People in Kama Taj Have Countless Talent Entries

I couldn't bear it until I read Chapter 5. I couldn't bear your weird sentence about "the baby's smile is as bright as a flower. Are you crazy?" Don't you feel embarrassed yourself? Are weird words used to describe it?

In other books, the protagonist tries to outwit others. This book is about the main character being deceived by others😈 The protagonist of this book: I am the best and the most criticized, but I fall behind at critical moments. But then again. The theme, world system and power system are all very good. The writing is okay, but at the critical moment, the protagonist is like a villain who has been dehumanized. He talks too much and thinks too much and then stretches his crotch. It is really unbearable.

Seeing that 153 couldn't stand it anymore, he really tried to force him to surrender. Knowing that Riven had discovered something that could allow mutants to evolve for the second time, he asked him to take him back to the Brotherhood headquarters and strengthen Magneto. Then he felt that Magneto was too strong and disgusting. I was speechless to force him to surrender.

Your setting is really outrageous. You can change someone else's destiny and upgrade their destiny points, but it still has a buckle? I killed an enemy, had a negative impact on him, and deducted all the 2,000 destiny points I had worked so hard to save? Just outrageous.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on＾0＾~

The writing is really not that good. It has 700,000 words, excluding repeated character attributes and entry explanations. It would be great to have 300,000 words. And he was very verbose, always emphasizing how strong and powerful he was. He would fight every enemy for two or three chapters. How could he be so strong?

The writing is too vague, the combat power is unclear, and the MV is incompletely understood.

There are too many settings that have nothing to do with Marvel. They all come for Marvel. When Marvel ends, you can write about TVA-related things and don't keep describing irrelevant things.

One of the greatest pleasures of reading novels is watching the protagonist constantly defeat monsters and upgrade, then switch to more powerful monsters and then upgrade again. The excitement is that the protagonist is often almost defeated, but every time he can overcome it through various means. The most ridiculous way to write it is that the protagonist has been playing against the ceiling boss since he was a little trash, which is stupid and boring! Throughout the story, you brag about how awesome the boss is and how incompetent the protagonist is. Do you think that kind of powerlessness is what readers want to read? Or where is the fun? Your book is garbage that creates bad emotions for readers! Poisonous weed!

The story is good, but the writing is rubbish! The entire text expresses one meaning (there are always unscrupulous people who want to harm me). The protagonist's psychological activities account for at least half of the entire text. He shocks himself at every turn, which is disgusting to watch.