
Douluo: My Sharingan is Not Serious
by Fallen Leeks
About This Novel
Ye Qiu travels through Douluo, The awakened red-eyed martial spirit unexpectedly appeared black magatama. The martial spirit has just become the Sharingan, The village chief took Xiao Wu home and stuffed him into his room. The moment Xiao Wu and Sharingan looked at each other, Immediately it turns red! Ye Qiu soon realized that his Sharingan seemed a little unnatural. It's a pair of eyes that have been kissed by a succubus! But this is just the passive effect of Ye Qiu's pair of Sharingan eyes. For those who don't like this, Ye Qiu also has a whole set of active skills. "Poor soul beast, immersed in the illusion of my kaleidoscope, obediently sacrifice it!" "One ring and two soul skills, all hunted souls are sacrificed!" "Please call me soul bone wholesaler!" "Tang San, suffer death!" The girls stood on the wooden dragon, looking at Ye Qiu who was driving the giant. Shout down below. "If you are enemies with Ye Qiu, you all have a way to die!"
What Readers Think
Rating
Community(0)
Official(112)Scraped 3d ago
support yourself
This is my first work, and it definitely has flaws, so I'd like to express my kindness...
.
I don't understand. Tang Hao is staring at Tang San, and the protagonist even brings the rabbit to join in the fun. It's simply... If he really wants to go, whether it's for martial arts or other purposes, the protagonist can achieve the goal first, and then think about how to arrange it later. If he succeeds quickly, he can change places with the rabbit, it's simple. It has to be done forcefully. Difficult to bear
Sure enough, *** the time traveler was an Indian
It's seventy-three chapters, and the character used to shape the protagonist's character, sb, is almost the same as Huo Yuhao's.
The plot is good, but there is no plot of torturing Tang San in these 50 pictures, and there is no specific plot of Shrek. Hurry up and write about Shrek, torture Tang San, and Dai Mubai, Oscar, Yu Xiaogang, Ma Hongjun, these characters have no plot of torture at all. Update quickly, update quickly, update Shrek plot quickly,
I have nothing to do, please read my comments. ∩ ∩ (´・Ω・) _| ⊃/(___ / └-(____/ Forget it, no one will watch for sure ⊂⌒/ヽ-__ /⊂_/____/  ̄ ̄ ̄ ̄ ̄ ̄ What if someone sees it? ∩∩ (´・Ω・) _| ⊃/(___ / └-(____/  ̄ ̄ ̄ ̄ ̄-
Very well written
This harem is okay, the characters are relatively three-dimensional. I look forward to the writing method of Shura Field in the future. Don't add old women. Moreover, if too many women are written, the characters will not be good. There are so many people of the same age, which will test the author's writing skills and the relationship between the characters.
A plot about a dying girl
Regarding chapters 31 and 44, Author, when you wrote the plot, didn't you consider some background or something? First of all, this timeline is the same as Xiao Wu's timeline. The protagonist should be eight to nine years old at this time, and in the original text, Zhu Zhuqing is the youngest of Shrek. In this timeline, Zhu Zhuqing should still be in the Star Luo Empire, not long after he awakened his martial spirit. Zhu Zhuqing's innate soul power is only level seven. He should be practicing hard in this timeline instead of being hunted down. Moreover, Zhu Zhuqing who took the initiative later is even more outrageous. Zhu Zhuqing is still engaged, how could he accept the protagonist? Moreover, Zhu Zhuqing in this timeline has the ability to escape from the Star Luo Empire. What's more, the Star Luo Empire is still heavily guarded. With Zhu Zhuqing's timeline, he was able to escape from the Star Luo Empire not long after he awakened his martial spirit. Zhu Zhuqing in this timeline should be six or seven years old
Among the ten books, six are about Douluo and two are about Dou Po.
I thought I was tired of reading Douluo fanfics, but the author's book still made my eyes shine. I really want to see the Shura field of the next few people. I would be even more excited if it could have yandere elements. 😽 Also, quick update. I can't sleep at night! ! !
Rating
Community(0)
Official(112)Scraped 3d ago
support yourself
This is my first work, and it definitely has flaws, so I'd like to express my kindness...
.
I don't understand. Tang Hao is staring at Tang San, and the protagonist even brings the rabbit to join in the fun. It's simply... If he really wants to go, whether it's for martial arts or other purposes, the protagonist can achieve the goal first, and then think about how to arrange it later. If he succeeds quickly, he can change places with the rabbit, it's simple. It has to be done forcefully. Difficult to bear
Sure enough, *** the time traveler was an Indian
It's seventy-three chapters, and the character used to shape the protagonist's character, sb, is almost the same as Huo Yuhao's.
The plot is good, but there is no plot of torturing Tang San in these 50 pictures, and there is no specific plot of Shrek. Hurry up and write about Shrek, torture Tang San, and Dai Mubai, Oscar, Yu Xiaogang, Ma Hongjun, these characters have no plot of torture at all. Update quickly, update quickly, update Shrek plot quickly,
I have nothing to do, please read my comments. ∩ ∩ (´・Ω・) _| ⊃/(___ / └-(____/ Forget it, no one will watch for sure ⊂⌒/ヽ-__ /⊂_/____/  ̄ ̄ ̄ ̄ ̄ ̄ What if someone sees it? ∩∩ (´・Ω・) _| ⊃/(___ / └-(____/  ̄ ̄ ̄ ̄ ̄-
Very well written
This harem is okay, the characters are relatively three-dimensional. I look forward to the writing method of Shura Field in the future. Don't add old women. Moreover, if too many women are written, the characters will not be good. There are so many people of the same age, which will test the author's writing skills and the relationship between the characters.
A plot about a dying girl
Regarding chapters 31 and 44, Author, when you wrote the plot, didn't you consider some background or something? First of all, this timeline is the same as Xiao Wu's timeline. The protagonist should be eight to nine years old at this time, and in the original text, Zhu Zhuqing is the youngest of Shrek. In this timeline, Zhu Zhuqing should still be in the Star Luo Empire, not long after he awakened his martial spirit. Zhu Zhuqing's innate soul power is only level seven. He should be practicing hard in this timeline instead of being hunted down. Moreover, Zhu Zhuqing who took the initiative later is even more outrageous. Zhu Zhuqing is still engaged, how could he accept the protagonist? Moreover, Zhu Zhuqing in this timeline has the ability to escape from the Star Luo Empire. What's more, the Star Luo Empire is still heavily guarded. With Zhu Zhuqing's timeline, he was able to escape from the Star Luo Empire not long after he awakened his martial spirit. Zhu Zhuqing in this timeline should be six or seven years old
Among the ten books, six are about Douluo and two are about Dou Po.
I thought I was tired of reading Douluo fanfics, but the author's book still made my eyes shine. I really want to see the Shura field of the next few people. I would be even more excited if it could have yandere elements. 😽 Also, quick update. I can't sleep at night! ! !



















