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Regardless of whether there are multiple female protagonists or single female protagonists, you must be more decisive in writing relationships, and don't be like a loser who licks a dog... When you meet a woman, you will lose your wits and be manipulated.

The female version of Oriental Invincible is a bit indifferent, especially the one with the surname Yu that took the photo

Overall, it's actually pretty good. After all, the novel is just to kill time, and Zhu Tianwen must have various loopholes that won't satisfy everyone. But your ending is a real failure. The passing level suddenly dropped to unqualified. Even if you write that the protagonist ends up dying of old age because he has no aura in the main world and cannot practice cultivation, it is still better than this thing now.

In this ending, everything the protagonist did became the wedding dress of the mastermind behind the scenes. Xiaoyaozi has lived for thousands of years. You are a martial arts warrior. You have made me a fairy. You are rubbish.

If you don't want to write about it, you can let the protagonist return to modern times and just briefly talk about it? Your ending really poisoned me.

The protagonist in it is an idealist. If you don't have a family to support you, you are useless. I thought you were driving Feitian Wudi and died, but this is the result. Then don't talk about your ideals. Besides, the world belongs to the Lao Zhu family, not the common people.