
This is How You Become an Immortal
by Jack
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Official(79)Scraped 20d ago
Damn it, you can read the first few dozen chapters. After the 80th chapter, the protagonist is written as a bitch. It's really cheap.
Is it necessary for you to write the protagonist as a licking dog? He was picked up by others and despised like a dog, and he still licked him to see a doctor for that 38-year-old grandfather. In order to show off, the protagonist was written as too despicable. Farewell, poisoned to death.
This rubbish novel deserves to be thrown off the streets!
In the comment section of Qidian. Com, I mentioned the unreasonable aspects of this book and immediately got a permanent ban package. No one can write about a crossbow with 120,000 soft girl coins. The plot also rambles on for a long time without getting into the topic!
Put it this way.
I'm just here to cause trouble. But I didn't charge any money. The content of this book does not deserve his rating. I'll keep fucking him. You can still view it even if you delete the first 30 pictures. There's nothing you can say about it later. They were all called dogs. Are you still licking your face to treat other people's illnesses? Take on an apprentice. He also took in a tsundere girl. The point is to give what you want. Did you adopt an ancestor? Block the individual directly. I have many trumpets, so feel free to block them.
The heroine fails. Let me summarize the author's real identity. He is single. His writing style ranges from the third year of high school to college.
The first 80 chapters are as good as platinum, and the next few are just a stud, love is mindless, and there are some contradictions. For example, you killed a lot of people in another world, and you still have moral sentiments, but the author wrote about killing a lot of people, but you don't kill people in reality? Note: This is not an addiction, it is a habit. How many people haven't you killed since you got used to being simple and rough?
It would have been okay if I had read it 10 years ago. After all, there are still some good parts in it. But now, there are too many complaints. There are countless people who force themselves to show off and get slapped in the face. The protagonist has an aura of ridicule. From the very beginning when he gets a golden finger, until about 200 chapters, he encounters enemies when going out, encounters trouble when eating, and there are enemies wherever he goes. The only good thing is that not all enemies are 250. In reality, those second-generation people don't talk about tutoring problems. At least their IQ and knowledge are much better than ordinary people. After all, there are only a few who cause trouble at the slightest disagreement. The more senior yamen are, the more low-key they are. Rather than being brainless.
The writing is a bit nonsense
I clearly said before that I wouldn't accept many people because of insufficient resources, but they ended up accepting one after another. Just accept them. I won't say anything else. The key point is that they are all women. They plan to open a harem and serve as studs, so what you wrote is a bit boring.
disappointment
To be honest, taking Zhang Siting as his disciple was a big mistake. Why did the author want to imitate other people's concerns? Is it interesting to take on a tsundere girl? I'm quite disappointed to see this, and the content behind it is also uninteresting. I'm a virgin, but I don't think I'll have a relationship with a woman who's on a different path.
Anyway, reading novels is about yy, write it quickly, don't care what others say, there are many people who support you
If you don't want to watch it, don't watch it yourself, and don't affect other people who like to watch it.
Dog-licking articles are the same as cultivating immortality through big data
Do you really believe that this is the upper class? It turns out that when he was still a minor character, the family background of those group of friends helped Zhujiao a lot? The pig horns give various benefits to her when she has strength. There is also a woman who sometimes falls out of love with people in the two worlds, and then falls in love again. The woman's domineering aura is so strong that as an immortal cultivator, she is afraid that if she is more beautiful and has a stronger aura, even the Immortal Emperor will be sweating coldly. And there are so many beauties even if you don't move. Why don't there be a whole continent full of beauties without a male protagonist who goes from east to west without blinking an eye...
You don't need to read Chapter 50 anymore, it's just mind-numbing
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Official(79)Scraped 20d ago
Damn it, you can read the first few dozen chapters. After the 80th chapter, the protagonist is written as a bitch. It's really cheap.
Is it necessary for you to write the protagonist as a licking dog? He was picked up by others and despised like a dog, and he still licked him to see a doctor for that 38-year-old grandfather. In order to show off, the protagonist was written as too despicable. Farewell, poisoned to death.
This rubbish novel deserves to be thrown off the streets!
In the comment section of Qidian. Com, I mentioned the unreasonable aspects of this book and immediately got a permanent ban package. No one can write about a crossbow with 120,000 soft girl coins. The plot also rambles on for a long time without getting into the topic!
Put it this way.
I'm just here to cause trouble. But I didn't charge any money. The content of this book does not deserve his rating. I'll keep fucking him. You can still view it even if you delete the first 30 pictures. There's nothing you can say about it later. They were all called dogs. Are you still licking your face to treat other people's illnesses? Take on an apprentice. He also took in a tsundere girl. The point is to give what you want. Did you adopt an ancestor? Block the individual directly. I have many trumpets, so feel free to block them.
The heroine fails. Let me summarize the author's real identity. He is single. His writing style ranges from the third year of high school to college.
The first 80 chapters are as good as platinum, and the next few are just a stud, love is mindless, and there are some contradictions. For example, you killed a lot of people in another world, and you still have moral sentiments, but the author wrote about killing a lot of people, but you don't kill people in reality? Note: This is not an addiction, it is a habit. How many people haven't you killed since you got used to being simple and rough?
It would have been okay if I had read it 10 years ago. After all, there are still some good parts in it. But now, there are too many complaints. There are countless people who force themselves to show off and get slapped in the face. The protagonist has an aura of ridicule. From the very beginning when he gets a golden finger, until about 200 chapters, he encounters enemies when going out, encounters trouble when eating, and there are enemies wherever he goes. The only good thing is that not all enemies are 250. In reality, those second-generation people don't talk about tutoring problems. At least their IQ and knowledge are much better than ordinary people. After all, there are only a few who cause trouble at the slightest disagreement. The more senior yamen are, the more low-key they are. Rather than being brainless.
The writing is a bit nonsense
I clearly said before that I wouldn't accept many people because of insufficient resources, but they ended up accepting one after another. Just accept them. I won't say anything else. The key point is that they are all women. They plan to open a harem and serve as studs, so what you wrote is a bit boring.
disappointment
To be honest, taking Zhang Siting as his disciple was a big mistake. Why did the author want to imitate other people's concerns? Is it interesting to take on a tsundere girl? I'm quite disappointed to see this, and the content behind it is also uninteresting. I'm a virgin, but I don't think I'll have a relationship with a woman who's on a different path.
Anyway, reading novels is about yy, write it quickly, don't care what others say, there are many people who support you
If you don't want to watch it, don't watch it yourself, and don't affect other people who like to watch it.
Dog-licking articles are the same as cultivating immortality through big data
Do you really believe that this is the upper class? It turns out that when he was still a minor character, the family background of those group of friends helped Zhujiao a lot? The pig horns give various benefits to her when she has strength. There is also a woman who sometimes falls out of love with people in the two worlds, and then falls in love again. The woman's domineering aura is so strong that as an immortal cultivator, she is afraid that if she is more beautiful and has a stronger aura, even the Immortal Emperor will be sweating coldly. And there are so many beauties even if you don't move. Why don't there be a whole continent full of beauties without a male protagonist who goes from east to west without blinking an eye...
You don't need to read Chapter 50 anymore, it's just mind-numbing












