Harry Potter: Dark Alchemy

I didn't look closely at how old the protagonist is before, but it's a bit weird for an adult to fall in love with a little girl who is only five or six years old. Also, it seems a bit awkward to write emotional scenes here (how should I put it, it feels like an idol drama (still a bad one)). Enn, and

As long as you do well in this industry of "exchange operations between personal resource space limitations and monetary funds", it will not be a problem to make tens of millions of dollars in three years. There used to be a big boss in this industry named Zhang Shihao, and his largest business earned 1.038 Billion.

Why did you punch Dumbledore? Have you read too many fanfics? The old bee and the white devil have distorted the image of Professor Dumbledore. He is really great. You cannot discredit him or completely deny him just because of some of his mistakes and choices. He is both pathetic and admirable. His parents died when he was young, his sister died accidentally due to him, brothers broke up, and lovers broke up. I have been alone for hundreds of years. When I was old, I most looked forward to receiving woolen socks as a Christmas gift. In fact, I longed for the warmth of family, experienced wars, and watched students and friends die one after another. In the end, in order to completely defeat Voldemort, he even planned his own death. You can't say that you hate him or anything, he's not doing it for his own selfish gain. Maybe he asked Snape to kill him, used Lily to ask Snape to protect Harry, and finally asked Voldemort to kill Harry, and thought he was cruel. If he wanted to get rid of the Dark Lord regardless of Harry's life or death, he wouldn't have to go around like this and just kill Harry himself instead of letting Voldemort kill him, because this way Harry would have a chance of survival. You can write that your protagonist is very powerful, but don't shady Professor Dumbledore to show how powerful your protagonist is. Of course, there is no requirement to make him a myth. He can really write about a person who has both evil and good sides.

As sticky as brown candy, but not delicious at all. She always pesters the male protagonist and wants to do anything. Moreover, I like this annoying person the most. Without her, this book will be better.

I think we should not write about this next. Wright turned dark in anger because he often ignored him, and became a new generation of Dark Lord. After Chang Chu was heartbroken, he became the Minister of Magic, and then the two fell in love and killed each other. [Emot=default,45/]

Not only is the heroine annoying, the protagonist is also a bitch! If it weren't for the heroine, your book would probably be liked by many people. I suggest you reopen it.

The writing is good. I hope the author will greatly increase the plot of Chang Chu and also hope that it will be a single female protagonist.

I don't like Chang Chu very much. . .

Just as precocious and domineering

I stopped watching when I saw that the heroine was her. I don't like this heroine.