No Crossing
About This Novel
This is a story that I have fantasized about since I was eleven or twelve years old. It is a revenge story of two heroines with "The Classic of Mountains and Seas" as the background. There is no fixed villain and no fixed righteousness. It may be relatively niche. But I want to give an explanation to my young self.
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Official(1)Scraped 4d ago
A little suggestion
The large text is very smooth, but one problem is that the paragraphs are a little too long. You may not notice it when you edit it, but when you actually read it, you will feel that your eyes are full of words and you are a little tired. I hope you can divide it into more paragraphs and make the number of words in each paragraph slightly smaller, so that the layout will be more beautiful. I am also a new author, and I hope to encourage you. Come on!
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Community(0)
Official(1)Scraped 4d ago
A little suggestion
The large text is very smooth, but one problem is that the paragraphs are a little too long. You may not notice it when you edit it, but when you actually read it, you will feel that your eyes are full of words and you are a little tired. I hope you can divide it into more paragraphs and make the number of words in each paragraph slightly smaller, so that the layout will be more beautiful. I am also a new author, and I hope to encourage you. Come on!
