
Young White Horse: Entering the Tao Through Wine and Overpowering Li Hanyi
by Shi Yi
About This Novel
Baili Chunqiu traveled to a world where a young man with a white horse was drunk on the spring breeze. He became Baili Dongjun's twin brother, and also awakened the wine, sex, and wealth system! As long as you drink, capture beautiful women, make money, and become famous, you can get rewards. [Taste Qiu Lubai and gain innate martial arts! ] [Strike Mu Yumo and obtain the Heavenly Grade Martial Arts Shadow Step! ] [Inn under the name, made a fortune of one hundred thousand taels, obtained the Holy Spirit Sword Technique, twenty-three swords! ] [Li Hanyi forced the host to teach martial arts and obtain immortality! ] As a result, there was an invincible and invincible young master in the world. Baili Changge looked at Li Hanyi, Yueyao, Yi Wenjun, Mu Yumo and other beauties at home... His tone was helpless: "Although I drink, play cards, and listen to music." "But I'm really trying."
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Official(26)Scraped 2d ago
To be honest, so far, the story line feels very confusing to me.
Six, be honest with each other, and send v to Xu Jianxi, right?
Very good and beautiful, I like to watch it.
What are you writing about? I can't even understand it
Will the author accept Yi Wenjun and Yueyao?
I was looking forward to it, but it seems my expectations were in vain.
I read the content of your book before you changed it, and I thought it was okay. Then you changed the book directly. I was still confused when I read it. After reading the introduction, I realized that you had changed the book, but you didn't change the introduction. Who else wants to harm you? If you don't show it if you have strength, then why do you want strength? Are you waiting to be annulled? The original one is not good, so you have to change it.
I think Li Changsheng in the Young White Horse is quite contradictory and feels a bit hypocritical. Since there is Penglai, there are people who need to guard the Four Poles. Why not train Ye Dingzhi? , Since you don't worship him as your teacher, why don't you teach him the Immortal Book, and Lei Meng Kill, etc., And keep it alive? Also, Xiao Ruofeng, since he doesn't want to be the emperor, why don't you train him and let him control the four extremes? Isn't he? Li Changsheng's talent is rated as top-notch. Just looking at Li Changsheng's pretense, I really haven't seen what he has done to cultivate, discover talents, resist and transport talents for the world and protect the world.
It's very messy, very messy. What is the outline of your writing? It's so chaotic. You just talk about breaking off the engagement.
This is something a human can write
If you don't have any ideas or logic, don't write if you can't write. Read more books.
It's too watery, the watery part can't be in the watery part
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Official(26)Scraped 2d ago
To be honest, so far, the story line feels very confusing to me.
Six, be honest with each other, and send v to Xu Jianxi, right?
Very good and beautiful, I like to watch it.
What are you writing about? I can't even understand it
Will the author accept Yi Wenjun and Yueyao?
I was looking forward to it, but it seems my expectations were in vain.
I read the content of your book before you changed it, and I thought it was okay. Then you changed the book directly. I was still confused when I read it. After reading the introduction, I realized that you had changed the book, but you didn't change the introduction. Who else wants to harm you? If you don't show it if you have strength, then why do you want strength? Are you waiting to be annulled? The original one is not good, so you have to change it.
I think Li Changsheng in the Young White Horse is quite contradictory and feels a bit hypocritical. Since there is Penglai, there are people who need to guard the Four Poles. Why not train Ye Dingzhi? , Since you don't worship him as your teacher, why don't you teach him the Immortal Book, and Lei Meng Kill, etc., And keep it alive? Also, Xiao Ruofeng, since he doesn't want to be the emperor, why don't you train him and let him control the four extremes? Isn't he? Li Changsheng's talent is rated as top-notch. Just looking at Li Changsheng's pretense, I really haven't seen what he has done to cultivate, discover talents, resist and transport talents for the world and protect the world.
It's very messy, very messy. What is the outline of your writing? It's so chaotic. You just talk about breaking off the engagement.
This is something a human can write
If you don't have any ideas or logic, don't write if you can't write. Read more books.
It's too watery, the watery part can't be in the watery part









