Collector of the Beauty World

Originally, the subject matter was okay, and the previous layout was reasonable. I used cheats to improve myself as much as possible, but as soon as I wrote about women, it turned into this competition thing! ! ! 1. There are too many typos and redundant words. It is suspected that the author did not check it at all and just threw it up casually; Chapter 2.41 Is so disgusting. The protagonist previously described that he passed the magic exam and could learn magic systematically. This opportunity is actually very difficult. It can supplement the protagonist's shortcomings. Then the author himself set that breaking school rules will result in expulsion. As a result, he surrendered after being ridden on the lap of a woman who failed the magic exam. He agreed to teach her the knowledge he learned in school, knowing that he would lose the opportunity to learn magic systematically if he was discovered, and he also felt that this woman might be in trouble, so he forcibly subdued her to accept her (very inconsistent with the previous character setting, a character with money, superpowers, tricks, and brains for planning)

Women can be accepted. People who are familiar with American TV shows, American movies, and American comics are all interested in accepting porn. If you meddle in your own business, you are a virgin bitch. If you see a woman unable to walk, you are stupid.

The ghost child Chucky, the nail-headed man, and the ghost boy have all appeared in movie Easter eggs, so they should be from the same world view.

The beginning is really lame, the subject matter is good but the writing is really bad

I gave up after reading the first chapter. The pig's feet were so rubbish. They were tortured by two gangsters even though they had golden fingers. I was speechless.

Generally, the transitions are a bit jarring and difficult to connect.

Did the author stop writing, or changed his vest? !

1. He is supposed to be a proactive hunter like the Zerg, to look for supernatural phenomena and then contain abnormal objects, but he went to learn magic halfway? 2. Learn magic. You said it is to complete the mysterious side. There are more and better choices in the mysterious side, such as the Holy Killer's revolver, which is immortal and will kill (the same goes for God). 3. It's okay to complete the mysterious side, but when you see a woman, you become a nanny. The beholder has a different opinion and a wise man has wisdom.

But you really don't have any good ideas. For example, if you ask the canary to take out the ownership of the item, let's not say whether it is good or not. It can be seen that you feel that the canary still has the final say whether to give the right or not. From this, I see that you are very rigid (and secondly, taking it by force is not right). This style is not a top-notch novel at all. For example. If you set the Ai program to say 'Thank you!', It will only say thank you, but when people use the same two words, they will say 'Thank you!' And 'Thank you X!' So the same words and context. As a living person who thinks independently, you should change. In short, you are so unqualified!

Ever since Martin became a god, it looked so chaotic from the back, he was acting like a ghost, his sentences were not smooth in some places, and he looked a little confused.