Traveling Through Tomb Robbing: from Jingjue Ancient City to Changbai Mountain

My friend who writes novels has opened a new hole. She showed me the beginning, and after I glanced at it twice, I poured cold water on her. "What you started with is as lukewarm as a glass of overnight boiled water. Who can drink it?" She was not convinced. I asked her to sit down and cut her open. The first knife: cut off the nonsense and see blood on the tip of the knife What does the web article begin with? It was the first gunshot on the battlefield, and the first look at each other during a blind date. You must make the other person either excited, nervous, or curious within three sentences. How does she write? "Gu Chen opened his eyes and found himself on a green train, with Hu Bayi sitting next to him..." It's over. Telling things plainly is like a glass of water. How to write it? "The 50 million lottery prize had not yet warmed up. When Gu Chen opened his eyes, he found that he had become Hu Ba's frail and sickly poor cousin, driving towards the grave." --The sense of loss (50 million) + the sense of strangeness (travel) + the sense of crisis (sickness + tomb robbing), the three senses are superimposed, and the conflict is directly embarrassing. Readers will immediately ask: What then? The second knife: Emotion is not an adjective, it is a physiological reaction She said she wrote "the main character is shocked." Shocked as hell. The shock is the earthquake in the pupils, the tightening of the throat, the rush of cold air from the soles of the feet to the sky, and the beating of the drum after the heart stops for a beat. It was screaming "My fifty million!" Over and over again in my head, and I wanted to slap myself in the face to see if it was a dream. The body is more honest than the mouth. Write down the physiological reactions and the emotions will be in place. The third knife: The system is not a manual, it is a life-saving straw Her system prompts are written like a mobile phone software update log. "Ding! Get Yinglong bloodline (elementary level), strength +10, agility +10..." Readers will just skim through it quickly without any disturbance. What is the system? It is a gun suddenly thrown to the protagonist in a desperate situation, and a rope suddenly grabbed when drowning. Obtaining bloodline should be like "a scorching torrent suddenly exploded, instantly overcoming the familiar feeling of weakness in the body, and it seemed as if the air could be crushed with a squeeze of five fingers!" The reader should be allowed to experience the "coolness" through the protagonist's true feelings, rather than looking at a cold list of items. The fourth knife: Information is not poured in, it is leaked out She throws the setting, background, and character relationships all at once to the readers through the "influx of memories." This is the laziest and stupidest way. Information should be like water in a colander, seeping out little by little. When writing about Hu Bayi, there is no need to introduce who he is. It was written that his "old military uniform was washed white, his brows were filled with composure and vigilance honed over years, and the hand that handed over the kettle was rough and calloused." Readers can naturally feel: This man is not simple, he looks like a veteran. The dialogue brings out "Uncle Nine" and "You are weak, don't show off". The relationship and background of the characters will naturally come out, which is a hundred times better than forcing it. The fifth knife: the ending is not a period, but a fishhook At the end of her first chapter, the protagonist is fine after receiving the reward. Readers also closed the book. The hook at the end is a must! "Before he could recover from the ecstasy of gaining strength, Gu Chen suddenly shuddered - a cold and biting breath, like a poisonous snake, floated faintly from the corner of the carriage." --Immediately establish new suspense and threats, making readers eager to click on the next chapter. Summary: Internet writing is not literature, it is swordsmanship. It precisely hits the readers' pleasure, itching and pain points. The first knife seals the throat with blood and establishes conflict. The second cut cuts through the emotions and makes readers feel the same. For the third time, give out golden fingers, but let the readers experience the feeling of pleasure. The fourth step is to lay out the settings quietly, so as not to choke the readers. The fifth blow, the hook at the end, kept him awake. If you practice these five swords well, no matter how gentle you are at the beginning, you can turn them into bloody swords. Don't please yourself, please readers.

I just said before that you must obey the command completely, or you will leave the team, but they didn't listen twice, and you have to save them instead. You are a nanny, which is thankless, and the mission does not require you to follow the archaeological team.

It's okay. You can take a look at it. It's basically based on the main line of the original novel and there's nothing new!

To be honest, I read the original work every day and follow the plot of the original work. There is nothing new. If it is about opposing the protagonist or adding some difficulties to him, it looks pretty good.

Never be gay, never be gay, never be gay, say important things three times

I don't know the specifics, but I still want to say, first of all, don't be invincible, otherwise it will be boring. Then have your own creativity and write some plots that are different from the original work. It is best to use your own creativity as the mainstay and the original line as the framework. This kind of plot is the best and can attract readers.

Make your novel more popular!

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Should I still write this book? If I don't write it, I won't read it.

There are no secrets at all. It's like being naked. Normal people know the principle of keeping wealth secret. Later, the whole world will probably catch the protagonist and slice it up to study the secret of immortality.