I Used Mc to Build a House, and the Immortal Cultivators Thought it Was a Cave
About This Novel
My name is Luo Lingshan. A terrible disaster has occurred in my sect. Recently, unidentified strange square people often appear in the sect late at night, and various building materials have been stolen repeatedly. Later, we followed the clues and found that it came from a mysterious place with strong aura, where there were all kinds of strange and strange buildings. The elders of the sect suspected that this was a cave opened in ancient times, and that the strange square man was the ultimate emperor weapon that was refined and transported automatically by the ancient emperor. The elders are thinking about how to seal this cube man and occupy the cave heaven paradise here, but I seem to have an ominous premonition. ... My name is Lu Ling, and I am a MC player. Recently, I loaded a strange module, and the various building images and NPCs in it are extremely realistic. Especially in the game scene called Lingmai Sect, the variety of building materials is dazzling. There are many taboos in the sect, and there are formations to stop them. But, hehe~ Who can stop Steve? Just when I was finishing stealing materials and building a house at home, a group of NPCs wielding staffs and swords suddenly came and wanted to occupy my house. "Hey, there are also A·RPG elements? It doesn't look like the Legion of Disaster!" But whatever. Twitter! Look at my invincible obsidian sword and endermen army! ... Lu Ling: I don't know why they knelt down and respected me as a boss when I was just building a house, and they insisted on making me an elder! Until later, when the Obsidian Hell Gate sent out a golden elixir to the real world, and seeing the residual warmth of the golden elixir, Lu Ling felt that this module was not simple. [MC+spiritual recovery+behind-the-scenes acting+module]
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Official(7)Scraped 21d ago
I can't say it's bad, I can't say it's very good either. The book is quite good. There are no bad points or any inconveniences. It just doesn't meet my expectations. It was too average in the early stage. I was attracted by your title. What I wanted to read before I came in was a novel world view and a novel story. But in the end, there was nothing in the early stage. It's a very average novel. If there is a twist later, I would be willing to give you a higher rating.
What is the significance of reality line and why should we write it?
After reading the full text, the subject matter of this book is still very novel and interesting. Here are some personal suggestions for the author: 1. The first is the combat power system. From the looks of it, this article should be a growth story rather than a cool story. However, even if it is a cool story, the protagonist's combat power should not grow too high or too fast, lest the protagonist's combat power will directly fly into a great cool story. 2. World settings. The author has added a lot of modules to "Fairyland". Personally, I think it is best to add modules when the previous module has been written to the late stage and slowly lay the groundwork. Adding too many modules will bring a lot of complex settings to the world. It is easy to forget some world settings after writing them. Just like a two-dimensional game, it is best for the author to conceive the main plot of a large version. What is the main content of this large version? After the large version is about to end, some plots of the new large version (module) can be laid out in it, so that it can also lay down the foreshadowing. In the early stage of the single MC module of the Immortal Domain Spirit Vein Sect, the author largely focused on the destruction and reorganization of the Spirit Vein Sect. In the middle stage, the addition of new modules brought changes to the world. I personally think that the new module should not be added so early. First of all, the Lingmai Sect has just established its vitality and is in conflict with the Soul Palace. The author can definitely write the storyline of the Soul Palace, the Lingmai Sect and the Yin Sect first. After the incident, the Lingmai Sect and the Yin Sect have almost recovered and then expand the entire fairy world. After all, the Lingmai Sect and the Yin Sect are only two of the small sects. At this time, the impact of the new module on the fairy world can be paved. 3. The protagonist's abilities. In fact, MC has many props. Currently, the protagonist has only shown a corner of them. This book talks about Immortal Cave Sky and MC. The protagonist can use MC props to build a series of things in the fairy world to mitigate the disasters caused by the new module to the world, reflecting the setting of the protagonist as an immortal and leaving legends of immortal caves everywhere. 4. Finally, the world view of this book is huge. The hundreds of chapters are half the reality line and half the fairyland. The fairyland has only talked about the destruction and establishment of the Spiritual Vein Sect and the history of the Spiritual Vein Sect. I personally hope that the author can write more about the Immortal Realm in detail, write about the rebirth of the Spirit Vein Sect, other stories about the Yin Sect, and the ending of the Soul Palace, and then expand on the changes brought about by various sects and empires in the Immortal Realm continent as well as various modules. At the same time, why did the protagonist come to this planet, why did the mutation occur, how to solve the mutation in the end, and what will happen after the mutation is solved. There is a reasonable explanation for the protagonist's origin and destination. The above are my personal suggestions to the author. I like this book very much. I hope the author can write it carefully and give this book a good beginning and ending.
