Beginning of Return

Rating: 8 points. Story classification: late apocalypse, supernatural powers. The story takes place in a soul-pierced child who was once innocent and cute and lived in his grandfather's cradle. But the apocalyptic atmosphere forced Grandpa to let him choose his own future. And he is a time traveler. On the way to choose the future, in order to uncover the mystery of his previous life, his choice is! Struggle or peace? Evaluation: It feels a little late to be introduced. Both Goldfinger and Time Traveler came a little late. (This is probably an important reason why I couldn't sign the contract. I didn't write much in the first chapter.) In terms of writing, there are also problems. There are many typos and wrong sentences that need to be strengthened. The subject matter is a bonus. The difficult survival in the apocalypse, the awakening of powers, the help of the system, and the warm daily life are quite moving and attractive. Overall, if you don't suggest that the author's writing has strayed. This apocalyptic novel is worth reading, both in terms of emotion and plot, it is quite interesting. Finally, make a cover.