Marvel: Draw the Ghost Corps at the Beginning
by The Name Of The Wine Is Wangyoujun
About This Novel
Chen Tian traveled through Marvel, came to this unpredictable world, and obtained the lottery system of the heavens! At the beginning, we drew the Ghost Corps! Unlimited explosive troops, endless supply, immortal! After that, there are thunder powers, time powers, various super powers, technology of the next hundred thousand years, various heavenly magic weapons, superpowers... And when Thanos comes, when he sees countless interstellar battleships, various star fortresses, and endless black figures... He stands at attention: Sorry, I'm on the wrong track, sorry to bother you.
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Official(39)Scraped 25d ago
Too many flaws
The plot is too confusing. If you don't even understand the order of the plot, don't write a fanfic.
It's very well written, don't write it next time and let the readers go.
........................I didn't understand it, the dialogue was awkward and things were not explained clearly.
Long-winded
I think so too, it's really verbose
I thought you wrote a Marvel fanfic, but you ended up writing a bunch of stuff💩
There's not much to say, I think I can recommend Chapter 112 before
Killing increases proficiency? Modern background? That being the case; using electricity to generate magnetism and sinking a group of dwarf islands with a population in the east is not directly super-god ; the author's pattern is open
The writing generally has too many flaws. . . Make up the word count
113 I changed the book since I started, I don't know why, please explain.
What the hell, 113 started scribbling. What the hell
The more you write, the more outrageous it becomes. Where has the plot gone, and why are you still charging? Fortunately, I didn't buy many chapters.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(39)Scraped 25d ago
Too many flaws
The plot is too confusing. If you don't even understand the order of the plot, don't write a fanfic.
It's very well written, don't write it next time and let the readers go.
........................I didn't understand it, the dialogue was awkward and things were not explained clearly.
Long-winded
I think so too, it's really verbose
I thought you wrote a Marvel fanfic, but you ended up writing a bunch of stuff💩
There's not much to say, I think I can recommend Chapter 112 before
Killing increases proficiency? Modern background? That being the case; using electricity to generate magnetism and sinking a group of dwarf islands with a population in the east is not directly super-god ; the author's pattern is open
The writing generally has too many flaws. . . Make up the word count
113 I changed the book since I started, I don't know why, please explain.
What the hell, 113 started scribbling. What the hell
The more you write, the more outrageous it becomes. Where has the plot gone, and why are you still charging? Fortunately, I didn't buy many chapters.
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