Gundam Earth Federation Struggle from Another World

Gundam Earth Federation Struggle from Another World

by Qian Yichen

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About This Novel

Fans of Shangguan Xuanyi Gundam Jiaoluo were selected by the Creation System and traveled to the interstellar colonial era. This world has similar Gundam aircraft, including the eighty-eight constellation aircraft, and the Greek mythology aircraft. You are welcome to provide your original settings, and this author can write them in. This book is slowly gaining popularity, and it is my first time writing a book. Please bear with me and give me your opinions. Group number 736399598

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Book Friends 2021072900065210252mo ago

I'm not going to sign a contract for this book, but I'm going to show it to some student parties, and I'm going to generate electricity for love.

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Zhatian Gang--jun Bufan50mo ago

Let the author open a KouKou group

In this case, those who like Gundam can discuss it in the group, and play Gundam Clash and Gundam Showdown together. It can be treated as a group discussing adding Black Plus and creating a mecha together (it's convenient for recruiting people, the name of my game is in the picture)

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Zhatian Gang--jun Bufan50mo ago

Here are some suggestions:

1: The author can focus on describing some battle scenes with as much detail as possible 2: The dialogue can be reduced appropriately, and more descriptions of the characters' body movements and expressions can be added (some chapters are all words🤐) 3: It is necessary to shape the character's personality and use subtle body movements or expressions to highlight the personality characteristics of a certain character. 4: Others are also old glue guys. I hope this book will get better and better as time goes by. If I have the opportunity, I can give a detailed review (doge)

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Zhatian Gang--jun Bufan50mo ago

By the way, is this the type of Suzaku the author wants?

They all feel good and can be used as the prototype of Suzaku.

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Zhatian Gang--jun Bufan50mo ago

It seems that there are fewer people

Hey, I really seem to see fewer people

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Book Friends 2021072900065210250mo ago

It's impossible to write a book about eunuchs, don't worry

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Book Friends 2021072900065210250mo ago

Suzaku is not a constellation of eighty-eight. As one of the four ancient holy beasts, the second form will be formed with particle wings. I also want to draw a concept map. The key is that I don't know an artist. Let others draw it. It requires money. It is a long-range heavy firepower machine.

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Book Friends 2021072900065210252mo ago

The reason why this chapter is short is because the Earth chapter will come to an end. The machines fighting on the Earth still have limitations, and some machines cannot yet exert their maximum performance. Only fighting in the universe can the maximum performance of the machines be brought out.

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Book Friends 2021072900065210252mo ago

I was so sleepy yesterday that I fell asleep while typing.

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Zhatian Gang--jun Bufan51mo ago

This book suits my taste

When writing a book, pay attention to punctuation marks and sentences, and be careful to add double quotation marks. The subject of the book is good, the money is not bad, so write well. I'll give you a five-star review for the first time.

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