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This book is the only one I have been following for several years. I am looking forward to the next one.

Water, I can write 20 chapters on a small matter. It's boring. The harem is half-covered and neurotic. Either be dedicated or decisive, and engage in a warm, greasy otaku style. Arranging for a senior to travel through time, it's baffling to find out who is the protagonist. Or do you want a protagonist and a mistress? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? It tastes so disgusting that it makes me sick to death. Early 4 stars. What level of garbage will it be in the later period? It's not as interesting as Lao Bai's novel, and it's not as exciting as Xiao Bai's novel. The writing is too repetitive. Seriously inconsistent with expectations. The protagonist's character is a mystery and there is no sense of substitution. All kinds of strange plans. Incomprehensible motives. I don't want to be a player, I want to be a servant. Crazy? Is this a player traveling through the game world, or is it a person from the game world traveling through it? ? ? ? The author is still complacent about not knowing the so-called chuuni style. Overall, it's disappointing. Two words, garbage.

It's a good book. The author's writing style is fresh, the characters are well-depicted, the plot is clear, the main line is well-defined, and the artistic appeal is strong. It is as thought-provoking and meaningful as "The Ghost Exorcist" I have read. I hope everyone will support the author and support genuine reading.

I have seen almost 700 pictures, and I can't figure out whether it is the people around me or the princess who is more important. It's like licking a dog. Everyone else followed him all the way here, and it was like licking a dog when they came to the princess. I really can't understand it, and after working on it for a long time, what did he change? He obviously said that he would follow his own ideas, but he still followed the princess's ideas no matter what the princess said. I really don't understand. So is what I said earlier a fart? The problem lies with the nobility. After working on it for a long time, the problem of the nobility has not been solved. Even if the little prince becomes the king, it will be useless if the problem of the nobility is not solved. And now with his capital and reputation, there is no problem at all in establishing himself as the king. At this time, he is still like a licking dog! I'm not saying this is bad, but no matter how good he is, it's not as important as the people around him. Are the people around him who fought with him inferior to this princess?

The experience in the game is completely useless, the writing is immature and full of words, and the protagonist is very incompetent. Alas, it was also said to be a fantasy epic.

There was a man who cheated on his wife during marriage, and when his mistress became pregnant, he was forced to divorce his original wife. On the day of the divorce, his wife cooked his favorite fried pork with garlic sprouts, and then the two went to the Civil Affairs Bureau to get divorced. The man happily got married to his mistress, changed cities, changed contact information, and went to have a baby. But it turned out that she was just interested in his money, and after a few months of getting along, they took away the man's money, and even the pregnancy was fake. The down-and-out man wandered around and came to his ex-wife's house. Before he could knock on the door, his ex-wife happened to take out the trash and saw him. Seeing his haggard face, she sighed and led him in. She asked him if he had eaten. The man could only smile bitterly. His ex-wife looked at his appearance and didn't ask any more questions. She went into the kitchen and soon brought out a bowl of rice and a plate of fried pork with garlic sprouts. After dinner, his ex-wife told him that the light bulb in the bathroom was broken and asked him to go to the hardware store to buy one. The man's heart started to heat up. He had been fooled by lard before, but his ex-wife was truly sincere towards him. So he happily went to the hardware store, and on the way back, he also stopped by the flower shop. The girl in the flower shop looked at him and asked him if he had just moved here. He smiled and answered the address. The girl was shocked and blurted out: Isn't that a haunted house? The man asked inexplicably what he meant, and the girl dug out a few months old newspapers: several buildings, several units, several oddities, a malicious robbery, the hostess was cut into pieces in the bathroom, blood blocked the leak, and the residents downstairs accidentally discovered it. The man couldn't believe it. He took the flowers and ran home. He lingered at the door for a long time and finally entered. He called his ex-wife's name several times but no one answered. He looked around and found plates and bowls with green fur in the pool. The man felt nauseous and wondered what he had just eaten. He suddenly remembered that the food just tasted weird. On the day of the divorce a few months ago, he also ate rice and stir-fried pork with garlic sprouts. The man was frightened for a while and was so scared that he didn't even dare to vomit and rush out the door. At this time, the light in the bathroom suddenly flashed a few times, and a gust of wind rolled the door shut. The inexplicable wind picked up the rose petals that the man had fled in panic and threw to the ground. Someone vaguely sighed.

I lost my heart after reading the first 10 chapters. Disorganized and clumsy.

