Douluo: Wuhun Five Spirit Locks, I Am the King of Monsters

Currently I am planning to write more heroines and open a heroine building. Now I plan to include the Second Ice and Snow Emperor, Gu Yuena, Ye Lingling, and Shui Bing'er. If you have any ideas, please put them forward.

So far, things are going very well, and I will continue to stay true to my original aspiration. Then I would like to make some suggestions. Since the author chose the Five Spirit Lock and the Five Spirit King, he should also include another version of the Five Spirit King. The Five Spirit King is covered in metal. You can set this to absorb raw metal ore with five attributes. There are two of them in the original work, and you have to think of the other three by yourself, namely the Ice Divine Crystal and the Gold of Living Beings.

According to the original work, he couldn't have said it directly. But the author's way of shaping it is very problematic. I always feel that it has weakened Tang San's IQ a bit.

The protagonist is a pure good-for-nothing turtle man. Anyone can ride on the protagonist's head and still survive.

Let's not talk about anything else, just say that I missed those opportunities, so I didn't join the Spirit Hall. First tell me what opportunities you have, except for the Ice and Fire Eyes, which makes it seem as if you can't get anything after entering the Wuhun Palace. Secondly, your Wuhun is cracked enough. Isn't it turning you into an unjust superman? Ordinary people can only hunt powerful spirit beasts for about ten years at most. Also, can you please stop writing Tang San as such an idiot? It was all a trap and he was almost poisoned to death.

When I was 6 years old, I went to find a soul ring by myself without any equipment. I was chased and beaten by a soul beast. I began to think that I would not bring a weapon. After the battle, I would still have a thousand-year ring. If I become a time traveler, it is not something that ordinary people can absorb. After absorbing level 18? Okay, I'm starting to wonder if your IQ is 18. Later, I was given a big part of the plot where the Five Spirit Kings snatched the body. I finally got it back. I want to use martial arts to get the approval of the Five Spirit Kings. Then why don't you just make the protagonist the Five Spirit King? Why do you need such a fw protagonist? If you like writing this kind of big part so much, I suggest you go straight to the soul and send the female sadist avatar, eunuch, female, all-rounder, white lotus, green tea, male and female, and all the poisonous points. Anyway, you also like disgusting readers.

6 years old, an orphan, I have no problem with rejecting the invitation from Wuhun Palace. It can be said that I don't want to get involved with big forces too early, but I can't understand going to the Soul Hunting Forest to kill soul beasts alone.

The protagonist's character is a bit unsatisfactory. The Pig Man has desires and love, but the protagonist is like a piece of wood. He doesn't care about anyone and has no pursuits or dreams! Up until now, the protagonist is a girl and she's awesome! He is the Sigma Man! Return to the harem? It would be great to be able to take down the Snow Emperor with this character!

1. For example, Tang San's character has changed from being selfish and selfish to ridiculing people at all times. You can just find a passerby. In the original book, the guard Tang San wants to kill him directly, but now it turns into Tang San mocking the protagonist. Tang San's IQ is too weak. Lowering other people's IQ does not make you smart. Of course, I subjectively think this is AI. 2. Also, the original work uses a crystal ball to test, and the author directly uses the spiritual stone, which is obviously AI. Many AI testing talents will write this kind of test. 3. Because I felt that I would not get any opportunities by joining Wuhun Palace, I chose not to join. Isn't the biggest opportunity the opportunity of joining the Spirit Hall? You just said you were afraid that Tang Hao would kill you. This reason is too far-fetched and has no relevance at all. 4. The protagonist's character is a bit too cowardly, and anyone can take advantage of the protagonist. 5. He went to hunt for souls without knowing anything. The protagonist, who grew up eating a lot of food, didn't know anything about soul beasts, so he just went to hunt for souls and absorbed a thousand-year soul ring. 6. Then the soul ring is absorbed and the five spirit kings compete for the body. The transformation must be approved by the five spirit kings. After only reading a little bit, there are so many poisonous points. Douluo Dalu is just a serious love brain, which does not mean that everyone's IQ is not as good as Bian Mu. Bian Mu came and fried fish, weakening everyone to the point of being unintelligent, and it does not show that the protagonist is very smart.

The army is hungry. Come and eat. The protagonist is really useless🍬