Mr. Wizard in the Main God Space

I thought of three myself "Non-Mainstream Main God Space" "I always feel like the Lord God is targeting me" "On How the Lord God Forces People to Become Dirty Guys"

The combat power and settings are a bit broken, and I can't control the development.

On the one hand, I feel that the appearance of the heroine (yes, Mina) is too abrupt, and her language and behavior are somewhat inconsistent with the original character design. On the other hand, the insertion of the part about "The Day of Wrath" is too abrupt, which may cause reading difficulties for some readers who have not read it or do not understand it. Rest assured, there must be elements of "The Day of Wrath", but the insertion method must be natural. In addition, I feel that the title of the book is not too domineering. Do you have any suggestions?

In order to connect all realms, people and objects in the main god space have added "universal characteristics". The so-called "universal features" are to fuzzify some underlying parameters and rules to improve overall compatibility. In addition to the free "universal transformation" when you become a reincarnation, if you want to perform universal transformation, you need to pay the corresponding "blank card" and "universal point"

First, the protagonist's character is not likable. When book friends read the book, they will look at the protagonists: the career type, who specializes in career; the love type, who loves more than anything else; the magician, who does whatever he wants but does not violate the rules; the ascetic, who is unkind and regards all things as stupid dogs. Your protagonist is more of a lunatic type, going crazy every day, occasionally going mad, learning to take knowledge as the truth as a wizard, but the protagonist is always desperate, impulsive, and unplanned. You might as well set the protagonist to be a berserker from the beginning! If someone provokes you, fight, use force to suppress individual battles, and play the finale in team battles. Doesn't this look better than the current character? . . . Second, the writing is not done well. I have read Three Worlds, and there is a reason why it has not been published for nearly a hundred chapters. The protagonist, the space, the original character, the power, and even the protagonist's momentary imagination are all written down in big letters. What's the use? When writing a novel, shouldn't it be written from the perspective of the protagonist, slowly, bit by bit, and naturally? Is it necessary to start in such a hurry? Is it annoying to write down all the other information on the background board when you meet an original character? We are here to see the main character's outfit "羶畐". Your background information should be as concise as possible. It is best to cover it in a few strokes. Especially when you return to the 039 base world, do you need to write it in such detail? Standing in line to buy sandworm spices, you wrote most of the chapter! ! ! . . . If the new book isn't on the shelves, I won't give it a star. If you've heard it, think about how to write it. If you haven't heard it, just delete it. Just purple.