1. The ancient divine book is really full of flaws now. Since you can predict the future through time travel, the most important thing you should do is to maintain or interfere with the timeline as little as possible and let the plot follow the original timeline. Only then can you grab as many treasures in your memory as possible. Otherwise, there will be too many uncertainties and the timeline will become messy. 2. The writing style is too middle-of-the-road, and sometimes inexplicably self-motivated and passionate. Here is a paragraph from the original text: "Brando, if you take this path, you may have to face the local nobles with deep roots in Eruin, including the five powerful Grand Dukes in history, even as proud as the regent. Her Highness the Princess must also choose to compromise in front of them." The general meaning of the follow-up is that you want to save this decadent empire, and you want to be the enemy of the whole world. This inner monologue is really embarrassing. I am not thinking about you as a time traveler, looking at the world from a God's perspective, why you must be tied to the corrupt Eruin to death. 3. Some settings are too random. When I read the article, I never understood what the protagonist relied on to kill enemies by leapfrogging. The protagonist can instantly kill enemies several levels below him with one sword. Enemies that are more than ten levels above him take half a day to kill the protagonist and can be counter-killed. For example, the silver-level Ebdon, who was famous in the original timeline, was defeated by the protagonist in a duel. Is this level so good? According to the online game settings, when both sides have almost the same equipment, the level will be crushed. Come on, shouldn't you kill the protagonist with a few swords? The protagonist doesn't even have armor at the time, and the protagonist says that he can back up his plank, so he can dodge all the boss's moves with low physical ability. You are not traveling through a rigid game world. The boss attacks you according to routines. Since it is like the real world, the boss's attack is difficult to predict. Based on the physical attributes, you can't see clearly his starting hand. What plank do you have to back up, or your brain can't react and your body can't react. The most outrageous thing is that the protagonist can remember almost every detail of the world in the original timeline. Who can play video games to a very advanced stage and still remember every location and detail of the storage points of all early transitional equipment? You can arrange any system function for the protagonist and it will not be such a show. Plot flaws: Many places are really awkward. Logically speaking, as a time traveler, you should be more cautious when you don't know whether the time travel world is exactly the same as the game world. Don't expect to be like Bone King who is already maxed out and still explore the world cautiously. You At least a low-level militiaman should be smarter in the early stage. First, he should hide and look for the treasures in his memory to increase his strength. If the protagonist says, I will seek death, that is, if I don't understand the world and forcibly change the original plot, do you have the ability to load files or are you infinitely reborn? The follow-up of how to lead refugees to engage in guerrilla warfare behind enemy lines is really abstract. There are only fifty cavalry that can fight. They can move freely among tens of thousands of undead army. Just like ghosts, a gargoyle scout can make the enemy complete without any reaction. Moreover, this plot is really a bit tense. The harsh atmosphere is not even written out. Just like leading refugees on an outing, there are always women, old and young, among the refugees. They are all like trained soldiers. There is no trace of the chain in several battles. In order to promote the development of the plot line, they knew that they would be captured but still went to Lidenburg, and then escaped from prison. The most outrageous thing is that the protagonist and one of his subordinates directly entered the noble fortress. He didn't know the master configuration around the noble at all. For a sword that he handed over with his brain, my mother, I didn't regard the guards as human beings at all. The nobles also killed them when they asked. It's not that the nobles can't kill, but You broke the law in such a high-profile manner and slapped the nobles in the face. Even if the protagonist is an ant that is insignificant to the entire country, it is still insignificant if the noble forces want to punish you. Moreover, when the undead army attacks, you have to contain a large number of guards in the city. Are you sure you are not objectively a traitor? It would make it easier to destroy the city so that all the insiders would die, right? . .

"I swear a sage's oath under this sword! I swear to lead my people - to lead them away from strife and killing, and away from the arrogance and greed of the imperial nobles; I swear that in order not to repeat this cold-blooded mistake of history, I will make the nobles of this new kingdom abide by the knight's rules. Spirit - just and strict, upright and brave, merciful and generous, I make this oath and will abide by it for the rest of my life! If one day, the Eruin nobles forget their duties, then this sword will return to where it came from and will no longer protect this country. "

The front part is good, but the description between territory management and personal adventure is not done well and is even messy! The description of territory management is not deep enough. This is a war-themed book, and the author yourself also explains the importance of personal power in the book! So this part of the description is a very important part of the entire plot, but the description in the book is not deep enough! You often remind it of its importance in the book, but you don't describe it deeply enough! Author, because this is a book you wrote yourself, you understand many things yourself, but you didn't write them out! In this case, readers don't know. Therefore, it is useless for you to know it yourself. You need to let the readers know that, author, what you have not written is not important to you, but it is important to the readers. Otherwise, the readers will not know why!