Lala, lala, lala, lala, lala, lala, lala, lala, lala.
Very good book, not bad, good work
It's too watery, and the writing is not good, it's all about then and there, and it's annoying to watch.
It's so good. The author will update it soon.
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Official(7)Scraped 21d ago
I can't say it's bad, I can't say it's very good either. The book is quite good. There are no bad points or any inconveniences. It just doesn't meet my expectations. It was too average in the early stage. I was attracted by your title. What I wanted to read before I came in was a novel world view and a novel story. But in the end, there was nothing in the early stage. It's a very average novel. If there is a twist later, I would be willing to give you a higher rating.
What is the significance of reality line and why should we write it?
After reading the full text, the subject matter of this book is still very novel and interesting. Here are some personal suggestions for the author: 1. The first is the combat power system. From the looks of it, this article should be a growth story rather than a cool story. However, even if it is a cool story, the protagonist's combat power should not grow too high or too fast, lest the protagonist's combat power will directly fly into a great cool story. 2. World settings. The author has added a lot of modules to "Fairyland". Personally, I think it is best to add modules when the previous module has been written to the late stage and slowly lay the groundwork. Adding too many modules will bring a lot of complex settings to the world. It is easy to forget some world settings after writing them. Just like a two-dimensional game, it is best for the author to conceive the main plot of a large version. What is the main content of this large version? After the large version is about to end, some plots of the new large version (module) can be laid out in it, so that it can also lay down the foreshadowing. In the early stage of the single MC module of the Immortal Domain Spirit Vein Sect, the author largely focused on the destruction and reorganization of the Spirit Vein Sect. In the middle stage, the addition of new modules brought changes to the world. I personally think that the new module should not be added so early. First of all, the Lingmai Sect has just established its vitality and is in conflict with the Soul Palace. The author can definitely write the storyline of the Soul Palace, the Lingmai Sect and the Yin Sect first. After the incident, the Lingmai Sect and the Yin Sect have almost recovered and then expand the entire fairy world. After all, the Lingmai Sect and the Yin Sect are only two of the small sects. At this time, the impact of the new module on the fairy world can be paved. 3. The protagonist's abilities. In fact, MC has many props. Currently, the protagonist has only shown a corner of them. This book talks about Immortal Cave Sky and MC. The protagonist can use MC props to build a series of things in the fairy world to mitigate the disasters caused by the new module to the world, reflecting the setting of the protagonist as an immortal and leaving legends of immortal caves everywhere. 4. Finally, the world view of this book is huge. The hundreds of chapters are half the reality line and half the fairyland. The fairyland has only talked about the destruction and establishment of the Spiritual Vein Sect and the history of the Spiritual Vein Sect. I personally hope that the author can write more about the Immortal Realm in detail, write about the rebirth of the Spirit Vein Sect, other stories about the Yin Sect, and the ending of the Soul Palace, and then expand on the changes brought about by various sects and empires in the Immortal Realm continent as well as various modules. At the same time, why did the protagonist come to this planet, why did the mutation occur, how to solve the mutation in the end, and what will happen after the mutation is solved. There is a reasonable explanation for the protagonist's origin and destination. The above are my personal suggestions to the author. I like this book very much. I hope the author can write it carefully and give this book a good beginning and ending.
Lala, lala, lala, lala, lala, lala, lala, lala, lala.
Very good book, not bad, good work
It's too watery, and the writing is not good, it's all about then and there, and it's annoying to watch.
It's so good. The author will update it soon.
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