Douluo, I Am Tang San's Sister
by Qian. Ink
About This Novel
It's a semi-fun article without tearing down the original CP. It's the first time I'm writing this, so I'll bear with you. The cover has been changed hehe.
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Official(17)Scraped 3d ago
Dear author:
Although your article is not decorated with gorgeous language, it impresses readers with its plain and true feelings. The sentences are smooth and coherent. The psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the material selection is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, the language is plain yet elegant, concise yet full of meaning, it can be called a model article! This plain article shows extraordinary literary skills. It can be said that every word is a masterpiece and every sentence is a classic. It has reached a height that is elusive for us. From an artistic point of view, this article still needs to be improved, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. Also, the use of punctuation marks is even more appropriate. After reading your article word for word, my heart can't calm down for a long time! How could there be such a penetrating article in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the world". After reading the article, I asked again: Can I add another chapter?
I hope I don't give him CP. Please author. I don't like her having CP. Men will only affect the speed of her drawing the sword. It's really annoying.
The author begs you to write more!
Author, please update more at a time, otherwise I won't read enough, and I really like this novel you wrote.
The plot is okay, but the writing needs to be improved. The dialogue between characters still has to use quotation marks, and there is no sense of substitution. It feels like a direct narration of a story.
I'm here now, I don't know if it's too late...
It's so beautiful. Come on, don't give up.
super nice
Very nice, I like it very much, I just hope the author will update it faster
Update Okay, update me quickly
The author will update soon! This novel is really good
Update, update, the author will update soon! This novel is so good (//∇//)
Update, okay? So well written. Love the author.
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Community(0)
Official(17)Scraped 3d ago
Dear author:
Although your article is not decorated with gorgeous language, it impresses readers with its plain and true feelings. The sentences are smooth and coherent. The psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the material selection is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, the language is plain yet elegant, concise yet full of meaning, it can be called a model article! This plain article shows extraordinary literary skills. It can be said that every word is a masterpiece and every sentence is a classic. It has reached a height that is elusive for us. From an artistic point of view, this article still needs to be improved, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. Also, the use of punctuation marks is even more appropriate. After reading your article word for word, my heart can't calm down for a long time! How could there be such a penetrating article in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the world". After reading the article, I asked again: Can I add another chapter?
I hope I don't give him CP. Please author. I don't like her having CP. Men will only affect the speed of her drawing the sword. It's really annoying.
The author begs you to write more!
Author, please update more at a time, otherwise I won't read enough, and I really like this novel you wrote.
The plot is okay, but the writing needs to be improved. The dialogue between characters still has to use quotation marks, and there is no sense of substitution. It feels like a direct narration of a story.
I'm here now, I don't know if it's too late...
It's so beautiful. Come on, don't give up.
super nice
Very nice, I like it very much, I just hope the author will update it faster
Update Okay, update me quickly
The author will update soon! This novel is really good
Update, update, the author will update soon! This novel is so good (//∇//)
Update, okay? So well written. Love the author.
