
Rise of Overlord
by Yogurt
About This Novel
New book: Imperial General, please pay attention! Su Yi believes that since he is a time traveler with a relatively awesome system, if he does not make trouble in this world, he will really be sorry for his status as a time traveler. "Thirty nautical miles away, four enemy super-dreadnought battleships were discovered!" Su Yi curled his lips, "Send eight Iowa-class super-dreadnought battleships!"
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Official(289)Scraped 19d ago
The death toll in the book is a little unreasonable.
It is an exaggeration to say that the Ziyue Empire lost 800,000 yuan in three days due to a sneak attack. In World War II, Germany blitzed the Soviet Union, annihilating 1 million Soviet troops and capturing 2 million in two months. You must know that Germany dispatched more than 5 million troops at that time, and the German army's equipment was almost the best in the world. Therefore, it is impossible for the Ziyue Empire, which was at the level of development before World War I, to annihilate 800,000 people in three days. I hope the author writes as reasonably as possible.
Please author improve
The overall feeling of the book is very good. The biggest flaw is the character and ability of the protagonist. He has no talent at all since he was in the Armed Police Academy and he can't walk without seeing a woman. By Chapter 123, I don't have the courage to read on. From the female reporter to the second princess to the third princess to the queen, she is a completely diaosi type. Diaosi can still counterattack. She holds the life and death of tens of millions of people (including civilians) and has no domineering attitude at all. That's all there is to say
The novel is very good and I like it very much, but the main character is a bit confused. I hope the author reads this review!
The novel is very good and I like it very much, but the behavior of the protagonist is a bit confusing! Of course, I'm not despising Diaosi, it's just that the protagonist's current status, strength, etc. Are attracting much attention. It's normal to joke around with your subordinates, after all, you are one of your own. But in front of outsiders, it is better not to show your true character. For example, as shown in Chapter 87 or 88, should a person with nearly a million soldiers and a super powerful fleet touch his nose when being questioned by someone (who won't say who, otherwise it will be a spoiler)? ! In this way, the protagonist seems to be ordered by someone behind the scenes! To be honest, if I hadn't known that he was the protagonist, I would have thought he was just a puppet just because he touched his nose when being questioned, as if he was weakening others! I'm not criticizing the author for writing this way, because I know writing is not easy, and I can understand it! But I still hope the author understands it! Just modify a few words! For those of you who haven't read it, I'll give you Amway's novel because it's really good, at least I like it!
This kind of subject is very good
The main body of this book is very good. I hope it won't have a harem of three thousand like the previous one, but just one or two female protagonists. ????????
If it were me, I would put the Wei family in a tribe full of system soldiers, so that they can't do anything bad. It's like the Wei family spent money to learn other ideas. Give it a try and experience it for yourself! Although there is a backbone of systematic soldiers in the local army, it is still troublesome! As long as they see an opportunity, they will cause trouble. It is better to stop them from the beginning!
What a fool,
I can't walk when I see a woman. The army is in civil strife and won't deal with it. If the woman says she won't deal with it, she won't deal with it. It's really stupid. You have become emperor and let a woman dictate what you do. You don't have any brains. You can write more than a dozen chapters about a few warships. It doesn't matter if you don't charge for the water. You pay for the chapters and pay for the water. You have no brain.
You don't want the protagonist to become Cao Cao, but you don't want to become Adou either! simile!
Although it is an invincible and exciting article, I hope the author can improve the IQ of the protagonist and write a good character, at least something like a hero in troubled times! I can't move when I see a beautiful woman. It's really uncomfortable to watch!
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The first few chapters of this book are okay, but when I meet a woman, I just lick her face. It feels disgusting, and I don't care about military affairs. The author licks the dog and the identification is completed.
I licked a beautiful woman when I saw one, and I was speechless. She was a reborn person, a piece of trash. And as I said before, it was impossible to serve the empire. But in the end, I agreed to any condition, and it was useless.
The Pluto-class battleship has a hull length of 333 meters and a hull width of 51 meters. It uses a nuclear power system and a fully electric propulsion device. It has four triple-mounted 508 mm caliber main guns and is equipped with an air defense firepower system covering medium, long and near distances. This class of battleship is the largest class of combat ship built in human history, with a predicted full load displacement of nearly 120,000 tons, which is several thousand tons larger than the displacement of the Ford class, the world's largest super aircraft carrier today. It would be great if there was a battleship like this
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Official(289)Scraped 19d ago
The death toll in the book is a little unreasonable.
