invincible flow. If it is from the day of time travel, there will be a panel. Then after three years of hard work, the protagonist stepped forward when the family was in trouble. Isn't this delicious? I've read thousands of novels, but none of them suddenly showed up like you. At least give me a reason. Even if it is outrageous, I can accept it. In particular, isn't it normal operation for this kind of time-travel text to come with a cheat? Even the late arrival of Goldfinger can be said to be loading. Just follow me and this one comes out of nowhere without explaining why, and it's just right, stuck when the protagonist is in trouble. At this point, I have to sigh that the protagonist is the protagonist. When encountering difficulties, a golden finger will appear.

The background of the novel is really a bit nonsense. Our disciples often go to the streets to kill people and rob civilian girls. They have to rebel long ago. It is really poisonous.

The logic is smooth. The writing style is also good, there is no forced pretentiousness or intellectual hypocrisy. The world at the beginning must be written well, otherwise the outline will be flawed if it is too fast.

The quality of the book is very good, I insisted on two copies

The copy you wrote is much longer than the main world. Isn't this nonsense?

The content of the book is too monotonous! Almost all the characters are mentioned in passing. After reading more than 200 chapters, I can't remember anyone except the protagonist! To put it simply, this book has no soul!

Come on, come on, come on, come on

The writing style is good and there are very few logical loopholes. He is an excellent writer. Unfortunately, there are too many primary school students here to see the merit of such an excellent work.

"There are three immortals in the world." "First, the physical body will not fall, and the soul will not be destroyed." "This is also the pursuit of many Qi refiners, but I have never heard of anyone achieving it." "This kind of immortality is like a flower in a mirror, a flower in the water, a moon in the water, something you can only hope for but cannot achieve." "Second, the bloodline is immortal." "Ordinary people pass down their blood and reproduce from generation to generation, but an accident may cause the inheritance to be cut off." "This kind of immortality is extremely fragile." "Third, thoughts are immortal." "Writing books and preaching, broadcasting to the world, in this way, humanity will not be destroyed, and I will not be destroyed." "This kind of immortality is the great way."

I think it's pretty good, but it's too fast and the pace is too fast. I guess the author won't be able to write many chapters later.