Era: Starting from the Ordinary World

The author probably hasn't watched this TV series, but has probably read other Siheyuan fan novels, and they are very violent ones. The contrast between the settings of many important characters is too great

I would like to give you five points to encourage you to write more novels about the ordinary world, but whether you can write about one's own struggles, I have read a lot of books and there is a system. It feels very boring to sign in and sign in a lot of supplies. I hope the author can improve it next time he writes.

The author doesn't feel any problems elsewhere, except in the greenhouse, which is too taken for granted. I suggest the author take a look at the ordinary world of mountain farmers and the situation of rural collectives among farmers in that era. [Emot=default,07/] Why can't I send it? ?

Let me give you a suggestion, just write it in one and a half words. In addition, sheep grazing has been prohibited in Yan'an area to prevent soil erosion. Lu Yao is from Qingjian County, and Shuangshui Village should be written around Yanchang. Therefore, after substitution, Shaoan should attend middle school in Yan'an. The geographical location of the three mountains and two rivers in the book should be the intersection of Pagoda Mountain, Qingliangshui, Phoenix Mountain and Yanhe River. Also, you don't have to be so bold, don't be so rich, just eat enough. During this period, it is a sin to be full, after all, everyone is hungry! Also, at that time, if you ate meat, I can guarantee that the smell of meat would float five miles down the wind. So if you keep eating meat, you are seeking death. Moreover, the family tradition of the Wang family is not good, and many people are paying attention. Otherwise, I wouldn't have bought rat poison, and I would have been sent to a labor camp.

Other people's plug-ins give you more things as you upgrade. You are doing the opposite. Upgrading gives you the same things, so why do you need plug-ins? Just stop bringing plug-ins and systems. It's useless to carry it with me. I'll just sign in and turn over and over again for decades in my life. There's nothing new or powerful, so what are you doing with the system?

The more I write, the more outrageous it becomes. Until I read more than 70 chapters about opening a black market, I can't stand it anymore. During the storm, everyone is cautious. You are so active. If you don't die, who will die?

The author's writing skills are good

I don't know why the copy from Qingmansiheyuan to the later copies is so violent. Is it because someone else has written it or is it because the author is not satisfied in reality? I feel like I enter the world just for the sake of rectification, and I have the attitude of looking askance at anyone who disobeys and killing them. If you don't like it, you can do some corrections and stop being so ruthless. After all, you just entered. And when you go in, they are all real people, not a bunch of data. You don't have to like it, but don't make fun of it. Let's take Zhengyangmen. Didn't Guan Xiaoguan avenge Han Chunming's kindness because of the antique? Didn't Taozi?

Educated youth, the most beautiful youth, old farmers, beautiful days, parents' love Traveling to Guandong, Bailuyuan, wealth, and love for the Great Northern Wilderness

Come on, I'm waiting for you to write about your parents' love