Beast Control: Starting Contract with Panda Liquor Sword Fairy
About This Novel
10 points of soul power, full soul power innately? This is? Time travel? "Ding! The administrator account has been activated!" "The spirit detection technique has been activated." "The hundred-fold skill effect is now activated." "The decomposition system of all things and the universal synthesis system are opening." This is the story of Gou planning and taking his GM account to a world where everything in the world can transform into spirits and become a spiritual master.
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Official(13)Scraped 11d ago
I've just read three chapters, and I'll tell you my feelings.
The setting is okay, the introduction, and the title of the book are okay, but I feel like I'm not sure about the three golden chapters. The author has a few suggestions. When I read a book, I only need the introduction and title to attract me, and the first few pages just lay out the worldview and background, and then I can continue reading. But for the first one, the image of the protagonist is not established at the beginning, and there are too many inner dialogues, which greatly affects the development of the story. I think we should focus on things, first clearly introduce the world view, system, and golden fingers, and then express the protagonist through some daily life; the second emotional line is added too early. Although there is the setting of first love in the past life, the extent of the relationship in the past life and what kind of person the heroine is are not shown. , There is a staring plot at the beginning, which feels very irritating to readers, and it is not unreasonable, but I think there is no need to write this. It would be better to write more about the protagonist's first reaction and coping thoughts when arriving in a different world. Although there is no need to talk about some conspiracy theories, this is a strange world after all. After accepting the identity of time travel, there will definitely be some actions, so as to establish the image of the protagonist. Above, thanks to the author, I saved it on my bookshelf first.
I hope the heroine can be more powerful. After all, she is a heroine, so she has to be a little special. . Don't weaken the heroine's abilities too much. .
If you don't like stallion stories, you either don't want a female protagonist or just have a female protagonist. . .
The protagonist's first encounter with the spirit was so cute. . . And it is also very powerful, but it is still very weak now. .
No way, the author abandoned the article, so sad
I feel like the author's writing is very good. Don't give up on yourself.
How to write the first picture of Douluo Dalu
Is it a typo?
How are levels and growth levels divided?
Which chapter is it in? Why didn't I see it? I haven't started after reading more than ten chapters.
Very pretty
What's going on with the latest chapter? ? Wrong message?
Some time ago, there was a girl who liked me, named Zhou Yang...
The dialogue is a bit childish, but the rest is okay
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Official(13)Scraped 11d ago
I've just read three chapters, and I'll tell you my feelings.
The setting is okay, the introduction, and the title of the book are okay, but I feel like I'm not sure about the three golden chapters. The author has a few suggestions. When I read a book, I only need the introduction and title to attract me, and the first few pages just lay out the worldview and background, and then I can continue reading. But for the first one, the image of the protagonist is not established at the beginning, and there are too many inner dialogues, which greatly affects the development of the story. I think we should focus on things, first clearly introduce the world view, system, and golden fingers, and then express the protagonist through some daily life; the second emotional line is added too early. Although there is the setting of first love in the past life, the extent of the relationship in the past life and what kind of person the heroine is are not shown. , There is a staring plot at the beginning, which feels very irritating to readers, and it is not unreasonable, but I think there is no need to write this. It would be better to write more about the protagonist's first reaction and coping thoughts when arriving in a different world. Although there is no need to talk about some conspiracy theories, this is a strange world after all. After accepting the identity of time travel, there will definitely be some actions, so as to establish the image of the protagonist. Above, thanks to the author, I saved it on my bookshelf first.
I hope the heroine can be more powerful. After all, she is a heroine, so she has to be a little special. . Don't weaken the heroine's abilities too much. .
If you don't like stallion stories, you either don't want a female protagonist or just have a female protagonist. . .
The protagonist's first encounter with the spirit was so cute. . . And it is also very powerful, but it is still very weak now. .
No way, the author abandoned the article, so sad
I feel like the author's writing is very good. Don't give up on yourself.
How to write the first picture of Douluo Dalu
Is it a typo?
How are levels and growth levels divided?
Which chapter is it in? Why didn't I see it? I haven't started after reading more than ten chapters.
Very pretty
What's going on with the latest chapter? ? Wrong message?
Some time ago, there was a girl who liked me, named Zhou Yang...
The dialogue is a bit childish, but the rest is okay
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