I'm Not Jia Gui

This novel is so funny! I watched it in the middle of the night My mother woke me up and gave me two big mouths

Underground Traffic Station is an Anti-Japanese War comedy. You can write it as a serious Anti-Japanese War drama without any sense of immersion. Otherwise, you should write about the Anti-Japanese War and don't join Underground Traffic Station. If you want to write about Underground Traffic Station, you should write it in a way that is funny and traps the Japanese.

The various names don't match the original work and look a bit awkward. . I don't understand, other fan fiction can use the original name, why can't you? ? ?

Those who have seen the underground transportation station should think it is okay. There are a few points 1. Get rid of the person who knows Jia Gui's background and bring in a dumb guy. He hasn't discussed it with the lurking personnel yet. 2 The so-called surrender certificate. If it were me, I wouldn't ask you to kill the Eighth Route Army. I would only ask you to kill all the innocent people in a village. 3 I don't know if it's because you don't make money writing this book. Jia Gui ended up with two wives.

There is nothing wrong with the concept, but the author tried very hard to describe the feeling of an underground transportation station, but was not very successful. If you have not seen it before, the sense of immersion is very poor. In fact, it might be interesting if it were written piece by piece, traveling to different worlds, and setting the character as a traitor. It can't be a big traitor, but it could be a sidekick around the big traitor. It feels very interesting.

The main character is okay at the beginning but becomes a bit bitchy later on, just be bitchy, but then he becomes like SB.

It's not boring to have a female protagonist, author.

Although it looks a bit confusing and confusing. But you can't take novels too seriously. This is quite interesting.

I want to give the author a paragraph. I hope the author will not write too messily. He can make it into a short story like the TV series, one after another. If you write it like this, the current words will be too messy. Moreover, there are too many swear words, which is a bit tired of aesthetics. It can be reduced appropriately. After all, where does Captain Jia's laughter come from, and the author has written too many stories, making the whole world very confusing. You can make a short story out of characters from other TV series, and then fit it into the outline of the entire underground transportation station. In short, come on! 😄

Can the protagonist be replaced by someone else? Jia Gui is a bit off-kilter.