
Nirvana Card Starting from Naruto
by Love Reading Books All My Life
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Jiraiya, you can no longer keep up with the times! In this world, only Lu Nie can understand me. --Orochimaru.
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Official(93)Scraped 3d ago
Too smart
Ninjas from other countries came to steal your things, and then they were accidentally injured due to improper operation. Your first reaction was not to scold the other party, but to give them your invention project? What is the effect of proactively giving opportunities to the opponent just to test the effect? What kind of stupid plot, without even digging a hole? Simply giving it to others, although it has certain side effects, is very effective. The result is to test the data, and the author can write this kind of plot. . . Haha
I saw Chapter 122 and gave up the book.
The reason is that there is no distinction between the main character and the defender. There is no description of the protagonist's ability, nor the various research and design principles of the protagonist. It seems that it just appeared. For example, how was the healing talisman studied? When was the study conducted and what was the purpose of the study? I can't just know these skills and develop a healing talisman at a lower cost than others? Up to now, the protagonist's ability is still vague. The protagonist has the ability to speak black words inexplicably. It seems that his status is no longer Orochimaru's apprentice, but the leader of the scientific research institute. Then there is the inexplicable way to get close to the Akatsuki trio, such as providing healing charms. It doesn't make sense. It talks about using Konan's paper shield to make money, but it doesn't include the protagonist keeping the secret of the healing charm in order to make money. Besides, as research becomes stronger and stronger, it shouldn't be easier to make money. Besides, Xiaonan is not a subordinate, and the majority of the profits are still owned by Xiao's organization. Then he saved three people and worked hard to help improve his combat power. He didn't describe the protagonist's combat power. He seemed to be invincible. Why did he write this?
What a lump
Let me give you an example. An American spy came to steal China's Dongfeng missile technology. The American spy was accidentally injured by an infrared ray set up. An American representative came over and said that you are hurting our people. China said that it is our fault. We not only have to compensate you, but also give you Dongfeng technology. This is what the author wrote. If you want to read it, just read it. The thoughts and behaviors expressed by the author are probably like this.
The author was too toxic in the early stage. He didn't check the information. He didn't even read the suggestions he gave. He didn't check it himself. He still didn't change it. He didn't change it. The problem is that he didn't check it himself. If you don't believe what the readers said, just check it yourself.
How should I put it, the idea is quite novel.
Disadvantages: The description of the battle is too childish. It is just a large-scale discussion in the school. Lessons were learned later. There are basically no battle scenes for the protagonist. I studied it for a long time and it does not reflect the growth of the protagonist. In the later period, too many elements of the God of Death were mixed in, and it became the God of Death, Naruto. It was not a system, and it was hard to say who could defeat whom. Seeing the appearance of the void in the cursed seal, the element of death began to appear, such as the void, the power of the void. The previous Ghost Road was okay, it was used as a reference to develop new skills, but the power of the void appeared directly afterwards.
Generally speaking, it feels quite bland. The problem is just plain. I just let Danzo keep jumping and don't fight back. There isn't even much prevention.
It feels a bit incongruous for a protagonist who is engaged in scientific research to bring a data-adding point system.
Still not updated?
It's been almost a month, has he entered the palace? ? ? ? ? ? ?
No, a new book with only 170 chapters, how did you spend these 7 hours or 13 hours? Study it word by word?
It's so frustrating, Danzo keeps causing trouble, and I don't just kill him if I have the ability.
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Official(93)Scraped 3d ago
Too smart
Ninjas from other countries came to steal your things, and then they were accidentally injured due to improper operation. Your first reaction was not to scold the other party, but to give them your invention project? What is the effect of proactively giving opportunities to the opponent just to test the effect? What kind of stupid plot, without even digging a hole? Simply giving it to others, although it has certain side effects, is very effective. The result is to test the data, and the author can write this kind of plot. . . Haha
I saw Chapter 122 and gave up the book.
The reason is that there is no distinction between the main character and the defender. There is no description of the protagonist's ability, nor the various research and design principles of the protagonist. It seems that it just appeared. For example, how was the healing talisman studied? When was the study conducted and what was the purpose of the study? I can't just know these skills and develop a healing talisman at a lower cost than others? Up to now, the protagonist's ability is still vague. The protagonist has the ability to speak black words inexplicably. It seems that his status is no longer Orochimaru's apprentice, but the leader of the scientific research institute. Then there is the inexplicable way to get close to the Akatsuki trio, such as providing healing charms. It doesn't make sense. It talks about using Konan's paper shield to make money, but it doesn't include the protagonist keeping the secret of the healing charm in order to make money. Besides, as research becomes stronger and stronger, it shouldn't be easier to make money. Besides, Xiaonan is not a subordinate, and the majority of the profits are still owned by Xiao's organization. Then he saved three people and worked hard to help improve his combat power. He didn't describe the protagonist's combat power. He seemed to be invincible. Why did he write this?
What a lump
Let me give you an example. An American spy came to steal China's Dongfeng missile technology. The American spy was accidentally injured by an infrared ray set up. An American representative came over and said that you are hurting our people. China said that it is our fault. We not only have to compensate you, but also give you Dongfeng technology. This is what the author wrote. If you want to read it, just read it. The thoughts and behaviors expressed by the author are probably like this.
The author was too toxic in the early stage. He didn't check the information. He didn't even read the suggestions he gave. He didn't check it himself. He still didn't change it. He didn't change it. The problem is that he didn't check it himself. If you don't believe what the readers said, just check it yourself.
How should I put it, the idea is quite novel.
Disadvantages: The description of the battle is too childish. It is just a large-scale discussion in the school. Lessons were learned later. There are basically no battle scenes for the protagonist. I studied it for a long time and it does not reflect the growth of the protagonist. In the later period, too many elements of the God of Death were mixed in, and it became the God of Death, Naruto. It was not a system, and it was hard to say who could defeat whom. Seeing the appearance of the void in the cursed seal, the element of death began to appear, such as the void, the power of the void. The previous Ghost Road was okay, it was used as a reference to develop new skills, but the power of the void appeared directly afterwards.
Generally speaking, it feels quite bland. The problem is just plain. I just let Danzo keep jumping and don't fight back. There isn't even much prevention.
It feels a bit incongruous for a protagonist who is engaged in scientific research to bring a data-adding point system.
Still not updated?
It's been almost a month, has he entered the palace? ? ? ? ? ? ?
No, a new book with only 170 chapters, how did you spend these 7 hours or 13 hours? Study it word by word?
It's so frustrating, Danzo keeps causing trouble, and I don't just kill him if I have the ability.
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Reasonable style, no heroine, evil scientist template



Naruto scientific research article, food and grass Jiraiya, you can no longer keep up with the times! In this world, only Lu Nie can understand me. --Orochimaru.




The protagonist, Goldfinger, is Nirvana's research talent + positive feedback on results. The more recognized the results are, the better the feedback. Currently, he is a scientific researcher who helps Orochimaru become the Fourth Hokage. The disadvantage is that he can write one chapter a day. Overall it's okay, recommended.




The protagonist of the scientific research department takes the route of becoming an apprentice to Orochimaru. The cheating is moderate, the pace is good, and the writing is not bad. It's cool and the plot arrangement is reasonable. Very excellent scientific research Naruto fanfic