It is an exaggeration to say that the Ziyue Empire lost 800,000 yuan in three days due to a sneak attack. In World War II, Germany blitzed the Soviet Union, annihilating 1 million Soviet troops and capturing 2 million in two months. You must know that Germany dispatched more than 5 million troops at that time, and the German army's equipment was almost the best in the world. Therefore, it is impossible for the Ziyue Empire, which was at the level of development before World War I, to annihilate 800,000 people in three days. I hope the author writes as reasonably as possible.
Please author improve
The overall feeling of the book is very good. The biggest flaw is the character and ability of the protagonist. He has no talent at all since he was in the Armed Police Academy and he can't walk without seeing a woman. By Chapter 123, I don't have the courage to read on. From the female reporter to the second princess to the third princess to the queen, she is a completely diaosi type. Diaosi can still counterattack. She holds the life and death of tens of millions of people (including civilians) and has no domineering attitude at all. That's all there is to say
The novel is very good and I like it very much, but the main character is a bit confused. I hope the author reads this review!
The novel is very good and I like it very much, but the behavior of the protagonist is a bit confusing! Of course, I'm not despising Diaosi, it's just that the protagonist's current status, strength, etc. Are attracting much attention. It's normal to joke around with your subordinates, after all, you are one of your own. But in front of outsiders, it is better not to show your true character. For example, as shown in Chapter 87 or 88, should a person with nearly a million soldiers and a super powerful fleet touch his nose when being questioned by someone (who won't say who, otherwise it will be a spoiler)? ! In this way, the protagonist seems to be ordered by someone behind the scenes! To be honest, if I hadn't known that he was the protagonist, I would have thought he was just a puppet just because he touched his nose when being questioned, as if he was weakening others! I'm not criticizing the author for writing this way, because I know writing is not easy, and I can understand it! But I still hope the author understands it! Just modify a few words! For those of you who haven't read it, I'll give you Amway's novel because it's really good, at least I like it!
This kind of subject is very good
The main body of this book is very good. I hope it won't have a harem of three thousand like the previous one, but just one or two female protagonists. ????????
If it were me, I would put the Wei family in a tribe full of system soldiers, so that they can't do anything bad. It's like the Wei family spent money to learn other ideas. Give it a try and experience it for yourself! Although there is a backbone of systematic soldiers in the local army, it is still troublesome! As long as they see an opportunity, they will cause trouble. It is better to stop them from the beginning!
What a fool,
I can't walk when I see a woman. The army is in civil strife and won't deal with it. If the woman says she won't deal with it, she won't deal with it. It's really stupid. You have become emperor and let a woman dictate what you do. You don't have any brains. You can write more than a dozen chapters about a few warships. It doesn't matter if you don't charge for the water. You pay for the chapters and pay for the water. You have no brain.
You don't want the protagonist to become Cao Cao, but you don't want to become Adou either! simile!
Although it is an invincible and exciting article, I hope the author can improve the IQ of the protagonist and write a good character, at least something like a hero in troubled times! I can't move when I see a beautiful woman. It's really uncomfortable to watch!
no
The first few chapters of this book are okay, but when I meet a woman, I just lick her face. It feels disgusting, and I don't care about military affairs. The author licks the dog and the identification is completed.
I licked a beautiful woman when I saw one, and I was speechless. She was a reborn person, a piece of trash. And as I said before, it was impossible to serve the empire. But in the end, I agreed to any condition, and it was useless.
The Pluto-class battleship has a hull length of 333 meters and a hull width of 51 meters. It uses a nuclear power system and a fully electric propulsion device. It has four triple-mounted 508 mm caliber main guns and is equipped with an air defense firepower system covering medium, long and near distances. This class of battleship is the largest class of combat ship built in human history, with a predicted full load displacement of nearly 120,000 tons, which is several thousand tons larger than the displacement of the Ford class, the world's largest super aircraft carrier today. It would be great if there was a battleship like this


















