The Strongest Evolution

Author, let me give you my opinion. The beginning of your book is very good, but the end is unfinished. Personally speaking, starting from Chapter 18, I feel that I have no interest in reading anymore. It is invincible from the beginning. What's the use? How can I keep writing this? It feels like the protagonist has become a monk, his six roots are pure, he has no desires and no desires, so what's the point of his life? And the most puzzling thing is why the "maximizing the system's brain power" at the beginning comes from. Is it to get the system? But the literary comprehensiveness has not shown up, and I think it must be so boring to write it down, and I don't want to read it anymore. This is a fact, don't criticize it if you don't like it.

Is the protagonist such a virgin? The Lin brothers and sisters are just friends to him. They are not even close friends, but they only help them so much. Should I say that the protagonist is a fool, or a holy mother?

Don't know who it is at the beginning? Is the protagonist How did I feel about the protagonist at the end? What about working for the declination? Why do you feel like the side character is more awesome than the protagonist? And whether the little mouse protects the protagonist or the protagonist changes the little mouse. Go out and protect others.

I don't like this type of book. It feels like the protagonist has no trump cards and leaves everything to others. It feels like others are luckier than the protagonist, and the protagonist has no sense of existence.

The pace of the book is too fast, and the collapse will be very thorough later on. You can try slowing down the pace.

Because from the perspective of the world view of this book, this is not a world of high martial arts, but the protagonist is equivalent to having the mental skills that a world of high martial arts has. But judging from the timeline, there is no way to completely leave the base city for more than 800 years. If more people understand the mind method, then the increase in vitality will not be so difficult. There will be no problem leaving the base city. But if there is no way out, it means that there are not many or even none people who can understand the mind method. Then why is there a woman in the same city who has also understood this mental method like the protagonist, and is many levels higher than the protagonist. She seems to be younger, but the protagonist has a system to help brain development, which means it is easier to understand, but that person is higher than her? Moreover, the protagonist's sister still has a very powerful power in other universes to help her increase her vitality. Her vitality increased by 1W+ in one night? It feels like the author has finished writing the article and it is out of outline, so he started to withdraw things to other worlds. And if nothing else, why do the four great classics still exist and be imagined in the dreams of the protagonist after being nearly 1,000 years old and experiencing a cataclysm? The loophole itself is too right No matter which world you are in, you are invincible A fire elf crushes the lava lord, or a freshly lit fire elf

It was fine in the beginning, but it fell apart in the middle and later stages.

It was good at first, but then it became too rubbish and had no common sense.

If you upgrade too quickly in the early stage, it will definitely collapse later.

The front part of this book is okay, please update the back part.