Star Commander

Judging from the content of the chapters that have been updated, it can be imagined that the background set by the author is very similar to the stars and the sea. It is very vast and it is difficult to cover everything. It can also be seen that the author is still trying his best to depict it, but I personally feel that it still needs intensive work. The characterization is more vivid and energetic... I still prefer Qianxue😷 "This work is definitely a masterpiece. If you want to be a god, you need to make three points of it." Overall, I can only give a negative review of five stars, and a positive review of six stars must be continued. If the author can put in some hard work and correct it in detail... I feel like this comment of mine will help 'a rising tide lifts all boats?' ' [Personal opinion]

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Seeing Chapter 32 is true... A woman ruins a good book.

I'll go ahead and give it five stars. It's not bad, but I just don't like it. I like cold protagonists.

Why is this book classified in the military category? Isn't science fiction good? It's a pity that I didn't read it earlier. It wasted a few days of my time.

The plot and structure are great, but I would like some advice on characterization. It is actually a military academy, so it must look like a soldier. The characters cannot be described as too loose and without military discipline. Even if they are through the back door, they must have received training. When describing the heroine, it is recommended to write as seriously and responsibly as possible. If you continue writing now, if it is good, it can describe a growth process.

I like you, but that's all The wind blew and I passed by, that was enough From your world, I have no right to be stationed You are you, but I can't help myself because of you

Is the author from the Eve European and American server Chinese community? Or switch to the national server and go on an expedition to Europe and the United States?

I hope the author can stick to it.