Tomb of Wu

The story is okay, but the writing is faulty! The number of words in Shui is too wordy to fill the whole article, and some of the plots are too blunt and illogical!

It's good-looking and very enjoyable. It's similar to the Ghost Exorcist Taoist I've seen. It's very flavorful. I agree and give it a thumbs up.

I listen to novels by voice, and I hear them every now and then, but, and, at this moment, even. . . . . . I just want to vomit.

Everything you write has to be written in a very awesome way. Do you really think the readers don't know who the protagonist is? The diary of a bad street

I don't understand! The protagonist has just been resurrected and is pretending to be cool for the first time. He attacks his son one after another. His dad is here and he doesn't even dare to let out a fart. He does whatever he says. This is not rational at all. It's just because his dad is too powerful and the protagonist is weak. In this way, when you treat other people's sons in the future, don't be aggressive and insist on killing them. The protagonist himself does not know that if his actions fail, his sister and mother will be even more miserable. It is better to be bullied by one person than to be bullied by thousands of people who are even more miserable. So I think it's very bullshit. The protagonist's attitude towards the enemy is very problematic. If you want to be hard, be hard to the end. If you want to be soft, be soft to the end. The front is still very hard. As soon as the father comes out, the protagonist softens up every minute. The father said that the protagonist in life and death fights also did not say a thing and agreed. I know that the protagonist has a halo, but the attitude towards the enemy is very important. Facing this kind of protagonist, I feel disgusted.

The enemy Wolf Warrior in Pig's Knuckle Village didn't slap him to death, Lin Jiamei didn't kill him with his own hands, he didn't kill the Halo King before entering the starry sky, and the Bi family didn't go for a stroll. Have you forgotten the vows you once made? This memory is also speechless. Can thoughts be clear through this kind of practice? 😂😂😂

I didn't like this book very much. All kinds of ideas and logic are acceptable. I couldn't stand it after reading it halfway through. Everything else is clear and logical. Only the fight is written too sloppily. Even if the protagonist has a deep foundation, it is impossible for leapfrog fights to be commonplace. Do you have a trump card that others don't? What's more, your realm is still lower than others. For example, if there is a child with a machete, ordinary adults may be afraid of it, but there are also some who are not afraid. All the fights in this book are over-level fights and wins. Even with the Chaos Demon Gods, don't you think about how many thousands of years they have lived without even one life-saving trump card? Just die. After living for so long, the understanding of laws and Tao is not as good as that of a protagonist who has lived for less than a few thousand years? Even if there is a formation diagram, you shouldn't be so worried. A person with a cultivation level below the emperor level can defeat five or six Chaos Demon Gods at once, and kill them as soon as they say they will. There are so many people who are more powerful than the protagonist and they all seduce the protagonist, and they get out easily. If you just write about a life-and-death situation and someone saves it, that's not much of a problem. A person who is a casual cultivator from start to finish, will his foundation be better than that of ancestral witches and so on? The realm of these ancestral witches is much higher than that of the protagonist. The protagonist can fight back to kill the demon, and finally the demon is killed in hell. . The protagonist has killed five or six demon gods, but the ancestral wizard can't? I really don't know why you want realm in your book. No one else's realm can be surpassed. In the protagonist's case, the emperor's realm has surpassed two realms to kill the supreme one, or he can kill a group of people. Why can't other great powers do it? If he is so powerful just because he is a martial arts cultivator, then who in the world would practice immortality or other things? Are you all practicing martial arts? Look at the ancient world that has directly isolated martial arts cultivators. This shows that there must be something wrong with Wu Xiu. Martial arts cultivation improves quickly, and lifespan can be increased. Fighting is so good, and there are no talent restrictions. As long as you have life, you can practice. It's really so good, it's just a person who has enough brains to practice martial arts. Who still practices immortality, let alone others. Really, as for the fight plot, this book is too brainless.

The plot is quite good, but the language organization skills are so poor that I can't understand it. Talking in a long-winded way

I read this novel two years ago and it was pretty good. It's pretty average and the writing is okay. Now I read it, and the plot is about 50% the same as other novels. It's uncomfortable. The chapters are a bit too watery. There are only a few things, and there are only over a hundred chapters. Can you try not to push me too hard if you can do it?

Eternal Sky Boat really created a new genre. Novel written more than ten years ago is now outdated.