Traveling Through the Heavens Simply

Probably only a pervert would want to watch it.

It's really, really ugly My head hurts after looking at it, the wind is blowing hard

What's the point of deleting the initial D? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Is the writing good? Is there something wrong with the protagonist? The brat has slept with all the women the protagonist has slept with, and the protagonist has given him a son to raise, and all the money he has given him! ! !

You're talking to yourself. You're telling me a story here. There's not even a single dialogue between the characters.

The writing is average, you went to Shendiao, I don't know why Xiao Longnu didn't get the red pill, no wonder you are so good, you don't even know the path to castration? And play a ball

You need to improve your writing style. Like, like, like, like.

All I can say is that three stars is already pretty good, and you don't even write it like this in your journal; you'd better not write it after you finish writing it here, really. The writing is so poor. I don't feel like I've made much progress in the future.

Speechless. Which person are you speaking in? It gives me a headache and sounds embarrassing There is no sense of substitution. And your pig's feet can actually return to modern times? Forget it, the question is what kind of thing is written back in modern times😎

It feels a bit verbose, like some things, like a junior high school composition, large sections can be deleted.